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Raspberry Jam
Evan looks like a butterball turkey, thawed, all wobbly and wings flapping. Patrick places
him on the table, buckles the navy corduroy straps of his overalls. Evan laughs at the snap snap
sound, his mouth wet and shiny, his tongue red with raspberry jam. Wide glass-like eyes,
wondrous blue, stare at Patrick. Sit still! But Patrick doesn‟t say it, only thinks it. Because Evan
Patrick notes the half-empty bottle, rolling over the counter. It makes a hard sound, rounding
over the lip of the sink, remnants of discarded food stuck to its label. Dishes litter the kitchen,
Patrick lifts what‟s left of his homework: scrawls of green ink against foolscap, covered with
splotches of jam. It is a sticky mess, the offending seeds sprawled across the page. Ruined.
Patrick shoves it into his backpack. Evan giggles. Patrick grabs the boy‟s coat from a chair and
“No!” Evan is emphatic. Evan always knows what he wants, what he won‟t tolerate.
It is eight oh five. Too late to argue. Patrick drapes his own coat over his brother and heads
for the door. It is a small house, war-time old, with arborite counters, dingy wooden cupboards,
laminate flooring. A thinned rug in the hallway shows twenty years of tracked dirt. Patrick steps
onto the front porch, tightens the coat around Evan. Down on the sidewalk, a bracing wind
blows back their hair, and Evan closes his eyes, turns his cheek into Patrick‟s cupped palm.
The driver looks annoyed as Patrick fumbles for his bus pass, and Evan holds out his
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raspberry-stained hands. I’m sorry, Patrick thinks, but I can’t pour vodka over cornflakes.
He shifts Evan in his arms and takes a seat across from a bulky man in a ski jacket. There is
a metal lunch pail and a hard hat between the man‟s spattered steel-toed boots. Patrick sees him
on this bus every day, sitting with large-boned hands suspended between his knees, ready to jump
up at his stop. Then the man walks down to the corner where a battered blue pick-up waits for
him. Patrick can picture him arriving home after work, eating roast chicken with his family.
The vehicle lurches to a stop and Big Man leaves the bus. Evan starts his lalalala, which he
does when he is singing to himself. Or maybe he is counting the streetcars that press past the
Evan‟s stop. Patrick tucks his arm under Evan‟s to secure him to his body and exits the bus.
The ladies at daycare are kind, but they look at their watches as Patrick brings his brother through
the door. Little depictions of trains, in blue, green, yellow chug around the borders of the room,
their faces faded and seams fraying. At a blue table, a group of four-year-olds are having tea,
their dishes splayed in fashionable disarray in front of them, and fake cookies spilling off a
plastic plate.
“Mom‟s going to get him at four,” Patrick says, and hands over Evan.
He reaches behind him and pulls Evan‟s blue jacket from his backpack. He pries the
Back on the bus, and then to Patrick‟s stop. He steps onto the frozen sidewalk, turns toward
Slater Street. He is late, but she‟s there, standing with a group of school girls and a nun in a
black cowl, white collar and mid-length dark skirt. He knows the girl‟s name is Nora. She has
copper hair, long thin nose, clear green eyes, and skinny legs. Today, her plaid skirt is down
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around her knees, her white shirt tucked in, and her tie pulled straight up to her neck. She turns
curious eyes toward Patrick, displays the beginnings of a smile; her friends begin to talk, giggle.
The nun steps forward, hands waving. A yellow bus pulls up to the curb. Nora turns away, puts
one thick black sole forward and climbs onto the bus.
The bell has long since rung. Patrick walks the hallway, with its chipped walls and soiled
lockers, and its floors coated in sloppy layers of varnish. There is the distant shuffle of students
settling in to home room. He turns into the principal‟s office. Mr. Lockhead. Lunkhead, the
“Hey, Patrick. Bad morning?” Mrs. Parson, who runs the office for Lunkhead, directs
The windows are obscured by wood and frosted glass to compartmentalize the space, and the
light is dull here. Patrick shrugs, pushes a stray mass of hair from his forehead. Mr. Lockhead
“Going to class today are we?” Lunkhead asks. He wears a yellowed shirt, and a thin tie, and
dark heavy-framed glasses that adults think makes them look „cultural‟.
Lunkhead nods, scribbles on a notepad and hands the paper to Patrick. “Tell your Mom I
Patrick reports for history, watches as Corry flops down in the seat across from him.
Patrick stares ahead at the wasted expanse of blackboard, made grey by layers of rubbed
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chalk. Corry shifts his long legs under his desk, slides down on the plastic chair, and taps his
fingers against the hard surface of his history book. A thousand miles away from this place.
Patrick hears every tick of the clock, every squeak of the write board, every sniff of Cindy
Lofkin‟s breath through her asthma-swollen membranes. He scribbles on his notebook, tries to
remember what he wrote in his homework, but the words will not come.
