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Speech Analysis

Name of the Speech: Eurelectric Student Award

Author: Hildegard Müller

Thesis Statement: Honouring the inspirational minds of students and the younger generation

is essential in contributing to the future of the electricity industry.

Occasion below:

The customers at the Eurelectric Company are taking the stage in the strategic

direction determination of the company after many years of being at the tail of the chain of

energy value (Müller para 2). There is some realization of unprecedented changes facing

utilities, which prompts them to seek for new value creation avenues. The primary element in

transforming the company into a competitive, smart, and innovative industry is mastering the

relationship of the customers. There has already a revolution in tomorrow's electric industry

(Müller para 3). The creative and resourceful students' minds are, therefore, crucial in shaping

tomorrow's world in terms of energy consumption and the retail market as well as changing

technological services.

The ingenious students and the younger generation are the key players in coming up

with smart, innovative ideas in supporting the electricity industry. There is the development

of more technologies requiring high tech digital devices and the use of electricity Müller para
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5). The use of electric power is more likely to increase in the future due to the development

of technology. The Eurelectric industry requires young brilliant engineers and scientists as

well as talented minds for future directions and staying connected to clients.

Survey Four-Point Scale

Outstanding

 Speech fully identifies the main ideas and the speaker introduces

 Speech has a clear thesis statement that forms ideas of the main points.

 Captures the attention of the audience by following the speaker’s supporting

arguments.

 Speech convinces the audience to completion concerning the speech with regards to

the speech topic.

Very Good:

 The identification of the main ideas is clear and introduction by the speaker.

 No thesis statement but has prominent supporting points.

 Engages the audience

 Sppech relates to the topic of the speech.

Satisfactory:

 There is no clear identification of the main ideas of the speech, no formal

introduction.

 Presence of convincing points.


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 There is no audience participation due to unclear identification of main ideas.

 Satisfactorily convinces the audience.

Unsatisfactory:

 There is some absence of confidence by the speaker and unclear main points and no

speech introduction.

 Convincing points do not come out clearly

 Lack of audience participation

 Leaves the audience hanging, thereby not convincing them at all.


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Works Cited

Müller, Hildegard. "EURELECTRIC Annual Convention". Www3.Eurelectric.Org, 2015,

https://www3.eurelectric.org/media/178166/mueller-student-award-final-

26may2015.pdf. Accessed 15 June 2020.

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