Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Intro:
Exemplar:
This thesis statement tells the reader how the paper will
be organized:
* causes of air pollution
* effects of air pollution
* solutions to air pollution
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Body paragraphs:
Example:
(This essay was about the causes, effects, and solutions of water
pollution. Each body paragraph focused on one particular area of
water pollution.)
1. There are millions of factories all over the world that provide
many air toxins.
Other than the "There is/are" problem, most students did well in
sentence structure with many complex structures.
One of the many causes of harmful pollution in water is oil spills. One
reason oil spills are harmful is that it hurts the ocean which hurts us
because we rely on the ocean so much. It also affects the people in
our community because it raises gas prices. Oil spills cause major
destruction to reefs and corals by killing them. It causes the most
harm to sea critters though because they choke on the oil and die.
Oil spills are also very hard to clean up in the water and on the
beach because it goes in all directions. In addition, they give off toxic
fumes that make all living things sick. One solution is called
biomediation which is a kind of bacteria that breaks down oil and
eats it. Another solution is called vacuuming where people suck up
the oil and water along with it into a tank. One solution that most
people hate is manual labor where people come down to the beach
with shovels and shovel the oil into wheel barrows. Many people
used this solution for the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico. They also
used special nets to catch the oil and pull it into their boats and out to
sea. But, oil spills are not the only form of water pollution.
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Word choice:
Mechanics:
IN YOUR PROMPT.
Time management: