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Amazing Grace Correction
Amazing Grace Correction
Brycen Lamb
Professor Morean
English Composition II
Amazing Grace
The song “amazing grace” by Alan Jackson and Jojo/Ozzy both give a similar message of “love
and compassion to all”. Alan Jacksons version of Amazing Grace is slow and gentle. As for Jojo/Ozzy’s
version is more upbeat and ongoing. Both are the same songs and lyrics, but they each have a different
approach of telling the story. Both still giving that common message of “love and compassion to all”. I
like to look at the tune of these two songs. They are different and throughout them you can see a
different story being told. Have you ever been in that dark low place to where you didn’t think you could
In Jojo/Ozzy’s version it starts out with some bongo drums. The tune starts out at a rising pace
and continues to rise throughout the song. Then focuses the attention on Ozzy the main singer. Ozzy
sings “I once was lost but now am found” portraying that Ozzy has been in a dark place, but with love
and compassion he has come out of it. Ozzy then sings “was blind but now I see” Telling the audience
that he is no longer in this dark period. There is now light and a reason to go on and Ozzy has found it!
The camera then focuses on Jojo singing “no matter what you’ve done or where you’ve been or who ya
are”. Really going into depth about the love in this song. Jojo portrays the idea that it doesn’t matter
who you used to be. As Ozzy sings “saved a wretch like me” meaning that you are no longer strayed you
have found your way and now you will continue in that path. Jojo/Ozzy’s song is preformed outside with
the wind gently blowing in the grass, as the sun beats down on the savannah. You can hear the sound of
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the bongos as they continue to sing the song. The tune is very upbeat and cheerful. With Ozzy being an
older man and Jojo a young boy. It portrays a feeling that this “love and compassion to all” applies to
every age both old and young. By the end of the music video Jojo a white boy meets up with Ozzy a
black man. This is shown as they harmonize and sing together that it doesn’t matter what race you are.
Everyone comes in and harmonizes together as one and all are glad that they are saved.
In Alan Jacksons version it starts out with a piano player with Alan standing alone in a dark
church. The piano starts playing and Alan gently begins to sing very slowly “Amazing Grace how sweet
the sound”. There is a very slow and calming tune that is distributed. The low light that starts out this
video is portrayed in a way of relief. The verse “was lost but now I see” is showing a sense of compassion
that you now can see the right way. There once was darkness, but now there is light and a correct way
to go as it is portrayed here. The camera focuses on Alan as he is the only singer slowly singing this song
in this dark empty church. This allows the audience of this video to have a personal connection with
what is being sung. Throughout the video a little bit more light is displayed, as more musicians and
singers slowly back Alan up. All of the singers joining shows compassion that they are there for their
friend and will support him. Also expressing love towards one another. By the end of the song all of the
musicians and singers are on one accord as they gracefully represent this songs meaning of “love and
compassion to all”. The room gets brighter as they all harmonize together.
Both songs have the same approach of pathos being the main appeal. In Jojo/Ozzy’s song the
camera focuses on the young boy and older man as they sing the song together both sharing different
verses. During the song there is a strong upbeat tune that really grabs the audience’s attention into
finding out what’s going on. They use this with two different races to show a loving and supportive
theme. Both of the singers meeting at the end shows a strong sense of pathos. Jojo/Ozzy’s song is
preformed outside with lots of light which shows more of an exciting position. Alan Jacksons song we
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see the same theme of Pathos. The tune of his version is much slower and less cheerful, but we still see
that overall theme of “love and compassion to all”. The camera focuses on Alan as he is in a dark empty
church giving more of a dramatic scene. As the song goes on the room gets brighter giving the perfect
portrayal of pathos. By the end of the song all the musicians and singers play and sing together. Bringing
in that harmony and self-awareness. Along with support and care for each other.
They both are clearly different song as Jojo/Ozzy’s song was filmed in an open savannah that
brought forth lots of light. As for Alan Jackson’s song was in a dark church. Jojo/Ozzy’s song was more
upbeat and cheerful, as for Alan’s song was more calming and in a way cherishing. Although these songs
have their differences it is very clear that they both share the same message of the song “Amazing
Grace”. A song of freedom and care that portrays a theme of “love and compassion to all”. Both songs
overall show that theme of pathos. Even though they are completely different styles.
Work Cited:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogxLNlgKM8c
Jojo/Ozzy’s Version;
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ysT9oNjtVYU
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