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Area South Season 1
Area South Season 1
by
George Dobrev
EXT. CHICAGO - DAY
14 October 2003
COMMENTATOR
Surely, some day the Chicago Cubs
are going to be in the world
series, and maybe sooner than we
think.
One kid has a glove on his left hand and plays with a ball
in his right. The second one holds a baseball bat that's
resting on his shoulder. The third kid, the tallest one,
simply wears a jersey and a baseball cap with the Chicago
Cubs logo on it.
COMMENTATOR
Flies out of the left center and
goes with a hop into the wall!
Bryant scores and it's a double for
Russel! That's a triple double here
in the bottom half of the first. He
got that ball in the air with
authority.
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COMMENTATOR
This is a big moment for the Cubs!
As we all know they've won every
game by now. If they keep their
streak and annihilate the Florida
Marlins as they did with all of
their previous opponents, we're
going to see them in the World
Series!! Take a seat people, this
is a big moment of Cubs' history!
2.
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JACK
You think they gonna win, Barry?
BARRY
Fuck yeah they will! They're
perfect this season.
JACK
I hope so.
Jack turns ahead again and sticks his eyes to the TV.
BARRY
What are you? Some Marlins' fan?
JACK
Hell no! I... I just don't know.
I've got this feeling that
something bad is going to happen.
BARRY
Oh come on! Shut up and watch the
game.
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COMMENTATOR
The last time the Cubs had been to
the World Series was in 1908. The
final countdown has begun people.
Five more outs and the team would
be in its full glory going to the
World Series.
3.
PAN and FLY through a window on the side. We FLY through the
streets of Chicago, increasing the speed of movement every
second.
CUT TO:
SANDRA
Hey, sweetie! You won't believe
what happened!
KELLY
(on the phone)
What Sandra?
SANDRA
Remember when I told you about this
handsome guy I dated in high
school?
KELLY
Ugh... Which one exactly?
SANDRA
Come on! The blonde guy, Allen!
KELLY
Oh, yeah! So, what about him.
SANDRA
He's in town.
KELLY
No way! And...?
SANDRA
And I met him at Jewel's Store and
I gave him my number. He's with
another handsome from school -
Keith. They'll call me later
tonight and we can hang out.
KELLY
What do they want to do?
SANDRA
Hold on for a moment. Gotta get my
keys.
4.
Sandra puts her phone in her other hand and takes out her
keys. She unlocks the door and takes the phone back up to
her ear.
SANDRA
Okay,so, they want to do what we
do, Kelly, and you know how we do
it.
KELLY
Get high and party.
SANDRA
Exactly.
KELLY
They got some money?
SANDRA
Yeah, Allen said they just got
paid.
KELLY
What kind of work they do?
Sandra walks back to the kitchen and starts picking out the
groceries from the bag and put them in the refrigerator.
SANDRA
I didn't go into all of that in the
middle of the store, girl! Stop
asking so many damn questions...
You can ask him yourself later
tonight. You down, or what, Kelly?!
KELLY
I just want to make one thing clear
before they get us high. I will
suck his dick, but if they wanna
fuck they gotta pay me.
SANDRA
I'm with you on that.
KELLY
Okay, see you later then.
SANDRA
Bye honey.
Sandra leaves the phone on the table and gets the last
product into the fridge. NATHAN, her little brother walks
into the room. He's sick and pale.
5.
SANDRA
Hey, little man! How are you?
NATHAN
I'm hungry sis.
SANDRA
Sit down, I'll make you a sandwich.
CROSSFADE:
Sarah's phone rings from the other side of the room a couple
of times before she pauses the game and gets up from the
couch.
NATHAN
Oh, come on!
SANDRA
Sorry, buddy, gotta pick up.
As she says that she walks towards the phone. She takes a
look at the screen and we see it in a CLOSE SHOT. It
displays a number instead of a name.
SANDRA
(whispers to herself)
Unknown number... Interesting.
SANDRA
Yeah?
ALLEN
Are you and your friend ready to
party?
SANDRA
Allen! Damn right we are!
ALLEN
(on the phone)
Perfect! Where do I pick you ladies
up?
SANDRA
Mm.. How about the gas station at
107th and Halsted?
6.
ALLEN
At what time?
SANDRA
Will be there in forty-five
minutes.
ALLEN
Okay. We'll be there.
Sandra hangs up and leaves the phone on the table again. She
turns to her brother.
SANDRA
Nathan, I'm going out!
TRUCK to Sandra who goes out of the living room and upstairs
to her bedroom. She starts picking different clothes from
the wardrobe and puts them on the bed.
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KEITH
What happened to your girlfriend?
SANDRA
She is waiting for us at the liquor
store near 111th and Halsted.
Allen smiles at Sandra as she goes around the car and opens
the front passenger door.
ALLEN
I get it. You ladies want something
to drink to help get the party
started.
SANDRA
That's a nice car you've got Allen.
ALLEN
Yeah and sorry but no smoking
inside.
SANDRA
Ugh... Fine.
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SANDRA
That's Kelly.
We see Kelly taking her walk towards the car. As she gets
close Keith opens the back door.
KEITH
Hi! You should be Kelly. I'm Keith.
KELLY
Hey!
ALLEN
Ladies, what would you like to
drink?
KELLY
I want some Hennessy. We call it
'Hen' because it makes me want to
sin! What about you Sandra?
SANDRA
Yeah, I like Hen too.
8.
SANDRA
Hey, Allen! Don't forget to get
some ice and four cups.
SANDRA
So, you don't remember me from high
school?
KEITH
You look great. I never would have
recognized you after all these
years. You look better now than you
did back in high school.
KELLY
So, what is it you guys do for a
living?
KEITH
A little bit of this and a little
bit of that.
KELLY
I feel you.
SANDRA
I feel you.
COMMENTATOR
The Cubs are now down by five runs
with only one inning left to play!
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We see Allen getting out of the shop and going back to the
car. Everyone has gotten out of the vehicle and speak
something. As he reaches them, Allen passes the grocery bag
to Kelly and she puts it on the back seat.
KELLY
(to Allen)
Where are we going to get high?
ALLEN
I don't know, you girls know this
town better.
KELLY
Well, Sandra and I like to go to a
place we call 'The Den'.
KELLY
What motel are you guys taking us
if we're not going there?
ALLEN
Listen, ladies. I just spent
forty-five dollars on a bottle of
Hennessy and fifty on some rocks,
leaving me with only a few dollars
for the both of you. I tell you
what; the next time we get
together, I promise we will go to a
motel, okay?
KELLY
Sure. However, let me warn you that
there might be some people already
there getting high.
KEITH
I'll get rid of them fools. I
promise you they won't come back
there tonight.
Kelly gets in the back of the car and Sandra goes around to
the front. Keith and Allen enter as well.
10.
The Lexus' engine starts and the car drives off the parking
lot.
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The Lexus arrives in front of The Den and everyone gets out
of the car. Keith rushes towards the entrance of the old
house where a group of junkies just came out.
KEITH
Hey!
TREVOR
What's up bro?!
KEITH
We with the girl are going to have
a private party here tonight. We
don't want to be interrupted.
TREVOR
Oh, yeah? Private party on public
property?
KEITH
Exactly.
TREVOR
Alright, man. Don't worry we will
stay away, man.
KEITH
That's what I thought.
PAN around the main room. The light is very dim and we can
hardly recognize what is lying on the floor.
Allen opens the front door and the light from outside
reveals that the house has empty bottles, used condoms, used
syringes and a lot of trash.
As everyone enters, Sandra and Kelly take the lead through
the hallway and they go to what used to be the living room
of the house.
11.
ALLEN
It's too dark in here. I can't see
a damn thing. Hold on a minute,
I've got a gas lamp in my trunk.
TRUCK to Allen who goes out, gets the gas lamp from the
trunk of the Lexus and as he goes back inside he lights it.
ALLEN
Would you like one or two cubes of
ice, ladies?
SANDRA
Two cubes, please.
KELLY
Two cubes, please.
Allen places the cups in front of every one and puts the
couples of cubes into Sandra and Kelly's cups. He then
proceeds to pour the Hennessy until each cup is half-full.
KELLY
Who got the rocks?
KEITH
I do.
KELLY
Well, let's get this party started.
KELLY
Who got the fire?
Keith gives her a big grin and pulls out a kitchen lighter
out of the inside pocket of his jacket. Keith passes the
lighter and a rock to Kelly.
She drops the rock in the pipe and heats it up. Keith leans
forward with curiosity. Kelly waits until the pipe is filled
with smoke and takes a deep pull. Watching the pipe fill in
again she takes another toke, this time deeper.
12.
Her eyes flip back and she starts to swing back and forth as
she holds the smoke in her lungs, leaving the lighter on the
table.
Kelly takes a sip from her cup and then exhales the smoke.
KELLY
Oh... That was good!
SANDRA
Fuck yeah it was!
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Kelly reaches for his pipe and the lighter. Keith quickly
drops another piece into the pipe. Kelly lights it up and
takes a toke, this time even deeper.
Sandra follows and does the same with Allen's pipe. As she
smokes, Allen refills her cup.
Once she's done with the pipe she takes a sip from the Hen
and Allen reaches her and grabs her between the legs.
Sandra doesn't resist and after a few seconds she gets down
on her knees. Allen stands up and she unzips his jeans,
taking out his penis and starting to suck it. Slowly at
first, then faster bobbling up and down.
Kelly also gets down on her knees and starts blowing Keith.
Both guys look at each other with their mouths wide open in
amazement.
It doesn't take long before both girls stop the oral sex and
giggle while looking at each other and sipping from the
Hennessy.
13.
ALLEN
Wow! You're amazing!
KEITH
Fuck yeah! Are there any bedrooms
in this old place?
KELLY
Sure there are but if you want to
fuck it will cost you fifty
bucks... Each.
ALLEN
I tell you what. We will give each
of you twenty-five and two rocks
after we fuck.
KELLY
No deal. You pay us up front or
there will be no fun boys!
SANDRA
Pay us now!
KEITH
Okay, ladies. How about we give you
twenty-five dollars now and the
rocks after we finish?
KELLY
Deal.
Allen takes out his wallet and pulls out fifty dollars,
giving twenty-five to each one of the girls. He then grabs
the lamp and they all head upstairs.
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ALLEN
Geese! It smells like piss up here.
KELLY
Ah, we're used to it. Come on!
ALLEN
Man I'm not going to fuck in this
misery. I think I've got some
newspapers in the car. I'll be
right back.
Allen quickly goes to the car and Sandra starts taking her
clothes off.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
KELLY
Fuck you!
ALLEN
(yelling)
What the fuck happened?
KEITH
This crazy bitch thought I was
asleep and took one hundred dollars
out of my pants' pocket and is now
refusing to give it back to me. She
then hit me in the head with that
damn pipe!
KELLY
Just where am I supposed to be
hiding one hundred dollars? Up my
ass? You've already been there and
we didn't even talk about this
being included. He knows there is
nothing up there.
Kelly turns her head, pulling hard from the pipe. Keith
grabs his Glock and hits her in the back of her head with a
tremendous force.
15.
Sandra's eyes open wide and she tries to run but Allen grabs
her by the back of her hair, dropping her on the ground.
He then sits on top of her with his hands around her throat.
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
Episode Two
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
INT. THE DEN
Allen and Keith are dragging Sandra and Kelly's dead bodies
down the stairs.
ALLEN
Man did you see that stupid bitch's
face when I pulled her down on the
floor?
KEITH
Yeah that was hillarious!
Both start laughing.
KEITH
Look, I've heard some shit that if
you put enough lime with the bodies
it will dissolve everything.
ALLEN
We could give it a try.
KEITH
Let's just put these whores in the
basement and go shopping.
Allen opens the basement door and Keith hands him the gas
lamp.
ALLEN
It looks good enough.
KEITH
It stinks like shit.
Allen drags Sandra's body to the edge of the staircase and
kicks her down. Keith lifts Kelly's body.
KEITH
Watch this.
He throws her down the stairs and they both start laughing
as they go down after the bodies.
ALLEN
Here. We can put them in this coal
bin.
CASHIER
Wow, that's a lot of limes.
KEITH
Yeah, I love making lime juice.
SIDE SHOT ON ALLEN.
CASHIER
Hello.
ALLEN
Hi, there.
CASHIER
Two shovels, that's 15.34. Mind if
I ask why you need two?
ALLEN
Yeah, I'm a gravedigger.
CASHIER
You got me on this one!
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PAN.
ALLEN
Well, that was one hell of a work.
KEITH
Yup. At least we're clean now.
We see a black BMW parked in front of the house. The house looks
cleaner from outside.
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Allen and Keith are wiping the floor with brooms. Allen finishes
and throws the broom on the ground.
ALLEN
KEITH
Allen looks at Keith who pulls out his Glock. They both start
slowly walking through the hallway.
KEITH
Hey!
4
JUNKIE .
Hey bro! Wanna smoke?
KEITH
Get your junk ass out of this house or I’ll smoke you!
The junkie drops his weed and puts his hands up in fear.
JUNKIE
ALLEN
KEITH
Don’t you idiots learn? We’ve been beating and robbing your
white thrash asses for two weeks now. Give all your money mother
fucker!
The junkie slowly takes out his cash and leaves it on the
ground.
JUNKIE
ALLEN
The Junkie slowly walks past them while Keith keeps his aim on
him.
KEITH
Tell your fucking friends that if anyone of you ever comes back
here it will be a massacre!
Once the Junkie reaches out of the kitchen and in the hallway he
runs our through the front door.
Keith puts his Glock back in his jeans’ belt and looks at Allen.
KEITH
ALLEN
Keith puts the bag with the new locks on the back seat.
KEITH
Man, this shit draws too much attention. We got to get a car
that looks more common for this poor ass community.
ALLEN
Yup, definitely.
PAT
PAT
... Boys.
ALLEN
PAT
Oh, I see. Uhm... Look, sorry for bothering but would you mind
giving me a hand? It’s too heavy for me and I can’t put the
paint in my car.
ALLEN
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ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
Oh...
PAT
ALLEN
No, no. Nothing like that. Actually, I’m having the same
problem.
PAT
ALLEN
Crack...
PAT
ALLEN
I don’t know...
PAT
Come on, just one time. I’m pretty sure you’ll like it and stay.
Allen finishes with the paint transfer and stretches out his
hand.
ALLEN
PAT
7
Patricia. Nice to meet you, Allen. Look, if you change your. mind
about the meetings you can look for Dr. Layla Stephenson. She
has a website and you can get the address from there.
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
You’re welcome.
Allen gets in the car and the BMW drives off the parking lot.
FADE TO BLACK.
FADE IN:
DR. STEPHENSON
Everyone stands up and start leaving the room. Allen spots Pat
and approaches her.
ALLEN
Hey, Pat!
PAT
ALLEN
8
Yeah... Actually, this is the third time I’m visiting the
.
meeting. Why did you skip the last two?
PAT
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
PET
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
FADE TO BLACK.
FADE IN:
PAT
JOAN
Our dog was hit by a car in front of the house. I’m sorry I must
go...
KATIE
PAT
JOAN
PAT
Sure.
Katie and Joan get their purses and leave. At the door Katie
bumps into Allen, who is just entering the cafe.
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
PAT
10
Joan’s dog got hit by a car. .
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
I got my car back from repair. That old Bucker is somehow still
in tact.
PAT
ALLEN
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KEITH
She doesn’t move. Keith kneels next to her and touches her
shoulder.
KEITH
Hey...
BECKY
Fuck off!
KEITH
She lifts her head and looks straight into Keith’s eyes.
BECKY
11
Oh, really? I doubt you can and why would you... .
KEITH
Maybe I can and why not help a beautiful lady like you?
BECKY
KEITH
Yeah.
BECKY
KEITH
BECKY
Got crack?
KEITH
BECKY
Well, what are you waiting for? Take out the pipe.
KEITH
Oh, I don’t risk carrying it. It’s home. If you want we can go
there and get fucked up.
BECKY
KEITH
I’m Keith.
BECKY
I’m Becky.
KEITH
BECKY
12
Actually yeah... .
Keith stands up and helps Becky.
KEITH
BECKY
KEITH
KEITH
BECKY
KEITH
Keith and Becky hide behind the corner as they reach the main
sidewalk.
Allen and Pat come out of the cafe and he holds the door for
her.
PAT
Thanks!
ALLEN
You’re welcome.
PAT
ALLEN
ALLEN
13
It’s late. Do you need a ride home? .
PAT
ALLEN
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Once inside they take a moment and look at each other. Pat
smells the crack aroma and and Allen lowers his head.
ALLEN
I’m sorry...
PAT
Don’t worry, that’s normal. I’ve relapsed a few times this year
as well.
Allen looks at her and then pulls out his crack pipe from under
the seat.
ALLEN
I feel really bad about it... But maybe if you join me I’ll feel
better... And we can start fresh tomorrow!
PAT
PAT
ALLEN
PAT
ALLEN
14
Actually yeah but not in me. I’ve got a lot back home. If .you
don’t mind we can go there and get fucked up.
PAT
Allen picks out his phone and calls Keith while starting the
car and taking off.
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EXT. 95TH AND DAN RYAN
KEITH
Yo, what's up?
ALLEN
(on the phone)
Hey, Keith! I'm on my way home.
KEITH
Can you come pick us up on 95th and
Dan Ryan?
ALLEN
(on the phone)
Us?
KEITH
Yeah, I just met...ugh... Becky?
Yeah, so she's down to get wrecked.
ALLEN
(on the phone)
Perfect! I've got Patricia with me.
We'll come to get you.
KEITH
Alright, we're here.
Keith hangs up.
BECKY
Who's that?
KEITH
Oh, my brother. He'll pick us up.
Becky doesn't say anything. Keith stops and takes out a pack
of cigarettes.
KEITH
Let's wait here. Allen hangs
up and look
at Pat.
LLEN
Keith is my brother. I hope you
don't mind he will be with his
girlfriend. CUT TO:
2
.
PATRICIA
No, not at all.
FADE OUT
CUT TO:
EXT. 95TH AND DAN RYAN
Allen and Pat arrive with their car to meet Keith and Becky.
PAN RIGHT
KEITH
You guys want something to drink?
PATRICIA
I say vodka!
BECKY
I want whiskey!
3
.
KEITH
Perfect! I like vodka and Allen
here loves whiskey.
ALLEN
Going to the liquor store then.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
EXT. THE DEN
The old Bucker parks in front of the house and all four get
out. They head inside.
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INT. THE DEN
Allen opens the front door and gets in first. Becky and Pat
are next with Keith behind them. Keith closes the door.
While Allen leads the girls to the living room.
ALLEN
Thanks! Please, take a seat.
Keith places the bottles on a wooden table that the boys
managed to put together from some old planks.
Allen brings cups from the kitchen and takes a seat. Keith
starts pouring the drinks.
PATRICIA
Do you have ice?
KEITH
Sadly, no.
Keith takes a seat and Allen takes out the crack pipe and a
rock. Keith pulls out his. They put a rock in each pipe and
hand them to the girls.
Pat takes a deep toke and Becky follows. They return the
pipes to Keith and Allen with Pat being first to do that.
PATRICIA
Wow! I had forgotten how good it
feels.
ALLEN
I know, right!
4
.
Keith takes a small toke from the pipe but Allen takes a bit
deeper. Not as much as the ladies but still deeper than
Keith.
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George Dobrev
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MID SHOT.
KEITH
Well, that shit is your problem. Me
and Becky are going upstairs.
BECKY
Wait! Is she alright?
KEITH
She's fine. She just had too much
booze. Come on!
TRUCK TO ALLEN.
INT.BASEMENT
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INT.UPSTAIRS BEDROOM
Keith and Becky are already undressed and in the "bed" that
again was roughly made of planks.
BECKY
I'm not doing both of you!
KEITH
We share everything and that
includes you Becky!
BECKY
What's going on with the other
girl?
ALLEN
She passed out. She'll be fine by
tomorrow morning.
KEITH
You know, this is the first time I
ever fucked a white girl!
ALLEN
First time too.
BECKY
Want me to call some friends?
ALLEN
You have some friends who will come
to the South Side?
BECKY
Yes but they'll want some snack and
money.
KEITH
How much are we talking about?
BECKY
Hundred a piece.
ALLEN
We could make a damn movie!
BECKY
I've already made a few for the
last two years. You can make a lot
of money with the right girls and I
know them!
ALLEN
Can you call them now?
BECKY
It's too late already but how about
tomorrow?
KEITH
Let me think about it.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
INT.UPSTAIRS BEDROOM
Allen and Keith are sitting on the bed next to each other.
ALLEN
Once we have about three or four
movies we can move on to other
genres.
KEITH
That's brilliant!
KEITH
Wait... Fuck!
ALLEN
What?
KEITH
I just realized how expensive are
cameras and all the equipment we
would need.
ALLEN
Fuck!
KEITH
Look, fuck that. We've got another
problem right now.
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BECKY
Hey... Wha-What's going on?
4.
ALLEN
What do you mean?
BECKY
What is this place?
ALLEN
That's where we came last night
after I picked you up.
BECKY
But... Wait, what's up with the
other girl?
ALLEN
She woke up earlier and left.
KEITH
Hey...
ALLEN
Morning bro.
BECKY
I need a shower.
KEITH
Call your friends first.
BECKY
(on the phone)
Hey, Lucy! You wanna come with the
girls to the South Side?
LUCY
(on the phone)
Fuck no! What the hell are you
doing there, girl? Come back north
before something bad happens to
you.
BECKY
Come on, Lucy!
LUCY
I said no! Get yo' ass over here
asap!
KEITH
Ah... That's fine.
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BECKY
What the fuck!
ALLEN
Time to have some fun, Becky!
BECKY
That's not funny!
Allen swings the chainsaw towards Becky and she steps aside.
BECKY
Dude, stop it!
KEITH
Yeah man! That will be too much
blood.
ALLEN
Good point. It's fun but too much
work afterwards.
ALLEN
Fuck! Come here you stupid bitch!
Allen hits her in the back of her head with a fist while
running and Becky falls down the stairs.
Allen starts laughing while Becky falls down.
ALLEN
Man you should have seen this!
6.
Becky reaches the ground and her face is stuck to the floor.
Blood is spilling from her head.
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Allen and Keith are finishing up with burying Becky and Pat.
ALLEN
Fuck, we got to figure out an
easier way to bury those bitches.
KEITH
I'm afraid there isn't an easier
way, bro.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
MARSHALL
Walter Best?
WALTER
Detective Willis. How is it going?
MARSHALL
I'm sorry but I have nothing new
for you, Walter. Local prostitutes
come and go all the time and
sometimes they just leave the state
hoping to make more money.
WALTER
That local prostitute is my cousin,
Marshall!!
MARSHALL
I know, I know. I wish I had more
information.
WALTER
You cops never have info. Fuck it!
I'll find what happened to my
cousin myself.
7.
MARSHALL
I doubt you'll find something more
than we did but you're free to look
around for her. Just, report
everything you find out.
WALTER
Fuck you, man!
MARSHALL
Keep yourself out of trouble,
Walter! I don't want to see you
selling drugs again.
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EXT. STREET
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GLORIA
We need to know who these guys are
in order to survive out here,
Walter. I've been out here for ten
years, trying to stay alive.
GLORIA
You know, we have a saying out
here: That's how the cookie
crumbles here in the jungle; That's
how it is out here, a real jungle.
By the way, I'm Gloria, Gloria
Bennett.
8.
WALTER
Nice to meet you, Gloria. Look, I'm
trying to find my cousin.
WALTER
Her name is Sandra. She's changed a
bit since she graduated.
GLORIA
You better find a more recent
photo.
WALTER
Will you be able to help if I do?
GLORIA
Probably. What's in for me?
WALTER
If you help me find her, my family
will do what we can to help you
out.
GLORIA
Alright. Got paper and pen?
WALTER
I think so.
GLORIA
That's my number. Call me when you
get a new photo.
CUT TO:
Walter types down Gloria's number and calls her. He puts the
sticky note in his pocket and pulls out a more recent photo
of Sandra.
WALTER
(on the phone)
Hi, Gloria. It's Walter.
GLORIA
(on the phone)
Hey! You got another photo?
9.
WALTER
Yeah, took me a week to find one.
Let's meet up.
GLORIA
Okay, how about seven-thirty
tonight. There's a bar near 120th
and Halsted.
WALTER
Sounds good. See you there.
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GLORIA
Take a seat and talk fast. I'm
having a date here in twenty
minutes.
WALTER
Here. Looks familiar to you?
GLORIA
Yeah, I know her. She and this
other girl, Kelly, worked together.
You're right, I haven't seen them
for a while.
WALTER
What do you mean worked together?
GLORIA
Remember when I told you about the
little codes we have? You see, when
you work along with someone you
look out for each other. They were
together in everything.
WALTER
Well, do you know this Kelly's last
name?
GLORIA
I don't even know if that's her
real name. Like me, most girls take
on street names. My real name is
Mahalia Lee Jackson, nothing to do
with Gloria.
WALTER
Okay, so you haven't seen this
Kelly in a while either?
10.
GLORIA
Nope.
WALTER
Has anyone ever come around here
looking for either one of them,
like, the police?
GLORIA
Not to my knowledge. No one other
than you has ever asked me about
either one of these girls. Once
people find out you're a dope fiend
and a prostitute they don't give a
shit about you. Nobody cares for
us, Walter.
WALTER
Okay, you got my number?
GLORIA
Yeah.
WALTER
Could you please ask around, see if
you can find something?
GLORIA
You want me to act like one of
those undercover detectives on TV,
right? Like a real Sherlock Holmes?
Wow!
WALTER
Just call me if you find out
anything. It doesn't matter the
time of the day, just call me.
GLORIA
Okay, you got to go. My date is
here. Hey, before you leave you
could give me a few bucks, if you
don't mind?
WALTER
Yeah, sure. How about twenty
dollars?
WALTER
Be safe.
11.
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WALTER
Hello, officer... Wallace. Can I
speak with detective Willis?
WALLACE
Hold on.
WALLACE
Wallace here. I've got a man who
wants to speak with Marshall
Willis... Mhm... Yeah... Okay.
WALLACE
Sorry, detective Willis won't be
here today.
WALTER
Is there anyone else I could speak
with.
WALLACE
Yeah, Wallace again. Is there
anyone else this guy can speak with
because he's getting on my nerves?
WALLACE
Okay.
WALLACE
Take a seat, someone will be down
in a minute.
RAY
Who wanted to speak with Willis?
RAY
Sergeant Ray Flynn.
WALTER
Walter Best. Sir, is there a place
more private where we can speak?
RAY
Yeah, my office. Follow me.
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RAY
Please, take a seat.
Ray closes the door and sits behind the desk. He takes out a
notebook and a pen.
RAY
Okay, tell me what's the reason for
this.
WALTER
I've got some information. It's not
much but it's something to start
with.
RAY
Go on.
TIME LAPSE.
RAY
Okay, I'll inform detective Willis.
He'll be back in two days and will
give you a call.
WALTER
Thank you!
RAY
Thank you for your cooperation,
Walter.
13.
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WALTER
Detective?
MARSHALL
Walter, I've got the report from
Sergeant Flynn. Do you have any
names?
WALTER
Only one, sir. Supposedly Kelly.
MARSHALL
No last name?
WALTER
No and I believe she's missing too.
She's black and I think she's
around the same age as my cousin
Sandra.
MARSHALL
Okay, thank you Walter! I'll get
back to you once I have something
solid.
WALTER
Alright.
WALTER
(to himself out loud)
Fucking cops. Not giving a shit
about my cousin. Just like Gloria
said.
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WALTER
Yeah?
GLORIA
Hey! It's Gloria, sorry if I woke
you up.
14.
WALTER
What do you have?
GLORIA
First, I need to know if you have
any money!
WALTER
Go on.
GLORIA
(whispering)
I have some real good lead but I
need to get high, Walter. I need
fifty bucks, I feel awful.
WALTER
I don't have fifty dollars at two
o'clock in the morning, and if I
did, how would I give it to you?!
GLORIA
Please, man, I need the fifty
dollars now! I will suck your dick
for it if you want me to. I just
need the money!
WALTER
What do you have that's so
important that you would call me
this time of the morning for fifty
damn dollars?!
GLORIA
I have a guy who told me he saw
Sandra and Kelly with these two
crazy motherfuckers.
WALTER
What two crazy motherfuckers? You
got names?
GLORIA
If you just meet us at te gas
station on 115th Halsted in fifteen
minutes you can ask him yourself.
He's not going to be around here
for long. The both of us are trying
to get high, and if somebody pulls
up and wants to do some business,
we're gone.
WALTER
Alright, alright. I'm coming.
TRUCK TO WALTER.
it.
CUT TO:
GLORIA
You got my money?
WALTER
Where's the guy?
GLORIA
Hey, Snowball, our ride is here!
WALTER
What do you mean your ride is here?
GLORIA
Let him in, he's fine.
Walter grabs his head with both hands and tries to figure
out what to do next. Meanwhile, Gloria turns around and
unlocks the rear door for Snowball. He gets in.
SNOWBALL
(to Gloria)
Is this the connection?
GLORIA
No. This is the guy looking for the
two motherfuckers you told me
about.
SNOWBALL
(to Walter)
I don't want to mess around with
them. They are certified crazy.
Saying this, Snowball opens the door and tries to get out of
the car.
16.
GLORIA
(to Snowball)
Get your ass back in this damn car!
We are not looking for them now, he
just wants to know who they are and
where he can find them.
Snowball closes the door. Walter takes down all the windows
of the car because he can't bear with Snowball's aroma.
GLORIA
(to Walter)
Let's go.
WALTER
Where?
GLORIA
113th and Normal. That's where my
connection is. We can talk as
you're driving.
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WALTER
So... What can you tell me about
these guys?
SNOWBALL
They're nuts!
WALTER
I already heard that. Anything
else?
SNOWBALL
Crazy motherfuckers.
WALTER
Before I give either of you a dime,
you're going to tell me more than
that they are two crazy
motherfuckers! What the hell are
their names?
SNOWBALL
One of them is called Crazy A. All
the dope boys and whores around
here know them by Crazy A and his
boy.
17.
WALTER
I need names, addresses,
descriptions of what they look
like, what car are they driving and
anything else!
WALTER
Just ask any of these dope boys.
They can tell you exactly who they
are. They're driving a different
car every time someone sees them.
GLORIA
Stop! Give me the money now.
Walter pulls over. Snowball opens the rear door and goes out
of the car. Walter takes out his wallet and gives her the
fifty dollars.
Gloria goes out of the car and disappear into a dark alley
along with Snowball.
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE FOUR
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
A white BMW pulls next to his car. SHUN goes out of the BMW
and Walter goes out too.
SHUN
What's going on dawg!
WALTER
You, player, you're what's going
on.
SHUN
Long time no see, nigga. What do
you need?
WALTER
My cousin disappeared brother. I'm
looking for her and got a lead on
two guys who are called Crazy A and
his boy. Know something?
SHUN
Yeah, I heard they're two crazy
motherfuckers.
WALTER
So did I. Do you know their names?
SHUN
One guys is Allen and the other one
is Keith. But let me tell you
something. You don't want to fuck
with them two niggers. They are
fucking dangerous! They've probably
killed ten niggas and a dozen of
whores. Those two ain't no joke! If
you fuck with them you better be
ready to die.
SHUN
When you called me I thought you
were ready to get back in the game,
but now that I know what you want,
let me give you some free advice -
those two niggas are truly fucked
up! They'll hunt down and kill your
black ass if they find out you're
looking for them or sending the
cops their way.
Shun walks back to his car, shaking his head and mumbling.
2.
SHUN
Man, let it go... Let it go!
WALTER
(to himself)
What have I gotten myself into..?
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
WALTER
Yo, man. Can I see you?
SHUN
Where are you?
WALTER
Same spot you left me.
SHUN
Stay there. I'm coming.
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The white BMW pulls over and Shun comes out of it. He walks
to Walter's car. Walter is inside with his head down. Shun
knocks on the window.
SHUN
Are you alright man?
WALTER
I don't know what to do right now.
SHUN
Come for a ride and we'll talk.
Walter starts the engine and moves the car to a parking spot
next to the car wash. He locks his car and gets inside the
BMW. Shun drives off.
CUT TO:
3.
INT.SHUN'S CAR
SHUN
You know I'm happy for ya brother.
Going to college, leaving the game
behind. I'm real proud of you.
WALTER
Thanks!
SHUN
The game is not the same anymore.
Everyone's for himself, homie and
that's why those crazy ass niggas
keep doing what they're doing.
There's nobody to hold them
accountable.
WALTER
I don't know man... I just don't
know what to do. Could Sandra
really be dead...?
SHUN
Look, I'll talk to some people and
see what I can dig out but don't
mention this to anyone because we
could end up dead.
WALTER
Thanks, Shun!
SHUN
I'll call you when I got something.
By that time they had returned to the car wash. Shun pulls
over and Walter goes out of the BMW and walks to his car.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
SHUN
Why do you think she's dead? I
mean... How do you know?
4.
WALTER
I don't know for sure but the
family has not heard from her in
three months. It's not like her to
not check in, despite her
addiction, which means she is
probably dead.
SHUN
Okay, let's say she's dead. Where
is the body, then? Because, with no
body, you have no crime. I don't
mean any harm Walk, but she's just
another missing bitch, if you know
what I mean..
WALTER
Shun, you said they have killed at
least ten people,right? So tell me,
were the bodies ever found?
SHUN
Yes, because they wanted them to be
found and send a message that they
were not to be fucked with.
WALTER
What about all the women they
killed? What happened to their
bodies?
SHUN
Bro, they just disappeared one day
and nobody heard from them again,
just like your cousin.
WALTER
So, we need to follow them and see
where they go, or better yet, let's
give them a whore and follow her
and see where they go.
SHUN
Man, you talking about some TV
shit! What whore do you know that's
stupid enough to do some shit like
that?
WALTER
Then let's ask the police if they
have undercover people, right?
SHUN
Man, you trippin'! I can't afford
to have the police around me, I got
a business to take care of.
WALTER
I don't know man... I don't know.
5.
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NEXT DAY.
WALTER
Yes?
GLORIA
Hi, Walter! It's Gloria.
WALTER
Yeah, I know. What you got?
GLORIA
I have some good info but I need
hundred bucks.
WALTER
What?! Hundred dollars?! Have you
lost your mind?
GLORIA
Listen, man, I found where those
two crazy motherfuckers take their
whores to get high and fuck them.
WALTER
Are you sure of the exact
location?!
GLORIA
Uhm... Snowball knows. His crazy
ass followed them to the house. I
told him he was stupid and that
they would kill him if they knew
what he was doing.
WALTER
Why do you like Snowball so much?
GLORIA
He's my younger brother. He was
trying to help me get straight and
got caught up. We've been watching
each other's back for the past five
years, but I'm tired and he is sick
with the HIV virus. We can't afford
the medicine. Eventually, my
brother is going to die.
6.
WALTER
Where is he now? I need the address
of where those guys go to get high.
GLORIA
I asked him to meet up with us at
115th and Halsted, where he likes
to hang out. People know Snowball
around there and Crazy A and his
boy are less likely to do any harm
to him. We have got to find him
before they kill him!
WALTER
Look stay there. I'm coming.
CUT TO:
GLORIA
I've looked around but I can't find
him anywhere... I hope he's not
dead.
WALTER
Let's ride around, see if we can
find him.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
NEWS REPORTER
Today, the police found the body of
R.L.Jackson, also known as
Snowball, dumped in a garbage can
behind a car wash on 115th Halsted.
This is the third body of a known
drug user found in the past three
months. Their throats have been
cut, so the investigators are sure
this is a murder but for now
there's nothing on the murderer.
7.
ZOOM OUT.
WALTER
(speaking to himself)
Oh... God... What did I get myself
into...?
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2:30AM.
GLORIA
Hey! Sorry for calling that late.
WALTER
What do you have?
GLORIA
I was just checking through my
texts when I saw that Snowball sent
me a text maybe right before he
died.
WALTER
And?
GLORIA
It has the address of an abandoned
house at South Eggleston.
WALTER
Where are you?
GLORIA
Same old spot.
WALTER
Wait there, I'm coming.
CUT TO:
Walter pulls over next to Gloria and she gets in the car.
They drive off in a rush.
CUT TO:
8.
WALTER
Where are we headed exactly?
GLORIA
What are you doing?
WALTER
I'm going to take a look around.
GLORIA
What?! Are you insane?
WALTER
Come on, it's 3AM. Who's awake at
that time?
GLORIA
We are.
WALTER
Anyways, come on.
They get out of the car and slowly walk to the old house. As
they get closer they start to express their fear.
GLORIA
(whispering)
Do you want to break in and look
around?
WALTER
(whispering)
Hell no! Not by myself.
GLORIA
(whispering)
Well then, should we call the
police?
WALTER
(whispering)
What should I tell them? That I
found where two crazy motherfuckers
get high, fuck and kill street
whores? Gloria, you're just as
crazy as them!
WALTER
(whispering)
Come on! Let's go back.
Gloria follows him back to the car. They get inside and
Walter drives off.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
WALLACE
Didn't they tell you they'll call
you back if they got something?
WALLACE
I have something very important to
tell the detective about the case
and I need to talk with him now!
MARSHALL
Make it quick. I have another job
to do.
WALTER
I think I've found where the two
crazy men take the girls and kill
them. They're probably also buried
there, that's why you can't find
them.
MARSHALL
What the fuck are you talking
about? What men? What house and
what is this shit you're talking
about dead bodies?
WALTER
All the disappeared women in the
past four months.
10.
MARSHALL
Listen, in order to break into
someone's home we need a search
warrant. Do you know what that is,
Mr.Best?
The detective gets inside his car and drives off, not giving
a chance to Walter to explain.
WALTER
Yo.
SHUN
Man... I watched the news. Did you
hear about Snowball?
WALTER
Yeah, I know already.
SHUN
I told you those motherfuckers are
dangerous and would kill a nigga in
a heartbeat.
WALTER
Yeah, you told me man, but that
still doesn't make it right what
these fuckers are doing! But...
SHUN
But what nigga?
WALTER
I fear he might have spoken why he
did all this... I think they might
be coming for me next and I don't
know what to do..
SHUN
Do you remember Henry Long from
high school? The quarterback of our
team?
WALTER
Yeah, what about him?
SHUN
Well, he works in the gang unit
over there on 111th Street.
WALTER
How do you know this?
11.
SHUN
I make my living on these streets,
man. You got to know who is what,
and that includes the police too.
WALTER
Do you think he might help me>
SHUN
I don't know, man.. All you can do
is ask at this point.
WALTER
I remember him well. We all
graduated from high school
together. In fact, he and I had
several classes together.
SHUN
Exactly. Just speak to him.
WALTER
Okay, thanks!
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WALLACE
Let me guess. You want to see
Detective Willis.
WALTER
No ma'am. I am here to see a gang
officer named Henry Long.
WALLACE
He works nights and he won't be in
until five PM. But I tell you what,
Mr. Best, let me check to see if he
is working tonight because I would
hate to see you keep coming back
for no reason.
WALTER
Thank you!
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4:45 PM
WALLACE
(the the relief officer)
Mr. Best over there is waiting to
meet gang specialist Henry Long.
RELIEF OFFICER
He can take a seat and wait.
WALTER
Thank you!
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5:05.
WALTER
Sorry, could you please check if
Henry Long is here?
RELIEF OFFICER
Yes. He's coming.
HENRY
Walter Best, my man! How are you
doing brother? I heard you left
town to go back to school.
Walter gives him a surprised look.
13.
HENRY
Yeah, news travels fast around
here, and bad news travel even
faster. How can I help you, Walt?
WALTER
Is there some place we can speak
more private?
HENRY
Is that serious?
WALTER
Yes.
HENRY
Okay, come to my office.
HENRY
Tell me, now what's so serious you
want to talk about?
WALTER
I've found the murderers of the
bodies that were found in the past
three months. I know their names,
their address and I suspect they
have abducted, murdered and buried
the bodies in the house they live
in.s
HENRY
Wow! Okay, let me- just-...
Henry rushes to get out some pen and paper so he can write
everything down. He manages with some effort to do it
quickly.
HENRY
Okay, I'm listening.
WALTER
First, I don't know last names.
First guy is named Allen, the other
one is Keith. These psychopaths
take street prostitutes, get them
drugged and most likely kill
them... Although I'd be much
happier if they're just held
hostages.
14.
HENRY
Why?
WALTER
My cousin is among the missing
girls.
HENRY
I see.
TIME LAPSE.
HENRY
I'm absolutely amazed by how much
information you have on this case.
I'm going to investigate this and
I'll get back to you.
WALTER
Thank you! Thank you, sir!
HENRY
Here, type down your number here.
Walter grabs the pen and paper and types his number.
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Walter notices this and takes a left turn, then a right one.
He looks in the rear mirror and the white car is following
him.
Walter manages to get out of the car and rushes into the
station.
CUT TO:
HENRY
Walter, what happened? Come, let's
go in my office. Take a breath.
WALTER
I thought I was going to die! Those
motherfuckers really are crazy!s
They followed me back to the
fucking police station! Who does
shit like that?!
Walter is overexcited.
HENRY
Walter. Walter! Calm down.
WALTER
To calm down? Do you understand
what I'm saying!? They just tried
to kill me right in front of a
police station!!!s
HENRY
These men have over twenty years of
gang experience on the south side
of Chicago and they had never heard
of Allen or Keith.
WALTER
Go take a look at my car if you
don't believe me.
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WALTER
Here. If these are not bulletholes,
I must be dreaming.
HENRY
Yes, they are. Shit.
HENRY
Everyone, follow me.
HENRY
Contact sergeant Charles Joyner and
tell her to meet with us at my
office.
HENRY
(to Walter)
Walter, wait here. I'll be right
back.
CUT TO:
HENRY
Come on, Walter! You're leading us
to that house.
CUT TO:
CUT TO:
Police cars arrive from both sides of the road and surround
the house at a safe distance.
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE FIVE
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
OFFICER
Sir, the house is clear but it
smells like dead bodies. We're
going to search it better to see
what is going on.
HENRY
Alright. Take Walter somewhere more
safe, officer.
OFFICER
Yes, sir. Mr. Best, please follow
me.
Walter goes out of the car and follows the officer. They go
to a car, get in and the officer drives off.
CUT TO:
WALTER
Where are we going?
OFFICER
Somewhere safe.
WALTER
What are we doing back at the
station?
OFFICER
Told you. I'm taking you somewhere
safe. Come on.
The officer gets out of the car and Walter follows with a
little hesitation.
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OFFICER
No.
WALTER
Am I under arrest?
OFFICER
No but you can't leave either.
WALTER
Can I at least make a phone call?
OFFICER
Not now, but maybe later when the
dicks get here.
WALTER
What are they doing?
OFFICER
Processing the crime scene, and
that could take a while.
WALTER
Okay, can I get some food or
something to drink? I'm starving.
OFFICER
Sure.
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WRIGHT
Hello, Mr. Best. I'm detective
Wright and this is detective
Duplassis.
DUPLASSIS
Mr. Best, can I ask you to tell us
your story again?
3.
WALTER
Do I need a lawyer?
WRIGHT
You tell us, Walter. Do you think
you need one?
DUPLASSIS
No, man, we were just fucking with
you. We talked to your friend, Gang
Specialist Henry Long and he filled
us in on what was going on.
WRIGHT
Yeah but we still need a full
description of these guys you're
talking about.
WALTER
Well, they're two crazy
motherfuckers.
DUPLASSIS
Yes, we know that, sir. We need
something more. What kind of car
were they driving? Did you see the
plate? Do you know their last
names? Any addresses?
WALTER
I-I... Wait! Do you really think I
was trying to get their license
plate while they were shooting at
me?
WRIGHT
Could you give our artist a
description of them? Maybe you can
help us with a composite drawing of
what they looked like.
WALTER
I'm not trying to be funny here but
all I saw was two crazies from the
waist up shooting in my direction.
The driver was brown skinned and
the passenger was a little darker,
with a crazy look in his eyes. He
was mean mugging me.
4.
DUPLASSIS
How did they know you were going to
the police?
WALTER
I don't know!
DUPLASSIS
Did you tell anyone where you're
going?
WALTER
Yes. Yes, I told Gloria.
DUPLASSIS
Who the hell is Gloria?
WALTER
She's a prostitute I met while
looking for Sandra. Gloria and her
now dead brother led me to these
guys.
WRIGHT
How did the brother die?
WALTER
He was found in a garbage can
behind the car wash near 115th and
Halsted two days ago.
DUPLASSIS
We'll be right back.
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WRIGHT
Why would she tell them you were
going to the police if she is your
friend?
WALTER
They must have caught her and made
her talk.
5.
WRIGHT
Do you have her number?
WALTER
Yes, I do.
WRIGHT
Then call and ask her.
WALTER
Well, you took my phone.
CUT TO:
DUPLASSIS
She probably has a date right now
and can't answer the phone. You
know it's not polite to talk with
your mouth full.
WALTER
Real funny. Can we go out and look
for her?
WRIGHT
Where exactly could we look for a
prostitute at nine in the morning?
WALTER
Every time she asked me to meet
her, she was near or at 115th and
Halsted. Let's go there!
WRIGHT
I'm saying it again - it is nine in
the morning. Prostitutes come out
at night.
WALTER
Ugh... Fine. Can I go home to take
a shower and change my clothes?
WALTER
We?
6.
DUPLASSIS
Yes, Walter, we're coming with you.
WALTER
What? Why?
DUPLASSIS
We can't risk to get you killed.
CUT TO:
Outside two police cars are parked and officers are having a
chat.
RADIO
All units, a body of what appears
to be a female prostitute had just
been found in a garbage can in the
alley of 120th and Normal.
All officers look at each other and then to Walter who just
comes out of the house and walks towards them.
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WRIGHT
Walter, come with us!
WALTER
Why do I have to go? I don't want
all these people to see me talking
to the police.
DUPLASSIS
We need you to come with us.
He walks with them and as they get near the garbage can, he
sees Gloria's legs hanging off the can.
WALTER
Oh my God! That's Gloria!
DUPLASSIS
Oh... Oh! Her ass... I see. Men.
WRIGHT
It's time for you to go home. We'll
get back with you later. We have to
process this crime scene now.
WALTER
Hell to the no! Those two crazy
motherfuckers are still out there,
and they might know where I live. I
ain't going nowhere! You guys have
to put me into some kind of witness
protection or something.
WRIGHT
What if we assign a marked police
car to you and your house?
WALTER
Hell no! That's telling everybody
on my block that I'm working with
the police. I have to live there
after this shit is over, if I'm
alive.
WRIGHT
Okay, we will get you a hotel room.
WALTER
Not here in this city. No ma'am,
unless it is downtown with a police
guard standing outside my room.
WRIGHT
We'll try to get it authorized.
Stay here for now.
WALTER
Okay. Thank you!
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The officer in front of the room hears the phone and glances
at the door.
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WRIGHT
Hey, Walter. Is everything alright?
WALTER
Yes. I'm sleeping, detective.
WRIGHT
Okay, sorry. Call us when you feel
like talking.
WALTER
Can we do this around nine?
WRIGHT
Sure, but we'll be going back to
the station because of the
magnitude of this case.
WALTER
What do you mean? What's going on?
WRIGHT
We'll talk in the morning. Get a
good night of sleep.
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7AM
OFFICER
Good morning, Mr.Best!
WALTER
Good morning!
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9.
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WALTER
What's going on?
WRIGHT
I have an overcoat and a hat for
you to put on. We want you to look
like an officer. We don't want
people to know who you are just
yet, if you don't mind.
WALTER
I'm absolutely down for it!
WRIGHT
Here. Put them on.
CUT TO:
Walter is now wearing the coat and the hat. Along with the
other officers they pass by the reporters remaining
unrecognized.
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WALTER
Good morning, Officer Wallace!
She glances at him and smiles, shaking her head.
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10.
WRIGHT
How did you find them?
WALTER
They found me.
WRIGHT
Okay, let's start from the
beginning. Who did you talk to, to
find their names?
WALTER
Gloria and Snowball... Who are both
dead.
WRIGHT
Anyone else?
WALTER
There... There is someone but I
don't think he'll want to talk to
the cops.
WRIGHT
Mr. Best, do you understand the
situation? We have two psychopaths
on the streets and we need to get
to them before they kill someone
else!
WALTER
Yes, I know! I know. Okay, let me
call him and see what happens.
Walter takes out his phone and dials Shun. The phone rings
but there is no answer. He tries again and a third time but
the result is the same.
WRIGHT
Do you know where he lives?
WALTER
No... But I think his mother still
lives in the house he grew up.
That's on 104th and Wallace.
DUPLASSIS
Let's go! Walter, you'll do the
talking.
Everyone stands up and leave the office.
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11.
SHUN
What the hell are you doing here
and who is this bitch you brought
to my mama's house!?
SHUN
Bitch, you the police!
DUPLASSIS
Yes, I am and I need you to calm
down, sir.
LILLY
What's going on?
DUPLASSIS
(to Shun)
Do you have any weapons on you?
SHUN
No.
She searches him anyways to find out he's telling the truth.
She then picks her radio.
DUPLASSIS
(on the radio)
I'm in.
DUPLASSIS
(to Lilly)
Is there anyone else in the house?
DUPLASSIS
Could you please open the back
door?
Lilly follows the request and as she opens the back door
detectives Patterson and Byrd walk in and start searching
the house for another person.
WRIGHT
(To Duplassis)
Did you search him?
DUPLASSIS
Yes, he's clean.
WRIGHT
Do it again.
