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Unit 4 Awp The Great Gatsby Rewrite
Unit 4 Awp The Great Gatsby Rewrite
Emily Kwon
Ms. Storer
English 3H Block 1
March 2, 2020
Silence can be louder than words when words are not loud enough to stop the world from
moral destruction. In his novel The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald, an American writer
renowned for his depiction of the Roaring Twenties, attempts to criticize the materialism of his
era by employing silent witnesses. Fitzgerald's emphasis on the penetrating eyes of Doctor T.J.
Eckleburg and Owl Eyes, which serve as impotent observers of distorted ambition who only gain
power when their message reaches the audience, is a warning for hedonistic prosperity and the
The eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg and Owl Eyes witness the hedonism that roots in
empty prosperity. For example, when Nick Carraway first illustrates the valley of ashes, he says,
“Evidently some wild wag of an oculist set them there to fatten his practice… and then sank
down himself to eternal blindness… But his eyes… brood over the solemn dumping ground”
(Fitzgerald 23-24). The words “eternal blindness” and “solemn” establish the despondent tone of
the novel that introduces the audience to the message that materialism brings nothing at the end.
The beginning of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg’s overarching gaze was marked off by one man’s greed
– the greed that ended in vain as he left the world. The wealth that he accumulated proves futile
as he can no longer see the glories of his success, but the two glaring eyes are all that remain to
see the hedonistic indulgences that plague the society. As people pass by the valley of ashes in
bright cars and with great gaiety, the dusty eyes never fail to capture the grimness behind the
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apparent luxuries. Affluence that is solely directed towards extravagance is the definition of true
blindness; immoderate living that is unaccompanied by integrity is the same as dumping one’s
life to the ground. Even without any words, the eyes are gravely warning the audience of
meaningless materialism. Furthermore, Owl Eyes remarks on Gatsby’s false success when he
encounters Nick and Jordan at Gatsby’s party: “What thoroughness! What realism! Knew when
to stop, too – didn’t cut the pages. But what do you want? What do you expect?” (Fitzgerald 46)
Owl Eyes’ fervent exposure of Gatsby’s library as a brilliant pretense of the high class is a
symbolism of Gatsby himself. Books that are not cut are not made to be read, indicating that
Gatsby’s collection of books are mere deceptions to fake his prosperity. Gatsby accumulates his
wealth through the immoral business of bootlegging, and if success is not achieved through
honest means, it is hollow. Hence, the boundless, reckless expenditure of Gatsby that epitomizes
the prodigal lifestyle of the Roaring Twenties is a great masquerade that demonstrates the barren
nature of hedonism. With the keen eyes of a perceptive spectator, Owl Eyes conveys the
inseparable concepts of empty success and the pursuit of pleasure. The two pairs of eyes each
reminds the audience not only of excessive self-indulgence but also of the consequent fall of
morality.
Doctor T.J. Eckleburg and Owl Eyes warn the audience of the tragic destruction of
morality with their piercing stares. For instance, Nick follows Tom Buchanan to meet Myrtle
“under Doctor Eckleburg’s persistent stare” (Fitzgerald 24). Although Doctor Eckleburg is not
real, the presence of his eyes is palpable and inescapable for Nick and for the audience. Tom,
unsatisfied with his monotonous life with Daisy and desperately craving for a sensuous
alternative, commits adultery with Myrtle. Regardless of Wilson’s meager earnings, the yearning
for a flamboyant life that has become the cultural norm makes Myrtle guilty of the same crime.
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Undoubtedly, the societal indulgence in sexual and material pleasure that often destroys integrity
has made proper means of joy unattractive. Conscience is neglected, and ethics is long forgotten
as Doctor T.J. Eckleburg remains the sole eyewitness to the miserable defeat of morality.
Another example of the warning appears during Gatsby’s funeral when Owl Eyes comments on
the opportunistic New Yorkers who only regarded Gatsby as the fountainhead of entertainment:
“Go on! Why my God! They used to go there by the hundreds… the poor son of a bitch”
(Fitzgerald 175). The harsh word choice accentuates the anguish brought by the absence of
virtue. Gatsby’s wealth gives him nothing at the end but the realization of unfaithful human
relations: countless people who once enjoyed Gatsby’s wild parties or who benefited from his
business do not attend his funeral. This exemplifies how the inclination for personal gains and
pleasures overwhelms the most basic moral obligation of bidding farewell to a once welcoming
host. Materialism fogs the minds from proper judgment, inducing people to disregard morality in
a blind and selfish pursuit of prosperity. Owl Eyes goes beyond criticizing the lack of ethics and
cautions the audience of the grave despair that follows. Through their gaze of hedonism and
immorality, Doctor Eckleburg and Owl Eyes ultimately prove to be the voiceless observers of
The observant eyes in The Great Gatsby are impuissant onlookers of corrupt ambition
whose influence is only felt through the audience’s realization of the depravity. For example,
when Myrtle misunderstands Jordan as Tom’s wife, Nick narrates, “Over the ashheaps the giant
eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg kept their vigil, but I perceived… that other eyes were regarding
us with peculiar intensity” (Fitzgerald 124). Nick’s matter-of-fact tone alludes how characters
have become accustomed to the persistent stare of Doctor Eckleburg due to the prevalent
immorality. As a woman who longs for a prima donna life, her current state as a mechanic’s wife
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is unacceptable to Myrtle. The collective prosperity of the ‘20s is unbearable for someone who
wishes to be in the middle of the glory, and Tom is her escape into the world of comfort and
magnificence. Her innocent desire of a dazzling life, which turns into an uncontrollable
obsession when her refuge is falling apart, ultimately leads to her death. Even when her own eyes
seize to see the world, the eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg prevail over the valley of ashes,
piercing through the ambitions that have turned as gray as the ashes. Furthermore, as Wilson
recollects his fight with Myrtle before her death, “the eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg… pale and
enormous” looms over him, and Wilson proclaims, “God sees everything” (Fitzgerald 159). The
deliberate metaphor extends Doctor T.J. Eckleburg’s role as a silent observer to a divine power.
Myrtle’s dream of a vibrant life and Wilson’s dream of happiness with Myrtle are subjects of
corruption due to their basis on material success. Exuberant lifestyle gears the dreams of many
toward prosperity instead of true happiness, and the dreams lose their value. The fallen ambitions
are judged by Doctor Eckleburg, or god himself, who is all-knowing. Myrtle’s death, or the
grand finale of a violent race for success, does not escape the eyes of god. The eyes keep their
silence as they stare at the dreamers, illuminating the tragic ends of the ambitions that have long
gone wrong. As the examples prove, the eyes in The Great Gatsby are the primary witnesses to
Through the two pairs of eyes, ever so silent yet painfully perceptive, the sorrows of
misguided desires are proclaimed louder than ever. Fitzgerald focuses on the eyes of Doctor T.J.
Eckleburg and Owl Eyes, the impotent spectators of depraved ambition, as the admonition for
hedonism and the ensuing immorality which lead to a tragedy. The current society constitutes of
various eyes which carry on the silence of Doctor Eckleburg and Owl Eyes – the silence that
holds the solemn truth behind modern prosperity and declares the need for conversion.
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