1.

       About the Industry & Sub parts of the Industry

2.       Growth drivers & Growth inhibitors

3.       Sector Risk Factors 

4.       Macroeconomic Factors which affect the Industry
5.       Performance metrics of the Industry

6.       Various Business Models in the Industry

7.       Recent Developments in the Industry

8.       Porters Five forces Structure for the Industry

9.        Major Govt. Policies for the industry.
10.   Major Cost heads for the Industry 
11.   Major players in the Industry
12.   Major Growth Strategies adopted by the companies in the Industry
13.   Financial Analysis of the Industry (CMIE – data) –Prepare a Table , Financial Ratios and the reason for
Introduction is good. Put in sources/links for Photos of statistics pasted.

Incomplete. Needs latest figures to substantiate claims. For Ex. Greatly increased internet user base. How much is current com
In 'Easy avilability of funds' avoid putting generic statements as Current market sentiment is conducive for business.
Legal: Update data to IT Act 2008. Also update the e-commerce sites statistics to latest. 2012 data is 5 yrs old.
Include numbers! For every point, could include data. Online transaction: Include statistics. You'd find them easily post demon
Good points but kindly put them in sections. Technologyy, finance, etc. But, all in quite good points.
Explain each point in at least 1-2 lines. Just listing KPI's won't do. Give forumlas if avialable.

This is a very broad categorization. It needs to be drilled deeper. Business model would tell you about the successful operation
line as well. For example you could refer to this :- http://unicornomy.com/zara-business-model-business-strategy/ ( You dont
YOu can know for a few players, and that should be fine.

-- Can include the persons involved in the business. From where the revenues generate. State differences in the models. Expla

-- Also include various business models as marketplaces too.

Source for forming opinion on Brand Loyalty in last paragraph?. Mention from which data the opinion is formed.
Needs more data. Include current internet penetration data, Make in India Initaitve, GST, etc.
Fair enough
Fine
Good enough, Give source from which data is picked. Can elaborate more on kind of Costs required for various business proje
We're primarily trying to assess Industry in Indian Scenario. Include Indian E-Commerce Industry statsitics.
Good enough. Can include data regarding Funding, IPOs, Mergers and Acquisitions, Tie-ups etc.
Fair but include Industry Data !! Ecommerce as a industry. Put in statistics. Needs refinement
1.       Mission, Vision of the company
2.       Corporate Governance Structure of the
Company
3.       Major events which has shaped the firm
over the period of time.
4.       Current performance
5.       Strategic Alliances, Strategic Problem they
have?
6.       Value Chain of the Industry – Primary &
Secondary
7.       Marketing
8.       Key Success Factors
9.       Competitive advantage (Managerial/
Operational/ Financial/Technology)
10.   Brand power
11.   Cost structure
12.   Product portfolio
13.   Technical mastery
14.   Employee skills required
15.   Company Structure & Culture
16.   Job Profiles in the company
Fair enough
Describe Amazon India's strucutre. If it follow
Fair enough
Fair enough. Include data regarding how muc
Good.
Majority points are about Amazon.com. Try t
Good enough
Literally copied. And that too for Amazon Ind
Incomplete. Include GST, Technology evolutio
Could've picked data from other researches w
? Not included? Investment in Amazon. Fund
ok.
More of data please. The information put in
Good enough but hope it has some source.
Good enough.
Good enough. Could've included regarding ob
dia's strucutre. If it follows its Global structure…mention so.

data regarding how much is Amazon India currently valued at.

bout Amazon.com. Try to update or include data regarding Amazon.in (Indian prespective)

that too for Amazon India. Success factors are quite important. Kindly rework on it.

GST, Technology evolution, Demonetization, e-wallets etc etc. You can drill down a lot. This section is important as it gives why Amazon is
from other researches which gives better picture of e-commerce industry. The source from which data is taken is simply amazon praising
stment in Amazon. Funding. Recent news of Amazon Global pumping money in Amazon India would give you some view into this.

. The information put in this section is simply dramatization. Need extensive rework in this.
pe it has some source.

've included regarding objective for the profile.

tant as it gives why Amazon is successful.
ken is simply amazon praising. Its evident throughout the paragraph. Kindly include data from netural and more credible sources.
u some view into this.
more credible sources.