PATTERSON
All clear.
SHUN
(to Walter)
You got that dope fiend and whore
killed, and now you trying to get
me and my mama killed! I told your
ass not to fuck with them two
niggers! I told you they were some
crazy motherfuckers!
DUPLASSIS
Calm down!
WRIGHT
Calm down!
DUPLASSIS
(to Lilly)
Please, you can wait up in your
bedroom but don't use the phone
while we're here, okay?
LILLY
Okay.
WRIGHT
(to Shun)
Listen to me. We don't give a damn
what you do for a living. We are
looking for the two guys you call
Allen and Keith, or Crazy A and his
boy. Now, where the fuck are they!?
SHUN
I don't know where those guys are,
man.. I don't fuck with them like
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13.
SHUN (cont'd)
that. I told numb-nuts over there
not to fuck with them.
WRIGHT
Well, we need something to help us
find them before they kill again.
Do you want someone to get killed,
Shun!?
WRIGHT
You need to think, and I mean think
real hard, because we're not
leaving here until you tell us
something. Now, what's it going to
be?
SHUN
Damn, man, I heard they go to this
after-hours club just south of
127th Street near Michigan. I've
heard they like to fuck with the
strippers and get high in the back
of the club. I don't know for sure
but I know the owner of the club,
Big Mike and I know he fucks with
them.
WRIGHT
He "fucks with them"?
SHUN
I believe he sells them drugs and
they do little jobs for him.
WRIGHT
What type of jobs?
SHUN
Now don't get me to start lying on
them, but I heard they jack cars
and shit. I've seen them a couple
of times to change plates on a car
and drive it around for a few days
before they get it to Big Mike. I
also know that if Big Mike wants
someone to get hurt he sends the
boys again.
WRIGHT
Does Big Mike know what they do on
their own?
14.
SHUN
Probably, but as long as he's
getting paid he doesn't give a
fuck.
DUPLASSIS
How do we get in touch with Big
Mike?
SHUN
I don't have a number or something
but you can find him in his club
tonight. He's there making sure
everything goes smooth.
WRIGHT
How are we supposed to know who
these guys are when we see them?
You are the only person who can
recognize them.
SHUN
And get me killed because I work
with the police!? Hell no, that
shit right there ain't happening!
WRIGHT
So, how do we get inside the club,
Shun?
SHUN
You can't. You look too much like a
cop, but your girlfriend here cab
get in all day and night.
SHUN
All she has to do is dress the part
and walk right in.
DUPLASSIS
You mean if I dress like a skank
whore, they'll let me in?
SHUN
That's right, lady. You're their
type. If you are looking for them
once they hear about the new sexy
lady, trust me, they will
eventually show up.
WRIGHT
How often do you go to the
after-hour joint?
15.
SHUN
Only when one of the guys is
throwing a bachelor party or
something like that.
WRIGHT
Any parties scheduled for the next
couple of days?
SHUN
Not that I know of, but tomorrow is
Friday, and there's always a party
on Friday night.
WRIGHT
Okay. We're on for tomorrow night.
We'll set up the logistics. You
just answer your phone when we call
you. If Detective Duplassis has no
problem getting in, you just point
them out to her and we will take it
from there. They won't have a clue
that you had anything to do with
their arrest. Any idea how many
guys with guns we have in the club?
SHUN
They check you at the door to make
sure no one is carrying a weapon.
DUPLASSIS
How about the ladies?
SHUN
They just look them over and check
their purses.
WRIGHT
Do they use a detector wand or
anything like it?
SHUN
No.
WRIGHT
Good. Okay, we're good to go.
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WALTER
Sorry, but, can I just go back to
the hotel room until all of this is
over? It's a bit too much for me.
WRIGHT
Of course, yes. Frenchie, can you
please assign an officer to take
Walter to his hotel?
DUPLASSIS
Of course. Walter, come.
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DUPLASSIS
Officer! I need you take Mr.Best
back to his hotel room.
OFFICER
Uh... Back? I don't know where it
is.
DUPLASSIS
He does. Just take him to the hotel
and make sure someone is guarding
his room.
OFFICER
Yes, ma'am.
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FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE SIX
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
ALLEN
Hello. I'm looking for Roger Keith,
he should be in the lock up.
WALLACE
Let me check for you. You can wait
over there.
Wallace points the chairs and Allen takes a seat. She picks
the phone.
WALLACE
He's been arrested for being drunk
and disorderly conduct with a bond
set at one hundred dollars. He
could go to court and probably be
released on his own recognizance in
the morning.
ALLEN
Can't I just pay the bond?
WALLACE
Of course you can.
WALLACE
And what is your name?
ALLEN
Gregory Allen, but you can call me
Greg.
WALLACE
Okay, Greg, and his name is Roger
Keith, right?
ALLEN
Yup.
Allen stands up from the chair and goes to the desk again.
He opens his wallet and hands hundred dollars to the
officer.
WALLACE
Thanks!
ALLEN
That's my number. Maybe I could
call you sometime?
WALLACE
I'm sorry, I have a boyfriend.
ALLEN
Oh, sorry.
WALLACE
No, no, don't worry. It's very kind
of you.
WALLACE
He'll be released in a few minutes.
ALLEN
Thank you.
TIME CUT:
At the same time Sergeant Joyner and his entire gang team
walk right past Allen and Keith.
Allen notices Eric Todd, the informant, and keeps his head
low.
Keith signs his paper and the officer removes the handcuffs.
ALLEN
I hope I see you again, but of
course, not like this.
She smiles at him again. Allen and Keith walk out of the
station.
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KEITH
No?
ALLEN
Well, that's the nigga from 79th
Street, the one who sells clothes
and shit.
KEITH
He must be working with the police.
ALLEN
Yeah, and they must be looking for
us. We have to take care of this.
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ERIC
Drop me off near 79th, somewhere
close to Cottage Grove. I'll walk
from there.
OFFICER
You got it.
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ERIC
I'll ask around for them and
hopefully someone will know
something.
OFFICER
We'll be watching you from a safe
distance.
ERIC
Alright.
Eric starts walking and the police car leaves the alley.
TIME LAPSE.
Eric goes from person to person and from shop to shop in the
neighbourhood, asking for the two crazy guys. Nobody knows
nothing.
TIME CUT:
4.
The police car enters the same alley and Eric comes after a
minute.
OFFICER
Well?
ERIC
Nothing. Nobody has seen them in a
few days.
OFFICER
Damn it! Okay, go home and we'll
try again tomorrow.
ERIC
Alright. Can you give me a ride?
OFFICER
Sure. Get in.
ERIC
Just, leave somewhere near 87th and
Blackstone. I'll walk home from
there.
OFFICER
Okay.
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Eric comes off the car and starts walking. The car leaves.
Six bullets hit him in the chest quickly one after another
and the car drives off, disappearing into the night.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
INT. ALLEN'S CAR
ALLEN
I think it's time for us to leave
this city.
KEITH
It is but we have no money.
ALLEN
What about Mike?
KEITH
What about him?
ALLEN
Maybe he can lend us some cash.
KEITH
I'll try him.
KEITH
(on the phone)
Yo, Mike, what's up!?
BIG MIKE
You know, just chillin' with my
girls. You?
KEITH
We're near the club, Mike. We want
to talk but I'm afraid the cops
might be looking over your place.
BIG MIKE
The cops are looking for you?
KEITH
Yes. Come to the grocery store two
blocks down. We'll be inside. It
should be a safe place to talk.
BIG MIKE
Fifteen minutes.
ALLEN
So?
KEITH
Fifteen minutes he said.
ALLEN
Great!
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6.
WRIGHT
We all set?... Good.
DUPLASSIS
I want two snipers here and here.
Two more need to be placed on the
other side - here and here. Three
female undercover officers will go
inside and we can try to get three
male ones as well. I also want
civil officers walking around the
club. We all storm this shithouse
once we get our eyes on Allen and
Keith!
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Allen and Keith are walking around the store, looking at the
groceries and putting some in a basket.
ALLEN
Mike, what's up!?
BIG MIKE
You tell me what's up? Why is the
police looking for you?
ALLEN
Well, you know...
KEITH
We've killed several whores
recently.
BIG MIKE
God damn you crazy motherfuckers!
How much do you need? I've got
three grand here.
ALLEN
Should be enough to spend some time
away and let things cool off.
BIG MIKE
If you need more just call me.
BIG MIKE
It's a burner, in case the cops are
listening.
ALLEN
Cool!
BIG MIKE
Here, and keep in mind you'll need
to return those once things settle
down.
ALLEN
No problem!
KEITH
We'll go in Gary, Indiana.
BIG MIKE
I'm not sure that's a good spot.
Try Maryville instead, you'll draw
less attention.
ALLEN
Sounds good to me.
KEITH
Yup. Maryville here we come!
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TREVOR
Yo, man! I can't believe who my
eyes are seeing! What the hell
brought you here on Friday nigga?
SHUN
I thought Big Mike was having a
party.
TREVOR
Damn, fool! That was last week!
8.
SHUN
Damn! Well, fuck it I'm here
already.
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GUARD
Damn! You fine with your tall
white-looking ass!
FRENCHIE
These are my girls from Saint Louis
who are looking for a good time.
GUARD
You ladies came to the right place!
The guard waves to them to get inside and the women do so.
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Frenchie and the other ladies get inside and approach the
bar and take a seat. Every man in the club is looking at
them.
Before they are able to order drinks, few men come and offer
to buy them a drink. They all refuse and make their orders.
TIME LAPSE:
THE LADIES DRINK, REFUSE A FEW MORE GUYS BEFORE THEY FINALLY
ACCEPT TO DANCE. THEY PARTY FOR A WHILE.
FRENCHIE
Where is Big Mike?
SHUN
I don't see him here tonight.
FRENCHIE
Go check if he's in the backroom or
even here.
SHUN
Alright.
SHUN
Yo, man, I came to the club
expecting a party for Big Mike and
I don't even see him.
NESS
The party was last week dude.
SHUN
Is Big Mike around at all?
NESS
He's out taking care of some
business for those two stupid
motherfuckers. Them dudes got
themselves into some real trouble
this time. Mike's out there trying
to fix the problem as we speak.
SHUN
Alright. Tell Mike I've stopped by.
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FRENCHIE
So?
10.
SHUN
Mike is out dealing with Allen and
Keith. He's trying to help them
out.
FRENCHIE
Fuck! Okay, wait here.
They get inside the car and Frenchie uses the radio.
FRENCHIE
All units, Big Mike is not here!
Abort! I repeat, Abort!
FRENCHIE
(to Shun)
You can go come. We'll keep an eye
on the club to see if Mike shows
up.
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6AM
The last people from the club come out and walk away.
Ness comes out and locks the door. He walks to his car and
drives off.
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BIG MIKE
Ness!
NESS
Hello, boss. What's going on?
BIG MIKE
First, tell me if something unusual
happened tonight?
NESS
Uhm.. Well, we had a group of girls
from St.Louis. Other than that, no.
BIG MIKE
Did anyone ask where I was?
11.
NESS
I don't think so.
BIG MIKE
Think harder, Ness!
NESS
Oh, yes! That dope boy Shun was
asking about you.
BIG MIKE
What did you tell him?
BIG MIKE
What did you tell him Ness!?
NESS
That you were spending time with
your lady.
BIG MIKE
Good. What did he say next?
NESS
Nothing, he just left.
BIG MIKE
Did the girls leave with him?
NESS
No, I think they left later on.
BIG MIKE
How much later?
NESS
What's going on, boss?
BIG MIKE
Nothing. Listen, Ness, take a look
in your rear view mirror and tell
me if there's a car following you.
NESS
There's a car but I don't know if
they're following me.
BIG MIKE
Turn around and go back to the
club, now!
12.
NESS
What? Why do I need to go back,
boss?
BIG MIKE
Just do the fuck as I tell you,
nigga! Now!!
NESS
Okay, I've turned around.
BIG MIKE
Now look in the mirror again and
tell me what that car is doing.
NESS
They keep going.
NESS
Oh, no, boss! They turned around
and are behind me again.
BIG MIKE
Okay, I need you to turn around
again. This time speed up and see
if they try to keep up with you.
NESS
Yeah, boss, they are keeping up but
they try to stay back a little. I
think they...
BIG MIKE
Shut up and listen! This number I'm
calling you from is dead from now
on. You will not be able to reach
me on this number. You got that!?
NESS
Yeah, boss.
BIG MIKE
I will call you from now on. If I
call you and the police are
listening, the code is "Hold your
horses.". Did you get that, Ness!?
Hold your horses will let me know
to hang up.
