DISCUSS BOTH VIEW ESSAY

Introduction Sentence 1 : paraphase the question

People have different viewing about whether or
not..../ View often differ on whether...

Sentence 2 : State both points of view

Sentence 2 : Thesis statement
This essay will discuss both side ; however , as
far as I concerned ..............is more appropriate /
I side with......
I am mixed of both point of views
Both sides will be analyzed below, in the latter
part of the essay is a dicussion why the second
choice appear to be more convincable /
appropriate/ sensible

Paragraph 1 On the one hand,

State first viewpoint : Those who support
the .................... claim that
/ Discuss/: The main reason for believing this is
that
Reason why you agree or disagree/ Example to
support :There is ample evidence to suggest that
scientists
Paragraph 2 On the other hand, State second viewpoint/
Discuss/ They frequenlty refer to the fact that
Reason why you agree or disagree/ Example to
support
Conclusion: To sum up, As has been outline Summary
above, from the light of the arguments Although it can be argued that .......( opinion
mentioned above,..... that you don't agree.... I am of the opinion
that....
While it is often stated that....., i would argue
that.....
While there are convincing arguments on both
sides of the debate
State which one is better or more important
For example :

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive
trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.Discuss both sides of this
argument and then give your own opinion.

Intro : There is an ever increasing use of technology, such as tablets and laptops, in the
classroom. It is often argued that this is a positive development, whilst others disagree and
think it will lead to adverse ramifications. This essay agrees that an increase in technology is
beneficial to students and teachers. This essay will discuss both points of view

Para 1 : It is clear that the internet has provided students with access to more information than
ever before....................Wikipedia is a prime example, where students can simply type in any
keyword

Para 2 : However, many disagree and feel that technology deprives people of real human
interaction.......................For instance, Skype and Facebook make it possible for people to
interact in ways that were never before possible.

Con: In conclusion, while the benefits of technology, particularly the internet, allow students to
tap in to limitless sources of information, some still feel that people should be wary of this new
phenomenon and not allow it to curb face to face interaction.

FAMILY TOPIC

Topic 1: It is not uncommon that children are required to obey the rule of their parents and
teachers. Some people are worried that too much control over children will not prepare
them well for their adult life. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

 It is not uncommon children required to obey the rule of their parents / adhere to the strict
rule of their parents = aldult's intervention plays a vital role in a child's
development /drawing certain boundaries on children’s behaviours can ........................
 Rule setting is possibly the most ........... method in overcoming some ..............difficulties
, such as protecting children from dangers and guiding them to act ................
 Imposing rule is imperative (......................) as it prevents many problem from occuring
 For example : Forbidding accessing .........., medicine, microwave or ovens can ..............
the risks of accidents and injuries....
 Some other rules, such as forbidding..........,......... and....... language lead children to
develope proper................../.................. in different social situation

 Rules should be ...................... gradually as the children grow older as it becommes clear
that the rules restrains students' mental development/ not beneficial for children in the long
term
 Another problem is that it will discourage students from .............. on what they have
done, and dampen their aptitude (.................) for curiosity and creativity.  if some sorts of
freedom are not given to the children they often cannot expose their true potential in life.=
making youngsters to follow rules on a strictly basis may suppress their creativity and
passion for adventures, which are important abilities of a person
 It is quite hard to believe but actually true that many parents ruin their children’s life by
being overprotective and being abusive
  This can be exemplified by cases where children cannot freely participate in certain
sports or arts, such as soccer and drawing, because their parents set firm rules on
maintaining hygiene.
 Children who are always pressurised by rules and regulations from their family members
often end up being timid and hesitant
 Moreover, putting too many rules on young people may stifle their independence and sense
of individuality. Children who are used to ............ their parents’ advices without expressing
their own opinion on the matter generally lack the skills for ............. thinking. 

Topic 2 : Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older,
while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give
your own opinion

 it ................./.................../.................independence but it can have rare debilitating

financial drawbacks.
 moving out early is losing a parental safety net that safeguards .............. stability.
 In large cities such as New York, real estate prices are so high that without  ...............job
you will struggle to contend with(...........................) rent, food, transportation costs, and
allowances for leisure activities.
 Naïve and inexperienced young people in the absence of parental supervision are more
likely to fall prey to bad influence and dangerous activities, such as drugs or alcohol
consumption, which may jeopardize their career or lead them astray from moral values
  Besides, emotional bo.........and family relationships can be maintained better if everyone
is living together under one ...........
 The majority of people who move out are successful because they become self-reliant.,
which is a crucial life skill to their successful career.
 These students take their first........... towards looking after themselves by doing their
own laundry, managing their finances to an extent, and taking ... campus employment
 These qualities, of frugality and responsibility, will ............ them well in their lives and
increase their odds of future success.
 Secondly, for those who leave their parents for work, they would reduce the ......... of
their parents. Parents could stop the financial supports for their child and could be
allocated for the younger children or for their retirement plan.

Topic 3 : Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people
have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this
trend outweigh the drawbacks?"

There has been a trend over recent decades for families to become less close
than they were in the past and this situation is largely accepted in society.
This essay will discuss the reasons for this and examine the benefits and
drawbacks of this development.

One of the first reasons for a decline in the closeness of families is connected
to the busy lifestyles that we now lead. Most people are having to work longer
hours and often both parents work, so they simply do not have as much time
to spend with each other as they did in the past. Another factor is the
materialistic and consumer driven culture we now live in, which has led to less
value being placed on family relationships. Modern technology also means
that people are more interested in their online life than interacting with their
family in their free time.

It could be argued that this has benefits. If people are not so close with their
family, they are free to pursue their own dreams and aspirations, and to focus
on improving their own lifestyle. However, I believe that there are far more
negative outcomes. The most important factors leading to a fulfilled and
happy life are emotional security and comfort. Without these we are in danger
of feeling lost. It is a difficult world we live in and we need the support of
people close to us to cope with modern life. We are seeing a rise in mental
health problems in many countries and this may well be a factor in this.

To conclude, busy modern lifestyles, changing cultural values and modern

technology are causing families to become less close. We should try to halt
this trend as it has more negative than positive outcomes.