REFLECTION PAPER RUBRIC

Skills Excellent Superior Good Fair Poor Score

Depth of Demonstrate a Demonstrate a Demonstrate a basic Demonstrate a limited Demonstrate little or
conscious and thoughtful understanding of the understanding of the no understanding of
Reflection
thorough understanding of writing prompt and writing prompt and the writing prompt
understanding of the the writing prompt subject matter. subject matter. This and subject matter.
writing prompt and and subject matter. reflection needs This reflection needs
subject matter. This revision. revision.
reflection can be
used as an example
for other students.
Citation of All of the concrete Most of the Some of the Few of the concrete Very minimal of the
and convincing concrete and concrete and and convincing concrete and
concrete
manifestations of the convincing convincing manifestations of the convincing
example and Kagandahang-loob manifestations of manifestations of Kagandahang-loob ng manifestations of the
historical ng Dios are vividly the the Dios are vividly Kagandahang-loob
context narrated to support Kagandahangloob Kagandahangloob narrated to support ng Dios are vividly
the claim of an ng Dios are ng Dios are the claim of an narrated to support
encounter. vividly narrated to vividly narrated to encounter. the claim of an
support the claim of support the claim of encounter.
an encounter. an encounter.
Language Use stylistically Use language that Use basic but Use language that is Use language that is
use sophisticated fluent and original, appropriate vague and imprecise unsuitable for the
language that is with evident sense language, with basic for the purpose, with purpose and
precise and of voice, sense of voice, little sense of voice, audience, with little
engaging with, with awareness of awareness of limited awareness of or no awareness of
notable sense of purpose, and purpose, and varied how to vary sentence sentence structure.
voice, awareness of varied sentence sentence structure. structure.
purpose, and varied structure.
sentence structure.
Consistency Demonstrate 98% Demonstrate a Demonstrate 65% Demonstrate a 35% Demonstrate a 95%
and unity of thought with 85% unity of unity of thought, unity of thought, unity of thought,
essentially no errors, thought, exhibiting exhibiting exhibiting frequent making
coherence even with the occasional errors occasional errors errors that make comprehension
sophisticated only when using that do not hinder comprehension almost impossible.
language sophisticated comprehension. difficult.
language
COMMENT [REMARK]

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TOTAL 20
Muñoz, Eva Pamela L.
Theology (A-121)

“Naranasan ko na ba ang kagandahang-loob ng Diyos? Kailan at paano?”

There are so many thoughts running through my mind, so many horrible

memories and yet, I can look back and see the Lord’s mercy and grace amidst it
all. God’s grace has been my refuge in the midst of many hardships.

One of them happened way back in 2016, I was diagnosed with Dengue.
Only a week after my older brother was discharged from the same hospital. I can
clearly remember that it was just the beginning of classes back then. First week
of classes passed by so fast, everything seemed normal except for the consistent
headaches that I have been withholding all week-long.

Then, second week came. I couldn’t take the pain anymore, and so, I told
my parents about it. And they told me that maybe I, too, had dengue that time.
My mother had me checked up the following day then the next day, and then the
next and the day after that. They assessed my general condition and the
changes of the cell counts in the blood tests. After having a confirmation of
dengue since my symptoms included nausea with persistent vomiting because of
over-eating, pounding headaches that last all day every day for 1 straight week,
cold chills, and severe muscle pain all over my body. The doctor suggested that I
should immediately be hospitalized. And so I was. I spent days in my hospital
room. During my stay in the hospital, the doctor and the nurse/s took care of me.
They’ve recommended to rest, drink, or eat as much as I want and to be cautious
for any possible bleeding. They monitor my condition 24/7, with repeated
measure of my pulse, blood pressure and get my blood checked 3 times a day.
They also said that if my platelet count went down, they will have to do a blood
transfusion which can put me at risk of complications. Days went by before me,
monitoring here and there. Then one day, as I woke up, the doctor knocked then
came in to the room then told me and my mother that my platelet count has been
gradually decreasing and if it continues to go like that till the next day, I will need
to undergo a blood transfusion on the same day. As soon as the doctor left, my
mother went out to call my father to tell him what the doctor told us. Of course I
panicked, who wouldn’t, right? But panicking does nothing. So I prayed to the
Lord. I prayed to Him to take all the fear, dread, worries, pain, and everything
else that is connected to my condition all away.

The next day, I got up from bed, went to the restroom and did my thing.
Before flushing, I noticed blood on the toilet bowl. And I knew that it was the 1 st
day of my period. I told my mother. She told the nurse. The nurse told the doctor.
Then the doctor did her tests and etc., and after she took my blood to test it to
see if my platelet count decreased or increased. I repeated all my prayers. We
waited for hours with the door left open, waiting for the doctor to tell us the
results. Then, she came. With a smile plastered on her face. Seeing her smile
was the moment that felt like God granted my prayers. Without the doctor in need
of saying anything, we knew what she was going to tell us. And our guess was
right. My platelet count increased. The doctor told us that me having my period
on that day was really miraculous and she hopes that it will continue to increase
like that for the next days. I thanked the Lord, with a happy and grateful heart.

After a few more days in the hospital, the doctor told us that I was doing
good and that I showed consistent signs of recovery. I began to regain my
appetite, feel much better, and had no fever for 24 hours and lab tests were
much improving. And with that, the doctor discharged me from the hospital.