NESS
Okay, boss.
13.
BIG MIKE
If they arrest you, ask for a
lawyer right away and ask to make a
phone call. If they let you, call
Black Betty. You got her number,
right?
NESS
Yeah, boss, I got it in my phone.
BIG MIKE
Listen, Ness, they'll be taking
that phone from you so you better
write the number somewhere. You got
pen and paper? Can you do it now?
NESS
Uhm... No, boss, I don't.
BIG MIKE
I'm going to have someone call you
to see if you made it home.
NESS
Who's going to call me? Black
Betty?
BIG MIKE
If the police arrest you, tell her
you need her to call your lawyer.
NESS
But I don't have a lawyer, boss.
BIG MIKE
She'll get you one, fool! Just keep
your damn mouth shut! You hear me!?
Ask for a lawyer and keep your
fucking mouth closed!
NESS
What did I do that I need a lawyer
for, boss?
BIG MIKE
Stop fucking calling me "boss"!!
NESS
What do you want me to call you,
boss? That's what we always call
you.
BIG MIKE
Ness, listen to me very carefully
and for the last time. If they
arrest you, just ask for a lawyer
and call Black Betty to get him. I
know you don't have a lawyer but
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14.
NESS
Okay, I get it now boss.
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BIG MIKE
(to himself out loud)
Why do I fuck with these brainless
motherfuckers?
BIG MIKE
Betty.
BLACK BETTY
Yes, boss, what's up?
BIG MIKE
Listen, this number is not on your
name, is it?
BLACK BETTY
No, it's one of those burners you
gave me.
BIG MIKE
Okay, if you get a call from Ness
asking for a lawyer, ask him where
he is. If he doesn't know, have him
as the cops so the lawyer can know
where to go. Then call me right
away.
BLACK BETTY
What's going on, boss?
BIG MIKE
Stop calling me "boss"!
BLACK BETTY
Well, what do you want me to call
you then?
BIG MIKE
You sound like that stupid ass!
15.
BLACK BETTY
What stupid ass?
BIG MIKE
Just call me on this number, Betty!
I'll tell you what to do next.
BLACK BETTY
What's Ness arrested for?
BIG MIKE
He's not yet! IF he calls you just
do what I told you! You get that!?
BLACK BETTY
Yes, boss.
Mike slams the phone down and breathes deep to calm down.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
BOB
Good morning! This is Bob, what can
I do for you?
BIG MIKE
Morning, Bob. It's Mike. I have a
problem.
BOB
Oh, hi Mike. Is it a big or a
little problem?
BIG MIKE
Huge!
BOB
Are the police involved?
BIG MIKE
Yes... And no.
BOB
I take it for a yes then.
BOB
I take it you are not in custody at
this time. Am I right?
BIG MIKE
Yes, you are.
BOB
Where are you, Mike?
BIG MIKE
On the streets.
BOB
Can you make it to my office?
BIG MIKE
Let's say I'll be there in about an
hour.
BOB
Okay, good. I'll see you then.
Bob hangs up the phone and keeps reading his newspaper while
taking a sip from his coffee.
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BOB
Good to see you, Mike. Tell me
what's going on.
BIG MIKE
Well, in short we're getting hunted
down for murder.
Before Bob can say anything, Mike's cell phone rings. It's
Betty.
BIG MIKE
Sorry, I have to pick up.
BIG MIKE
Betty?
BLACK BETTY
Ness just called. They have him in
custody at the 11th and Cottage
Grove Station, on the second floor
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17.
BIG MIKE
He told you all of that on the
phone!?
BLACK BETTY
Yeah, man, he did! They want to
talk to you, he said. He's been
there for the last two hours and he
said that a lawyer couldn't help
him or you at this point, unless
you turned yourself in right away.
Other than that, all of you are
going down for murder. Who did Ness
kill, boss?
BIG MIKE
You know that stupid motherfucker
won't kill anybody.
BLACK BETTY
Then why are the police saying he
killed them bitches... And it's all
over the TV!?
BIG MIKE
Listen, go get all the money
stashed under the floorboards and
bring them to my lawyer's office.
Then you'll go on a trip to see
your mother in Detroit.
BLACK BETTY
What? All the money?
BIG MIKE
Didn't your ass hear me the first
time, bitch!? Yes, all of it!!
BOB
Okay, now tell me what's going on
exactly.
BIG MIKE
There's these two crazy niggas who
went on a killing spree. I swear I
have nothing to do with that part
of their lives. I know them and
they've done some odd jobs for me
but I'm clean on the murdered
whores.
18.
BOB
What kind of odd jobs are we
talking about?
BIG MIKE
I worked with this guy who runs a
chop shop in South Suburbs and they
would steal cars for the parts he
needed. We all made a little money.
BOB
How much are we talking about,
Mike?
BIG MIKE
Around five hundred dollars per
car, sometimes a little less.
BOB
Tell me the truth right here in my
office, because if you are involved
in these murders and the state can
prove it, you're done. I need to
know just how deep you are involved
with these guys.
BIG MIKE
You know me, I'm a hustler and I
sell a little dope sometimes. I
make most of my money off the
girls, the club and the cars.
That's what I do. I'm not a killer!
I have three daughters, two here in
Chicago and one back in Detroit.
Her mother is sitting outside in
your waiting room right now. I
ain't no motherfucking killer!
BOB
Do you know where these guys are?
BIG MIKE
They said they were going to one
place, but they are probably not
there. One other thing, the police
want me to turn myself in to the
homicide detectives in Area South.
BIG MIKE
Is there anything else?
BIG MIKE
Yes, they are holding one of my
guys, Ness, until I turn myself in.
19.
BOB
What does Mr. Ness have to do with
these murders?
BIG MIKE
Nothing. He works at the club for
me. He's like a bouncer and my
personal security. I pay him eight
hundred dollars a week in cash. He
knows absolutely nothing. Bob, I
need you to get him out.
BOB
My retainer is going to be fifteen
thousand dollars, if you're telling
me the truth. If we have to go to
court, and you know how much I hate
going there, my charge will
definitely go up.
BIG MIKE
Like I said, my baby Mama Betty
should be already sitting in your
waiting room with your money.
Bob stands up and opens the door. He waves and Betty comes
in with a suitcase. Bob takes his seat.
She places it on the desk and opens it. Big Mike takes out
five stacks of one-hundred dollar bills and places them in
front of Bob.
Bob leans to the side and opens his personal safe. He takes
the stacks inside, without counting them, and locks the safe
back.
BOB
Okay, Mike. You have retained my
services. Now let's go to our
friends at Area South Homicide Unit
and see why they are holding an
innocent man. What was his name,
again?
BIG MIKE
Ness. That's his last name.
BOB
Okay, it's nine thirty am now. I'll
give you call around two. When you
come in the station, we will sit
and talk with them. When they ask
you a question you look at me and
I'll tell you how to answer it,
based on what you just told me. If
they ask something we're not
prepared for, we will ask for some
time and discuss how to answer that
question. Do you understand?
20.
BIG MIKE
Yeah, I got it.
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE SEVEN
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
DUPLASSIS
Officer Duplassis. One of the
detectives assigned to the case.
How may I help you?
BOB
Attorney Robert Cushman. I
represent Roderick Michael
Peterson, better known as Big Mike.
DUPLASSIS
Follow me.
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DUPLASSIS
Please, take a seat. I'll be right
back.
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WRIGHT
What is your client's full name?
BOB
Roderick Michael Peterson, born on
June 23rd, 1964. His address of
record is 1836 E.Parkway, Chicago,
Illinois. He currently owns and
operates "Big Mike's Place" near
127th and Michigan.
PATTERSON
Let's see what we know about him.
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2.
Patterson returns.
PATTERSON
Arrested seven times for
drug-related crimes and once for
unlawfully carrying a firearm. No
convictions on record. A speeding
ticket from fifteen years ago and
since then - nothing. He's clean.
BOB
I also represent Mr.Ness.
WRIGHT
We would like to speak with Mike in
person.
BOB
That's the reason I'm here. We'll
negotiate the terms for an arranged
surrender here in the station. I
want an assistant state attorney
present while you interview my
client. I assure you my client has
no idea why the two guys killed
these women and he's a victim as
they are.
WRIGHT
So, the two men worked for your
client, is that right?
BOB
Yes, they did odd jobs for him.
PATTERSON
What sort of jobs are we talking
about?
BOB
That is the reason why we need an
assistant state attorney who has
the power to grant my client
immunity for the things he will be
admitting to.
WRIGHT
Are we talking about his drug
business and the after-hours joint?
And how about those stolen cars? Is
that what we are talking about?
Bob gives each officer a short look.
3.
BOB
Let's say, hypothetically, you hit
all the points. Still, sir, we
would need the ASA to approve any
such deal.
WRIGHT
Look here, Mr.Attorney! We don't
give a shit about all that other
stuff your client and that moron of
a friend he has sitting over there,
are doing. You're wasting our time.
We're on a murder case and we're
looking for two murderers.
BOB
Yes, I understand your situation,
but I have a duty to my client to
protect him.
WRIGHT
Okay, you have him come in.
BOB
Do you all agree to have an ASA
present during the questioning of
my client?
WRIGHT
Give me a minute.
BOB
Can I go out as I need to make a
few phone calls? Meet back here in
fifteen minutes? Everyone agree?
Duplassis points her head to the door and Bob walks out.
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BIG MIKE
What's going on?
BOB
Listen, I'm talking to the
detectives right now. They know
about all of your business
ventures, the dope, the girls and
the after-hour joint, plus the
stolen cars. Good news is that
they're not interested in this,
they just want the two guys
responsible for the murders. Let me
talk a little longer and see what
(MORE)
4.
BOB (cont'd)
happens. Stay by your phone. I'll
call you back once I get a deal.
BIG MIKE
Okay, I'll be waiting.
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WRIGHT
The reality is that we don't know
how much or how deep your client is
involved in this case, and this is
the reason why we need to talk to
him. Your client knows these two
guys, and we think he may even know
where they are hiding. The bottom
line counselor is, he needs to turn
himself in, and now before someone
else gets hurt. You can be present
during any questioning, but we make
no promises beyond that.
BOB
No ASA, no immunity - no interview
with my client.
DUPLASSIS
We'll find him anyways and arrest
him. Public arrest won't be good
for his club, right?
BOB
You got a point.
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BIG MIKE
How is it going?
BOB
I have some bad news, Mike. You'll
need to come to the station and
turn in.
5.
BIG MIKE
What? I paid you fifteen grand,
Bob!
BOB
I know but they threaten to arrest
you publicly if you don't come on
your own. It's the better option in
this case, Mike.
BIG MIKE
Fuck! Fuck! Fuck!!
BOB
Mike, calm down. Just park at the
back of the station and we'll meet
you at the back door. Nobody will
see you.
BIG MIKE
Fine! Fine! I'm coming!
Mike hangs up. Bob looks at his phone and shakes his head
before putting it in his pocket.
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At the back, Mike parks his car and walks to four detectives
and his lawyer. Bob steps forward.
BOB
Calm down and stick to the plan,
okay?
BIG MIKE
Yeah.
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The detectives carefully search Big Mike and once he's clean
they head to the interrogation room.
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Mike and Bob are sitting next to each other, facing the
detectives.
DUPLASSIS
What are Allen and Keith's real
names?
6.
BIG MIKE
Roger Keith and Gregory Allen, but
people call them by their last
names.
DUPLASSIS
How old are they?
BIG MIKE
I believe they're in their late
thirties.
DUPLASSIS
Do you know if they have ever been
arrested?
BIG MIKE
Yes, they just got out of jail
about a year ago.
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PATTERSON
We got them and you won't fucking
believe this!
DUPLASSIS
No fucking way!
WRIGHT
What?
DUPLASSIS
That motherfucker was locked up
downstairs two days ago.
7.
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DUPLASSIS
Have you seen these men?
WALLACE
Yes. This one here.
WALLACE
He gave me his phone number the
other day.
DUPLASSIS
Do you still have it!?
WALLACE
No, I returned it to him letting
him know that I'm in a
relationship.
WALLACE
Who is he?
DUPLASSIS
One of the two guys we believe are
behind the murders of the
prostitutes.
WALLACE
That's them!?
DUPLASSIS
Yes. Do you see what you missed out
on playing hard to get?
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BYRD
What kind of car were they driving
last time you saw them?
8.
BIG MIKE
I believe it was a white Buick.
BYRD
Why were you meeting with them?
BIG MIKE
They called me and said they had
some problems with people, but they
did not say it was the police. They
told me they needed a few dollars
until Monday, and that was on
Friday.
