Title: Typologies and Extent of Compliance among Selected Households on the Rainwater Harvesting Ordinance of Davao City (No.

0298-09)
Series of 2009

Researchers: Addie Mae S. Wong and Marcellie Angelique Jane O. Velez

Comments/ Suggestion of Panelist Actions Taken Pages where changes can be

located
Title Page, Abstract, Acknowledgement
Ma’am Jessa Mae B. Suico Title Page : Change the date
Sir Beleno Abstract: Change paragraph 1 Changed the statement into Abstract
“extent of compliance”
State the problematic before Stated the problematic situation Abstract
stating the Matina Aplaya
Use the theory individually and Used the theory individually and Abstract
not state centered. not state-centered
In the third paragraph major Revised the paragraph Abstract
problem should answer your
questions.
Chapter 1
Maam Suico Add the Typologies in the Changes were acted accordingly p. 4
background of the study
Use the typology to explain the
compliance. Counter the act the
state intervention in terms of
compliance. Going against the
theory given with the situation
Add the problematic situation in Changes were acted accordingly p. 4
the background and why does it
lead to the study of typologies
Enter the grasp of the theory. Changes were acted accordingly. p. 6
The bases of your theory
Objectives of the study: Class of Changed into ”Annual Income p. 4
dwelling change to annual
 income
Delete the conceptual Already deleted the conceptual
Framework framework
Sir Beleno Change will to would. Past tense. Changed the word into “would” p. 8
Change the conceptual Deleted the conceptual
framework. Add the variables framework
Explain the conceptual Deleted conceptual framework
framework
Significance: Residents of Davao Changes were acted based on the p. 7
City: What is the benefit of the suggestion given
residents out of your study?
Academe: Rephrase Already acted. p. 7
Scope: Delete statement 3 Changes were made p. 8
Alphabetize op. def. Alphabetized the op. def. p. 9
Chapter 2: RRL
Ma’am Suico Explain the theory individually inserted Localizing norms and p. 18
importance of compliance.
Explain the compliance before Inserted compliance p. 17
the synthesis.
Insert norm localization Inserted norm localization p. 18
Sir Beleno Combine of Articles related in Okay madam, done. RRL
National Level
Insert Norm Localization Inserted norm localization p. 18
Synthesis: Make proper Changed the statements into p. 19
sentences sentences
Chapter 3: Methodology Unit of analysis: change it to Changed the unit of analysis into p. 20
individual individual
Ethical consideration: make it Changed into past tense p. 23
past tense
Chapter 4:
Sir Beleno Revise the first paragraph Revised the first paragraph p. 25
Page 30. Support your claim Changes were done accordingly. p. 31
about “none of the respondents
 were aware”
What are your basis of the theory Changes were made. p. 32
for saying that a certain
statement is coincidental or
treaty-induced?
Establish the question so that it Changes were made based on p. 32
will be more believable that the the suggestion of the panelist
statement belongs to
coincidental or treaty-induced.
Discuss it in your paper.
Explain how you came up with Already explained p. 32
neither.
Extent of compliance: what is
your definition with extent of
compliance?
Put Title on Table 10 Put Typologies vs. Compliance
No explanation for table 11 and Explanation were already p. 37
12 provided.
Table 9. no. 6 change “Always” Changed into “Often” p. 34
Ma’am Suico Explain how you were able to Changes were made P. 30
know the reasons of compliance
Out of this data what does your Changes were made p. 32
theory say about it? So what
does that mean is they fall on
coincidental ?
What does your RRL say about Yes maam p. 10 first paragraph.
this situation? Do you have data
in your RRL that explain the
situation?
Your chapter 4 lacks explanation Added explanation p. 26
on explaining the situation. For
example you have identified their
typologies and then what? What
do we do after identifying their
 typologies? How do you make
sense of the typology as a
researcher of the study? What
does it say about the compliance
of the respondents? What does it
say about the power of the states
to the compliance? Being a
coincidental compliant what does
say, what are its effect in terms
of the law?
What does it mean if the Each table were explained well p. 26
compliance falls on the mid- according to the suggestion of
level? What does it entail? How the panelist.
can you say that it is moderate?
Explain it well. How do you make
sense of mid-level compliance?
Put descriptors. Added descriptors
Chapter 5
Sir Beleno Anchor chapter 5 in your theory. Changes were made p. 42
Use the results in your
recommendation
Maam Suico Use the results of the study to Changes were acted accordingly.
recommend. Not just based on
the significance.