The First Feedback Worksheet

Name : _______________________________ Corrector : _______________________________

1. Exchange your draft with a partner. Read his/her draft and check it using the following checklist. Put check (✓) if you think it is yes.
Put check (x) if you think it is no.
____ The essay discuss the writer’s opinion on the issue.
____ The essay has 3 main parts.
____ The thesis clearly states the writer’s opinion about the question. If your answer is yes, write it down below.
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____ The essay has 3 body paragraphs that give reasons to support the writer’s opinion.
____ Each body paragraph has a topic sentence. If your answer is yes, write it down below.
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____ The body paragraphs are related to the thesis statement.
____ There is/are unnecessary or off the topic sentence (s). If your answer is yes, write a comment about it (them) below.
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____ Each paragraph flows smoothly from the beginning to end. If your answer is yes. Go on to the following two questions. If
your answer is no, skip these questions.
• What key nouns are repeated? _________________________________________________________________________
• What transitional signals can you find? __________________________________________________________________
 ____ The concluding paragraph presents a summary of the main points or a restatement of the thesis statement.
____ The writer gives final comment on the concluding paragraph. If your answer is yes, write it down below.
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2. Tell the essay’s owner what you liked about his/her essay or what he/she did well.
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 The Second Feedback Worksheet

Name : _______________________________ Corrector : _______________________________

1. Exchange your draft with a different partner. Read his/her draft and check it using the following checklist. Put check (✓) if you think it
is yes. Put check (x) if you think it is no and mention what part of the paragraph and in what line the mistake (s) is (are).

Response
No. Focus of editing Notes
Yes No

Is the verb-tense used correctly?

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Are the subject-verb agreement used correctly?

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Are the singular and plural nouns used correctly?

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Are the sentence connectors used appropriately?

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Are the pronouns used correctly?

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Are the prepositions used appropriately?

6

Are the articles used appropriately?

7

Is the spelling correct?

8

Is the vocabulary used appropriate with the context?

9

Is the capitalisation used correctly?

10

11 Does the essay use correct punctuations?