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Your help would be highly appreciated. (Mr 2U is a 72-year-old retired school teacher. Hédemaniedand nonsmokes, He is a known «ase of hypertension for 18 years, with IHD and Ml for many years. In addition, he has been suffering from CCF for the last S years. He is on Lasix 40mg, Enalapril, slow K, nifedipine and anginine sublingual as needed, He has reported anginal symptoms on gardening which Comment (brchmnrk}: relieved by rest and anginine use. Moreover, he has mild postural dizziness. On examination, there were features of CCF with normal heart sounds and unremarkable abdominal examination. His diagnosis was stable CCF associated with mild angina thus raquired-onby Me 2U presented 2 weeks later with deteriorating CCF which manifested as worsening dyspnea, orthopnea, lung crepitation to mid zone along with further engorgement in the IVP. ECG was done: and the patient commenced on high dose of Lasix 80mg with review plan in two days. Today he has improved, his JVP and lung congestion were better. He still has anginal symptoms on activity and ECG detected anterolateral ischemia. In light of the above, my provisional diagnosis is |HD. | am referring him for further ‘management. If you have any queries, please contact me. Yours sincerely, There are minor inaccuracies of grammar and word choice. However, these do not reduce communication. 2. Revise grammar. 2. Try to finish your letter in 200 words. 3. proofread your letter after1:32 Done 10684_Urgent.pdf ® Bonchmorc seOvropede site aaa eas oyovane ear trom, enone rar ae 38 eas ont Serta roe renter eke ead —— SSE lr Toyoraaheny kar anda moderne deiner Hho lear medal biog. ss tay, Me ar erase to cn 2/0/2020 gto eae i nw sivesy merongteng tole Hareprtestathotwsredic ene rng game ere Iron of. 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On 28/02/15, she began to walk with crutches as her wound was healthy. Hence, clips were removed, and she \was transferred to the rehabilitation on 07/03/15. Inthe rehabilitation, her mobility improved gradualy, and she could carry cut physiotherapy exercises and take showers with minimal assistance. On 14/03/15, her pathology results showed an INK of 3.8 and Improving hemoglobin level (1128/1 Today, Ms Johnson's being discharged witha home nurse, who will ook after her parscnal hygiene, ‘wound, and mobility. Her discharge medications include warfarin 4mg nocte, Feratab 150mg mane, paracetamal 1g.qds.and oxycodone S-10mg prn. Please note, her rehabilitation appointment isin two weeks, It would be appreciated if you could provide her ongoing care and arrange a fullblood examination and INR, IH you have any queries, pleaze contact me. 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