By noon, he has reconstructed it between scattered thoughts of the American Civil War and
“Patrick.” It is Ms. Barry, a large-framed woman with swollen cheeks and fleshy hands. “I
It is four o‟clock now. He has been asked to stay late and talk to his English teacher. He
likes the way her skin is all doughy and soft, not like the skinny arms of his mother, who seems
Patrick gives her a sour smile, “You should have seen the first copy.” Then he laughs. Ms.
Ms. Barry takes a seat at her desk, folds her fingers before her like soldiers crouching in the
Patrick watches the steady traffic of students outside the classroom. He envies the shuffle,
the scurry, the clack of their shoes against the concrete. “Yeah.”
“You have real talents, I think you could do things. You have a gift for English.”
He watches the creases of her face deepen, the frown push back her heavy cheeks. She
means well. Patrick toys with the little Scottie dog she keeps on her desk. It reminds him of
“You are going to have to go to summer school. You can do this work if you just get down
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to it.” She tilts her head up at him, draws his gaze. “I think you need to—get away from things.
I could get you a subsidy, and you could do a retreat, out of the city.”
“I could tutor you after class. You could make some of this up. And then, when you go on
the retreat, you could focus on some things that interest you, get ahead of things.”
And what about Evan? Who would look out for Evan?
He gets off the bus, and walks up Somerset. The worn porch welcomes him: the torn screen
door, the cracked living room window, the planks that lead a tired path to the entrance of the
house. But it‟s different today. He pauses at the top step, turns, looks back out onto the street.
Tufts of dirty snow clump against the asphalt; there is the constant stream of cars heedless of the
speed bumps, and black trees that loom bare over the houses.
He hears Evan, giggling, the clank of cutlery hitting the floor. Inside, Patrick puts down his
backpack, takes the milk out of a canvas bag, and throws his coat over a peg on the wall. Now
he can sense what‟s different. The thick, earthy scent of barley soup mixes with the shock of
She is broad, capable. The tips of her fingers are thick, and her palms flat and wide. She
doesn‟t smile, only nods as he enters the kitchen. She takes the milk, and passes Evan to him.
“Get him to sit in his chair. We‟re going to feed him a proper meal for once.”
Patrick grins at Evan, who is slapping his cheeks with ruddy fingers. “Hey, Ev, you hungry?”
“Hungry, Pat!”
“Well? Go wash up and sit down. And tell your mother to get out here. I‟m not running a
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restaurant.” Granny Beal pushes streaks of brown hair behind her thick ears. Her body stout,
impassable, she lays one hand on the back of a chair, a ladle raised in the other.
“Mr. Lockhead wants to see you,” Patrick smiles, leaning on the doorway of his mother‟s
bedroom. Katie looks wan, more than usual, and her arms are slow as she lifts her lipstick to her
“What‟s Granny doing here?” he says, but he is thinking how good the soup smells. And
how foreign that feels. And how much he resents Granny Beal for making him think that.
Katie pushes her arms into a cotton blouse and buttons the front over her chemise. “Pat . . .
“Uh-huh.”
“I kicked him out. For good. Geez, that‟s enough.” Evan‟s dad. A truck driver, who is
almost never around, but whenever he is, Katie has one of her „lapses‟. Patrick hates the way he
smells, like urine is buried in the straggly recesses of his beard. “Anyway, Corrine needs us. She
Granny Beal does not like his mother. Ever since Katie sent his father to jail. Pat can still
see the red gash in his father‟s left thigh as he tore across the carpet, legs naked and underwear
stained crimson. He was swearing, screaming at his mother, who lay wounded in the corner. It
was only a kitchen knife. But it was all Patrick could think to do.
“Jim skipped out on his bail. Some drug charge. And drained her account. So much for
motherly devotion.”
They sit like a family at the kitchen table. Granny Beal says a silent prayer over folded
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fingers and passes a basket of thick-sliced bread to Patrick. Evan has barley stuck to his cheeks
and warm gravy pouring over his chin. Katie smiles, pushes a strand of pale blonde hair back
into her pony tail, and brushes her hand over Evan‟s mouth.
“When you are done with dinner,” Granny frowns, “you can take those to the beer store.”
She waves her hand at the side door where a blue recycle bin sits, loaded with empty bottles.
“Maybe you could use the money. And then you can do your homework. I‟ll be putting Evan to
bed.”
The counters are wiped clean, the dishes stacked three high on the drain board. Laundry sits
in a basket by the door to the back room, ready to be washed. A dozen apples round over a bowl
Granny returns his stare through hard grey eyes, then goes back to her soup, her square
fingers lifting the spoon, angling it into the liquid and driving it expertly to her mouth. This rigid
His mother is playing a clapping game with Evan before heading off to work. A sing-song of
“Mom?” Patrick says, shifting his gaze from the granite person at the head of their table.
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