Professional Documents
Culture Documents
2. Give necessary desirable details for 2. Explain necessary and desirable details
easy reading. with any helpful material.
3. Close with a cordial request for 3. End positively and friendly stating
specific action. clearly the desired action and offering any
further help. Give date of action if
necessary.
Look at the following letter which is a request to the seller and requires no special tact or persuasion.
Dear Sir,
We intend to purchase a new office copier. We would like to consider a BHP copier and wonder if
you have a model that would suit our needs.
Our office is small, and a copier would generally be used by only three secretaries. We run
approximately 3,000 copies a month and prefer a machine that uses regular paper. We rarely need to
run off more than 25 copies at any one time.
We would also like to know about your warranty and repair service. We hope to hear from you
soon.
Yours truly,
An example having main idea in the befinning.
Yours cordially,
Supplying Detailed Information on a Service though the writer is complaining, the letter has a direct-
request plan.
Gentlemen,
Please repair or replace my calculator watch, Model C863, and send it to me at the address above.
After six months of use, the musical alarm has quit working.
Enclosed is my watch, a copy of the sales receipt showing the date of purchase and your warranty,
which guarantees material and workmanship for one year.
Yours Sincerely,
The goodwill letter you write will probably be successful when you can answer yes to the following
questions:
1. If you were the reader, would you honestly like to receive this letter? A goodwill letter does its job
only when it makes the reader feel good.
2. Will the reader feel that you enjoyed writing the letter and that you mean everything you wrote? If
the reader feels bored or indifferent tone, he or she may doubt your sincerity and interest.
i. Agreement
ii. Appreciation
iii. Assurance
iv. Compliment
v. Cooperation
vi Fairness
vii. Good News
viii. Understanding
Agreement
Find a point on which you and the reader share similar views. For example;
We both know how hard it is to make a profit in this industry.
Appreciation
Express sincere thanks for receiving something. For example;
Your check for Rs.25000/- arrived yesterday. Thank you.
Cooperation
Convey your willingness to help in any way you realistically can. For example;
Employee Service is here to smooth the way for all of you who work to achieve company goals.
Fairness
Assure the reader that you’ve closely examined and carefully considered the problem, or mention
an appropriate action that has already been taken. For example;
For the past week, we have carefully monitored those using the photocopying machine to see
whether we can detect any pattern of use that might explain its frequent breakdowns.
Good News
Start with the part of your message that is favourable. For example;
A replacement knob for your range is on its way, shipped February 10 via TCS.
Understanding
Demonstrate that you understand the reader’s goals and needs. For example;
So that you can more easily find the printer with the features you need, we are enclosing a
brochure that describes all the Panasonic printers currently available.