Self Reflection and Revision

 Self refelction
After going through the result of peer review i found that I still committed in
the following item

 Capitalizing
 Article
 Punctuation
 Plural noun
 Speeling
 Verb form
 Revision

Champa and Champak

Once upon a time, there was a castle in the middle of a dense forest, and in the
castle there lived an old fairy. She lived alone in that castle and never leave her castle
because every time the sun goes down to the west she will lose her power and she
became an old woman with no power. 
...
Fairy’s pov
I know leaving my castle will put me and my castle in danger, but I feel lonely all
this time, I think it will be okay if I flew nearby to look around, But before I leave, I need
to cast a spell around my castle to make sure the castle protected from all the threats.
( She raised her hand and drew a circle), if any young mas came within a hundred
yards, he would get fixed and unable to move and if any women came within that
distance she would be changed into a bird, now the castle had magic power I need
turning into a form of an owl.
...
The sun goes down to the west as she fled, and suddenly the fairy lost her magic
power and became an old woman. She decided to walk across the forest until she found
a village full of people. She met a young woman, the young woman offer her a blanket
and a drink, the fairy accepts the offering and decided to stay there. Day by day has
passed, the fairy had a happy life in the village with all the people around her. She
doesn’t feel alone anymore and forgets her castle.
To the west from the village, near the forest there lived a wood-cutter. He had a
beautiful daughter, Champa by name. A young shepherd named Champak also lived
there, they were friends from their childhood. One day Champak and Champa went out
for a walk in the wood. They walked quite far from their homes, and they were tired. So
they decide to sit near-the castle.
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Champa’s pov
I saw some statue on display around the castle, somethings wrong in here, why all
the statue had a frightened expression, I need to see it closer, I walk towards the statue,
and suddenly Champak barks and bites my dress, as is he forbids me to go there, but
I’m so curious, 
I need to go see it by my self. I hear the sound of birds whistling, the sound is so
beautiful I'm sure the bird has pretty color. I walk to the castle slowly, and when I
stepped the yard, suddenly there were brown wings grew from my back and my body
becomes small, and I realized that I turned into nightingale, I was so surprised finding
my body turning into a small nightingale. I need to flew and find Chmapak quickly, but I
can’t find him, all I can see is only a handsome man with black-haired who was sitting in
the ground where I leave Champak. That man called my name, I'm pretty sure he was
Champak.
...
Champak’s pov
I feel there is something strange in here, but Champa looks tired, she decided to
rest in this place, she saw the statue, so do I, she walked toward the statue, I’m sure
some things will hurt her here, so I tried to hold her but she does not want o to listen to
me, I will wait for her here and make sure that she is okay, but not long after that my
body turns in to human form, I was very surprised, what happened to my body? what
happened to Champa now? where is she?, is she okay?, a lot of question in my mind,
I'm scared, I shouted out her name to make sure she was okay. I saw a small
nightingale, she approaches me, she tried to explain something but I did not
understand, the bird flew towards the tree and began to carve the word using her beak,
and I realized that the little bird was Champa. 
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Champa’s pov
I told Champak to stay in this tree and not get close to the castle, then I flew to the
castle to find the truth, I slipped through the air vent, there I found a lot of things that
could move and talk, I flew to one of the brooms who were walked in the hallway,” do
you know who stay in this castle?” the broom told me what actually had happened to
this castle, so I ask again if she knows what the fairy looks like, and the broom says that
she can turn in to anything that she wants from the sunrise to sunset, but she will be
weak if the moon rises. After hearing the broom’s explanation I leave the castle and fly
to the place where I had left Champak, We looking for a village that was quite crowded
until sunset, we saw an old woman who was sitting in the yard of her house, then
Champak walked to her and asked if she was a fairy who had lived in a big castle
located in the middle of the dense forest and that old women say no, soon we saw an
old woman and a young woman walking, then Champak asked that old women asked if
she was a fairy who had lived in a big castle that located in the middle of the dense
forest and that old women say yes, hearing the words from that old woman we were
very happy and told what had happened, then she felt guilty because she put a spell on
her castle.
In the next morning the fairy, Champak, and I came to the castle, the fairy pulled
back her spell and after that, all the statue and bird in that castle turn into a human
again including me, but not with Champak, the fairy offered whether Champak wanted
to be a shepherd again, but both of us refused it.