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Rebekah McCloy
ENG 419
29 April 2020
When I revised my poetry unit plan, I made the changes you suggested on the returned
copy of the unit plan. Mainly, these alterations consisted of adding in more detail than was
originally there. Upon reading your useful comments, I realized that I had been quite vague in
many of my instructions. If these plan were being taught in a real classroom and a substitute
teacher had to fill in on one of the days, they wouldn’t know many of the key details that needed
to be there. They would be able to teach the lesson plan is it is in my mind. This meant, that I had
to add in more detailed instructions that provided some of the questions that would be asked
while the students were having group discussions, class discussions, or were completing
assignments. I also needed to provide more descriptions as to what some of my assignments were
actually having the students do. The main example of this is in my poem analysis worksheet. I
had stated in the original plans that there would be a worksheet for the students to complete
along with a couple of the poems, but I did not tell how these worksheets would be helpful and
what they would entail. This revision had me fixing many of the detail issues that existed in my
poetry unit. Another issue with the plan was that I had put what types of formative assessments
would be used to determine how well the students were accomplishing the learning objectives,
but I had not put why these formative assessments were chosen. In my revised lesson plan, I
gave descriptions on how the formative assessments chosen could be used to assess whether or
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not students were attaining the goals that were laid out by the learning objectives. While there
are certainly more improvements that could be made upon my lesson plan, I feel that the revised