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T his is a very good essay, with some minor
f laws. T hese mainly reside in the absence of a
central argument; and the suggestive – though
typically neo-Marxist – writing style and f orm. See
f urther individual comments below.
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It would have been advisable to have an explicit
argument in the introduction, as well as a clearer
“structure of the argument” part.
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