BYRD
How much did you give them?
BIG MIKE
Let me make this clear! I loaned
them five hundred dollars. I didn't
give them shit! I gave them five,
one-hundred-dollar bills with the
understanding they were to pay me
back.
BYRD
Why hundred-dollar bills?
BIG MIKE
That's how I pay. It's easy to
count that way.
DUPLASSIS
Do you always pay your debts using
one-hundred-dollar bills?
BIG MIKE
Yes. Like I said, it makes counting
the money easy.
DUPLASSIS
Did they tell you where they were
going?
BIG MIKE
They said Gary,Indiana. I asked
them what the fuck was in Gary.
Allen said he had a girlfriend
there who would let them hang out
for a couple of days. That's what
they said, but you know how niggas
lie. They are probably in Detroit,
or who knows where.
9.
DUPLASSIS
Do you know the girlfriend's name?
BIG MIKE
No.
BOB
Are we done here?
BYRD
No, we need a minute.
BIG MIKE
Are we good, Bob?
BOB
I don't know. Just shut up.
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DUPLASSIS
Mr. Cushman, can we talk for a
minute?
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DUPLASSIS
We'll be holding your client and
Mr.Ness for a while.
BOB
No way! They're not charged!
DUPLASSIS
We know that.
WRIGHT
Let me remind that we have the
right to hold a suspect for
forty-eight hours without a charge.
BOB
Okay, can I have a word with my
client in private?
10.
DUPLASSIS
Of course. Take as long as you
need.
BOB
This is an interrogation room and
it's not exactly private. Can we go
somewhere else?
BYRD
Sure, come to my office.
BOB
(to Big Mike)
Mike, come.
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BYRD
Take as long as you need. Just
don't touch anything.
Bob nods and the detective closes the door from outside.
BIG MIKE
What's going on?
BOB
They'll hold you in custody for a
while.
BIG MIKE
What? How long?
BOB
By law they can hold you for
forty-eight hours. After that they
have to charge you or release you.
This is a good thing, Mike.
BIG MIKE
How the fuck is this a good thing?
BOB
They're not charging you straight
away. This speaks that they don't
have anything on you. Just keep
your mouth shut and it will be all
fine.
11.
BIG MIKE
Okay, can you call Betty and let
her know that everything is okay
and I'll be home shortly?
BOB
I'll tell her the truth, that we
won't know for at least forty-eight
hours. I'm going to talk with Ness,
you just be silent, okay?
BIG MIKE
Okay.
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
DUPLASSIS
What do you got?
BYRD
Take a look. The guys had a parole
officer named Mark Daniels. We got
his phone number.
WRIGHT
I'll get him right away.
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Duplassis has taken the seat behind the computer and Byrd is
standing next to her. Wright walks back in.
WRIGHT
We got him and he gave us an
updated address for both men.
DUPLASSIS
Get him here. He should have more
info about that place.
WRIGHT
You want to raid the house?
DUPLASSIS
Fuck yeah I do! What if they're
hiding there?
12.
WRIGHT
I doubt it but okay.
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DUPLASSIS
What else do you know about the
place?
DANIELS
The owner has a contract with the
state. They pay him for managing a
property housing ex-cons.
WRIGHT
Do you know how many people live
there?
DANIELS
Last time they were twenty-four.
WRIGHT
I'll arrange everything. What was
the address again?
DANIELS
It's near 82 and Marquette.
DUPLASSIS
Who's the owner of the place? We
need to talk to him first.
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6AM, SUNDAY
The police and FBI have taken positions near the building.
WRIGHT
Alright, men. This is it. Let's go!
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13.
TRUCK TO DUPLASSIS.
DUPLASSIS
Police! Nobody move!
Two men are sleeping on separate beds inside the flat. They
wake up and stand up from their beds.
DUPLASSIS
Get on the floor! Now!
DUPLASSIS
Let me see your hands!
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Wright rushes to the man and grabs his gun, before he can
use it.
WRIGHT
Get on the ground! On the fucking
ground, now!!!
The man obeys the order and Wright cuffs him. Meanwhile
other officers and FBI agents do the same with the rest of
the men in the flats.
CUT TO:
WRIGHT
Well done, Frenchie.
DUPLASSIS
Finally a successful raid! Let's
see what these guys have to tell
us.
CUT TO:
WALTER
Hey, Pam! I've got us a room at the
Hyatt. Want to come?
PAM
Wow! Yes, of course!
WALTER
Bring in some clothes, we'll be
here for a couple of days.
PAM
Why? What are we doing there?
WALTER
You know they got room service. We
can eat, drink and watch movies.
PAM
Isn't that quite expensive?
WALTER
It's all on me, baby. Come over to
room 885.
PAM
Alright, I'm on my way. I love you!
WALTER
Love you too baby!
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WALTER
He said he's watching the room
across the hall.
PAM
Weird.
WALTER
I know, right? Wanna order some
food?
PAM
Fuck yeah, I'm starving!
WALTER
Here, choose your meal and press
one on the phone to reach the room
service.
TIME LAPSE.
Pam orders food, they eat, watch a movie and then have sex.
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE EIGHT
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
ALLEN
Room for two, please. With separate
beds if possible.
RECEPTIONIST
Just a moment.
RECEPTIONIST
I've got Room 114 free. May I have
your ID card, please?
ALLEN
Sure.
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Allen and Keith grab some cash from the suitcase and put it
under one of the beds.
ALLEN
Want to grab something to drink?
KEITH
Sure.
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ALLEN
(to Keith)
Hey, check this out.
KEITH
I don't know about you but I'm
going in!
Keith stands up, grabbing his drink.
ALLEN
Hell yeah, I'm in!
2.
ALLEN
Hello, ladies!
DARLENE
Hi!
KEITH
What are two beautiful ladies like
you doing here alone?
ROSLYN
Having a drink? Cooling off.
ALLEN
Do you mind if we sit with you?
We're here alone as well.
DARLENE
No, not at all. Are you here for
the annual Blues Fest?
KEITH
Yes, exactly. You're here for the
same show?
ROSLYN
Yup!
DARLENE
Do you guys have tickets?
ALLEN
Actually, no. Do you?
DARLENE
Yes, of course. They're pretty
expensive, though.
ALLEN
How much?
DARLENE
Hundred a piece. Ripped off my
pockets but it's worth it!
KEITH
Well, can I suggest something?
KEITH
Let me buy your tickets.
DARLENE
And we'll miss the show.
ALLEN
Not if I get you new tickets.
ROSLYN
Well, that's very kind of yours.
ALLEN
And maybe some drinks?
ALLEN
What is your preffered choice?
DARLENE
Grey Goose.
ALLEN
Good one. I'll be right back.
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TIME LAPSE.
Allen and Keith spend the night with Darlene and Roslyn,
talking and laughing. The more they speak the closer they
become.
TIME CUT:
ALLEN
I love these girls!
KEITH
They're so nice.
ALLEN
Darlene gave me her number.
ALLEN
I'll call her tomorrow for the
show.
KEITH
I want to fuck that bitch and slit
her throat!
ALLEN
Oh yeah!!
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Allen and Keith enter the hall and immediately spot Darlene
and Roslyn. They approach them.
ALLEN
Hey, ladies!
DARLENE
Oh, hi! How are you?
ALLEN
Perfect! You?
ROSLYN
Ready for the show!
KEITH
We've got the front rows.
ALLEN
Darlene, do you mind if you sit
next to me?
DARLENE
No, not at all.
They walk through the doors and head to the front row and
take their seats.
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ALLEN
Darlene, can I take you for a
dinner tonight? Just you and me?
DARLENE
Yes. Yes, of course.
5.
ALLEN
I'll wait for you at the reception
of the hotel at seven. Is it okay?
DARLENE
Yeah, perfect actually! See you
there.
KEITH
(to Allen)
Man that bitch is so sexy!
ALLEN
Roslyn?
KEITH
No, Darlene! I'll have to get some
duct tape.
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INT. RESTAURANT
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INT. RESTAURANT
SAME VIEW.
CUT TO:
EXT. RESTAURANT
Allen and Darlene walk out of the restaurant and head back
to the hotel.
DARLENE
Sorry about that.
ALLEN
About what?
DARLENE
All the crying.
6.
ALLEN
Oh, no. Don't worry about it. I'm
really sorry to hear that your
husband left just like that. You're
a wonderful woman!
DARLENE
Thank you! You're a real nice guy.
There isn't much left like you
these days. Most men look just for
sex and that's it.
ALLEN
I can't even imagine how hard it
must be to take care of two
children alone.
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ALLEN
You know... I don't want to sound
like one of those assholes but...
DARLENE
But?
ALLEN
Well, I really like you. Do you
want to come up in my room?
DARLENE
Look, I like you too but I think
it's a bit early for this.
ALLEN
I don't know... I really, really
like you.
DARLENE
I mean it, Allen. It's a bit too
early.
ALLEN
Okay, I'm sorry.
The receptionist hears them and smiles while looking down,
pretending to be doing something.
7.
DARLENE
We're leaving tomorrow. I'm going
back to Chicago. I would love it if
you call me once you get back.
ALLEN
Definitely! Take care, Darlene.
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ALLEN
Look, she just has trust issues and
needs more time!
KEITH
What do you mean she needs more
time? God damn it, Greg, you're
modern day Casanova! Get that bitch
here or let's go to their room and
fucking rape them!
ALLEN
Roger, calm the fuck down! I want
to fuck her too but I'm not sure I
want to kill her.
KEITH
What? You met a lonely mother of
two and got soft? What will her
children do without a mommy!?
ALLEN
It's not that!
KEITH
Then what is it?
ALLEN
I think I really like her. She's
not like those whore that sell
their bodies and get high. She's...
She's a nice woman.
KEITH
Oh, come on! Stop bullshitting me
brother! We'll go tomorrow morning
to their room, rape them and leave
them for the maids to take care of
their dead bodies!
8.
ALLEN
Fine!
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ALLEN
Shit. They're not here.
KEITH
They left already?
ALLEN
Darlene mentioned they'll be having
breakfast before they leave. Maybe
they're in the restaurant.
KEITH
Let's go.
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INT. RESTAURANT
ROSLYN
Hey! What's up boys!
KEITH
Good morning, ladies!
ALLEN
Mind if we have breakfast with you?
DARLENE
No, come take a seat. We'll be
going in a few minutes, though.
KEITH
You're leaving?
DARLENE
Yup. Break is over. Time to head
back to Chicago and go to work.
ALLEN
Sadly.
DARLENE
Yeah... Well, if you call us we can
see each other back at Chicago.
9.
KEITH
Definitely!
FADE TO BLACK
FADE IN:
Allen is sitting in the car while Keith pays for the gas
they just got. The car is now a Ford Taurus, one that they
stole from the parking lot of the hotel.
KEITH
Go! Go!
ALLEN
What's going on?
Keith shows him the front page of the newspaper. Allen sees
photos of both of them.
ALLEN
Holy shit!
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ALLEN
Try to call Mike.
Keith picks out the phone Big Mike gave them and dials up
the number. The voice mail turns on after a few empty
signals.
KEITH
He doesn't pick up.
ALLEN
Shit! Okay, try Ness.
ALLEN
They must be both in jail. Fuck!
ALLEN
We have to go back to Chicago.
KEITH
Are you insane!?
ALLEN
I want to get Darlene.
KEITH
Damn, you've lost your mind on that
bitch!
ALLEN
Fuck you man!
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BOB
Told you it will be all good, Mike.
BIG MIKE
You've earned those fifteen grand,
Bob. What about Ness?
BOB
They released him yesterday. They
got nothing against both of you.
BIG MIKE
Perfect. I'll be in touch if
something happens again.
BOB
Take care, Mike.
They split ways and Mike goes to his car. He gets inside and
picks his phone, calling Betty.
BIG MIKE
Hey, baby! I'm finally out.
BLACK BETTY
Can I come home now?
BIG MIKE
No, sugar. Stay at your mom's in
Detroit until those fuckers are
behind bars and all this shit is
over.
11.
BLACK BETTY
But I miss you big pappa.
BIG MIKE
I miss you too but it's better that
way. It's safer for you honey.
BLACK BETTY
Ugh.. Okay.
BIG MIKE
I'll call you later.
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The phone rings and Allen looks at Keith, who's looking down
at the phone.
KEITH
It's Mike.
ALLEN
Give me the phone.
ALLEN
Mike!
BIG MIKE
Allen. I've been locked up for two
days because of your shit. The
whole city of Chicago is on a
manhunt for you too. They even got
rewards for anyone who can find
your asses - dead or alive!
