Youngjun

Mr. O’Connell

Writing E02

May 20, 2020

Biographical Narrative Reflection

In this essay, I wrote about an event in a classmate's life that was important or significant to

them. I believe that in this essay, I managed to create clear visuals of the events of the essay.

This was possible because the events that my classmate had given me was only in a span of a

few moments. Thus, this led me to add as much description as I could to lengthen and develop

the story. I made a good use of imagery, which made the story more interesting. This story

turned out way above my expectations and I finished with a high grade. However, there are some

changes that I would have made to the essay. One thing is punctuation. There were many

punctuation mistakes in my essay that I could have fixed with more time. Another mistake was

grammar. This also can be avoided with better editing and revisions.