Youngjun

Mr. O’Connell

Writing E03

May 20. 2020

E03 Expository Essay Reflection

I had an enjoyable time while writing this essay. I was able to write about a topic that was

interesting and fascinating to me. My essay was about the advantages and disadvantages of E-

books and paper books. At home, I spend time reading books as a hobby. I can sit in my bed for

hours, reading different books. However, I was curious whether E-books or paper books was

better. In my essay, I believe that I had a strong foundation. My ideas and points were all strong

and factual and the overall structure of the essay was great. However, my wording and sentence

structure greatly took away from my essay. Next time, one thing that I will focus on more will be

my sentence structure. Some sentences that I wrote in my essay did not quite make sense or were

fragments. I will try my best not to make these mistakes again.