ALLEN
What did you tell them, Mike?
BIG MIKE
Nothing. My lawyer got me out but
as I said the whole city is after
you. Get your asses somewhere
hidden.
ALLEN
What about the money we owe you?
BIG MIKE
Forget about it. Go find a safe
place and don't show your faces too
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12.
KEITH
What is it?
ALLEN
The whole city is after us. Mike
thinks there's a reward for our
heads.
KEITH
Fuck! Do you think that's true?
ALLEN
I really don't know.
KEITH
Wait! Look!
ALLEN
Maybe we can stay there for a while
if nobody's home.
KEITH
If there's someone home we'll send
him to heaven brother. Come on!
Allen takes a turn on the dirt road and they stop in front
of the house. They get off the car.
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ALLEN
Looks abandoned.
KEITH
I'll get the car behind the house.
ALLEN
Good idea.
Keith gets in the car and drives it around the house and
parks in the rear.
13.
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Allen tries the light switch and it works. The house has
electricity and it looks like it was abandoned not long ago.
There's still some furniture left inside.
KEITH
Looks good.
ALLEN
It got electricity too.
KEITH
Let's wait for sunset and we can go
grab something to eat.
ALLEN
Man, how did we come to this
shit... Hiding like some rats.
KEITH
It'll be all fine dude. Don't
worry. We're not going back to
jail!
ALLEN
Hell no!
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Darlene sits on the couch in her living room and watches the
news. She also has several newspapers spread on the table in
front of her.
Darlene writes it down and calls it. She leaves her name and
number to the officer who picked the phone and he tells her
she'll get a call back.
DARLENE
Yes, Darlene Lewis. Yes, sir, this
number I'm calling from... Okay.
Thank you!
The next morning Darlene picks her newspaper and sees the
photos of Allen and Keith on the front page with a huge
title "PSYCHOPATHIC KILLERS ON THE LOOSE".
Her phone rings at this time. She rushes to it and picks up.
DARLENE
Hello?
DUPLASSIS
Detective Felicia Duplassis. Did
you call about the killers?
DARLENE
Ye-Yes, I did.
DUPLASSIS
Ma'am, are you okay?
DARLENE
I-I met them... I met them the-the
other night.
DUPLASSIS
Where are you now ma'am?
DARLENE
Home...
DUPLASSIS
And where is that?
DARLENE
8710 Won-Wonderland...
DUPLASSIS
We're coming.
Darlene puts down the phone and lies down on the couch,
crying.
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Duplassis and Wright are at the front door and ring the
doorbell. Darlene opens the door halfway.
Darlene opens the door wide and steps aside, inviting the
detectives inside.
DARLENE
Please, come in.
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WRIGHT
I don't know what else to say, you
were damn lucky Ms. Lewis!
DUPLASSIS
Do you think Allen might try to
call you?
DARLENE
I hope not.
DUPLASSIS
Look, I understand how you feel but
if he calls you, you need to take
that call. It might be our only
chance to get them.
DARLENE
I see...
DUPLASSIS
Tell him you don't believe the
stories in the news and want to be
with him. Did you tell him anything
about your family?
DARLENE
Only about my daughters.
DUPLASSIS
Good. Then tell him that your
brother is a good lawyer and he'll
be able to get him out of this
mess.
DARLENE
Okay. I'll try.
DUPLASSIS
One more thing. Does he know where
you live?
DARLENE
Yes. I told him.
16.
WRIGHT
This could be a problem. We have to
put a team on your house just in
case he decides to come by.
DUPLASSIS
Ms. Lewis, please, calm down. It
will be all fine. There will be a
police officer with you everywhere
until we catch the killers. You're
safe with us.
WRIGHT
We'll set up a surveillance unit to
watch your house. Also, we'll set
up a device connected to your
phone, so we can track them down if
they call you. If this happens,
press the red button that will be
placed next to your phone and we'll
know what's going on.
DARLENE
O-Okay...
FADE TO BLACK
AREA SOUTH
EPISODE NINE
by
George Dobrev
FADE IN:
DARLENE
Hello?
ALLEN
Hey, Darlene! It's Allen.
DARLENE
Oh, hi!
ALLEN
I believe you saw the news. Let me
explain. I'm not a killer, Darlene.
DARLENE
That's what I thought but why is
this everywhere on the news?
ALLEN
Keith is my cousin and he's sick...
Sick in the head, Darlene. I'm
trying to help him.
DARLENE
I knew you're not a killer. You
can't be... You're such a nice man.
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One of them leaves the coffee and drops the donut, rushing
to the computer.
OFFICER
We got him!
CUT TO:
DUPLASSIS
We got them now!
2.
WRIGHT
(on the radio)
Track them down ASAP!
CUT TO:
OFFICER
They're on 87th and Ashland. It
looks like... It looks like they're
headed our way.
CUT TO:
WRIGHT
(on the radio)
All teams be ready! If they show up
let them get inside first and then
we cuff them!
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Darlene plugs an earphone set into the cell and puts one
earphone in her ear. She picks up.
DUPLASSIS
Put the phone on loudspeaker so we
can hear the conversation.
ALLEN
I don't know where to go, Darlene.
DUPLASSIS
(to Darlene)
Tell him he can stay at your place
and get Keith if he needs to.
3.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
You can stay at my place, Allen.
DUPLASSIS
(to Darlene)
Tell him you miss him.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
I miss you, Allen... Your cousin
can stay here too if he has nowhere
to go.
ALLEN
I can't risk it, Darlene. Can you
come to me instead? The police
might be watching your house. Hold
on a moment...
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Allen puts the call on hold and grabs the burner phone, on
which Keith is calling him.
ALLEN
Yes?
KEITH
Fuck that bitch, Allen! The cops
are at her place, I'm sure about
it!
ALLEN
I'm not leaving her, Roger!
KEITH
Dude, let's go now!
ALLEN
Look, I don't know why but I want
her real bad. We're going to get
her first.
KEITH
Look, pull over and we'll talk.
ALLEN
I'm not leaving without her! You
go, I'll catch up.
KEITH
Hell no! I'm not leaving without
you. You know the police is
probably waiting on us to show up
and out of nowhere they'll jump out
and start shooting at us.
KEITH
I've got an idea!
KEITH
Why don't we grab the lady and the
kid and go get your bitch?
ALLEN
What? Why?
KEITH
If the cops show up they can't be
shooting at us because of the bitch
and the baby.
ALLEN
That's brilliant! Let's do it.
Allen gets back in his car and drives over to the woman. She
glances at him and thinking it's just an old lady who's a
bad driver, continues to tying her baby at the seat.
Keith pushes her inside the car with a gun pointing at her
head.
KEITH
I'll kill you if you make a sound!
WOMAN
Please... Don't hurt my baby!
Allen parks his car in front of the lady's van and gets
inside at the back seat. He carries his phone in hand. Keith
forces the lady to take the wheel.
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KEITH
Man, grab the baby and point this
shit to that bitch. She'll drive to
Darlene's house. I'll follow you at
a short distance and if everything
goes as planned, we let her and the
baby go and you have your sweet
Darlene.
ALLEN
Sounds good.
Keith closes the van door and goes back to his car. The
woman drives off.
ALLEN
Darlene?
DARLENE
Yes?
ALLEN
Listen, a blue van will be pulling
up to your house in the next few
minutes. You can come out and take
the front seat next to the lady.
DARLENE
What lady? Where are you?
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ALLEN
I'm in the back with the baby.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
What baby, Allen? Who is this
woman?
DUPLASSIS
(to Darlene)
Don't leave the house, no matter
what! We're on our way.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
You're not going to hurt the baby,
are you?
ALLEN
Don't worry about that. Just come
out and get in the van.
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The blue van pulls up in front of the house and the woman
blows the horn on Allen's command.
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DARLENE
What should I do?
DUPLASSIS
Wait.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
Yes?
ALLEN
I'm in front. Come down.
DARLENE
Just a minute, Allen. I'm getting
ready.
ALLEN
Hurry up.
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WRIGHT
(on the radio)
All units, do NOT engage. I repeat,
do NOT engage. We need more time.
This is unplanned situation. We
have two civilians, a mother and
her baby.
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INT. DARLENE'S HOUSE
ALLEN
Darlene, come down now or something
bad is about to happen!
7.
DARLENE
(to Allen)
I'm coming, Allen. Please, don't do
anything stupid. Don't hurt that
baby or the lady. I'm coming.
ALLEN
You have one minute.
DUPLASSIS
(to Darlene)
Ms. Lewis do NOT go out of the
house!
DARLENE
(to the detective)
If I don't he is going to hurt the
baby. I can't allow this!
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DUPLASSIS
Pull over.
WRIGHT
What are you going to do?
DUPLASSIS
Pull the fuck over, Richie!!
She starts walking down towards the house, holding her Colt
.45 automatic pistol near her side. She tries her best to
pretend she's just a random person passing by.
As she gets closer she sees Darlene coming out of the front
door. Taking a look at the van, Duplassis can see the
outline of Allen at the back seat.
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WRIGHT
Get the fuck back in the house!!!
KEITH
Fuck! No! Greg!!
KEITH
You fucking pigs!
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Wright helps the woman and the baby come out of the car
while Duplassis starts gets a clear sight at Keith and
starts shooting at him.
She hits him two times in the chest while walking in his
direction. Keith keeps on firing at random directions.
Duplassis aims better and takes one more shot. This time the
bullet hits Keith's head.
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9.
WOMAN
Oh my God! She's covered in blood!
Oh, God! Is she alright!?
WRIGHT
Please, let me take a look.
Wright uses his shirt to wipe off the blood from the baby
and can't find any wounds.
WRIGHT
She's fine. The blood is of the
suspect.
WOMAN
Oh my God! Thank you! Thank you
officer!
KENNETH
Ma'am, come on. Let's take you
somewhere safe.
WRIGHT
Well, good job!
DUPLASSIS
Good indeed. The motherfuckers are
dead! Oh, shit!
WRIGHT
What?
DUPLASSIS
Ms. Lewis! Where is she?
WRIGHT
She got back inside the house.
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DUPLASSIS
It's over, Ms. Lewis. They're dead.
10.
DARLENE
Are they? Are you sure?
DUPLASSIS
I made sure with five bullets on
each. They're dead.
DARLENE
Oh, thank God!
DUPLASSIS
Ms. Lewis you were very, very
brave! The Chicago Police
Department owes you forever!
DUPLASSIS
I'm personally very thankful for
your assistance and bravery!
Without you these men would be
killing innocent women for several
more weeks, if not months. The city
of Chicago is safer thanks to you!
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WRIGHT
I would like to first thank these
officers standing here next to me,
who worked around the clock to
bring these deadly killers to an
end tonight. Both men, rather than
give up, fought a deadly gun battle
with our officers and, of course,
they lost.
WRIGHT
Both men were killed in the
exchange of gunfire in the streets.
Thank God, none of our guys were
injured. I want to give a special
thanks to detective Felicia
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11.
WRIGHT (cont'd)
Duplassis for her bravery tonight.
Her display of courage went above
and beyond the call of duty.
Detective, come to the microphone.
DUPLASSIS
First, I would like to thank my
teammates. Without them I could not
have been able to do what I did
that night. I want to thank Ms.
Darlene Lewis as she's a real hero,
risking her own life to save an
innocent mother and her child.
Gratitude to everyone who also put
themselves at risk, giving us
information that helped to bring
these psychopaths to justice. Thank
you all!
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WALTER
Detective Duplassis!
DUPLASSIS
How do you know it's me?
WALTER
I just watched you live on TV. I
had a feeling. Thank you and the
rest of the detectives for solving
my cousin Sandra's death.
DUPLASSIS
It's a pleasure. Now, Walter, since
it's all done you should be leaving
the hotel.
WALTER
Yes, ma'am. Right away!
WALTER
(to Pam)
Baby, pack you things! We're
leaving!
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12.
BOB
Attorney Robert Cushman, how may I
help you?
DUPLASSIS
Hi, Bob!
BOB
Detective.
DUPLASSIS
I just want you to know that your
clients are no longer suspects of
the murders.
BOB
Good. I was trying to show you this
from the very beginning.
DUPLASSIS
However...
BOB
However what?
DUPLASSIS
We found over a thousand dollars in
the murderers. Guess how they
looked.
BOB
No.
DUPLASSIS
Yes, Bob. One-hundred-dollar bills.
Now, what do you think about that?
BOB
I think I'll be getting more money
from my client.
DUPLASSIS
Smart man.
Duplassis hangs up. Bob leaves the phone and stares at his
desk.
BOB
Fucking idiot!
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