CRITERIA / SCALE Exceeds Expectations Meets Expectations Needs Improvement Inadequate Structure • Paper is logically • Paper has a clear • There is some level of • There is no apparent • Organization organized organizational structure organization though organization to the paper. with some digressions, digressions, ambiguities, • Flow of thought • Easily followed ambiguities or irrelevances are too many • Difficult to follow • Transitions • Effective, smooth, and irrelevances • No or poor transitions • Difficult to follow • Format logical transitions • Easily followed • No format • Ineffective transitions • Professional format • Basic transitions • Rambling format • Structured format Grammar/mechanics • Manipulates complex • Uses complex • Uses compound • Uses simple sentences • sentence structure sentences for effect/impact sentences sentences • punctuation/mechanics • No punctuation or • Few punctuation or • Too many punctuation mechanical errors mechanical errors and/or mechanical errors
Language • Vocabulary is • Vocabulary is varied, • Vocabulary is used • Vocabulary is
• Vocabulary; use of sophisticated and correct specific and appropriate properly though sentences unsophisticated, not used vocabulary as are sentences which may be simple properly in very simple vary in structure and • Frequently uses sentences. • Tone length subject specific vocabulary • Infrequently uses correctly subject specific vocabulary • Uses subject specific • Uses and manipulates correctly vocabulary too sparingly subject specific • Writer’s tone emerges vocabulary for effect and is generally • Writer’s tone exhibits appropriate to audience some level of audience • Writer’s tone is clear, sensitivity consistent and appropriate for intended audience Content/information • Central idea is well • Central idea and • The central idea is • Central idea and clarity of • Clarity of purpose developed and clarity of clarity of purpose are expressed though it may purpose are absent or purpose is exhibited generally evident be vague or too broad; incompletely expressed and • Critical and original throughout the paper throughout the essay Some sense of purpose is maintained thought maintained throughout the • Abundance of • Evidence of critical, essay • Little or no evidence of • Use of examples evidence of careful thought and critical, careful thought or critical, careful thought analysis and/or insight • Some evidence of analysis and/or insight and analysis and/or insight critical, careful thought • There are good, and analysis and/or insight • There are too few, no • Evidence and relevant supporting examples and evidence or they examples examples and evidence • There are some are mostly irrelevant are vivid and specific, examples and evidence, while focus remains tight though general