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Marcia Pally
To cite this article: Marcia Pally (2001) Skills Development in 'Sustained' Content-Based Curricula:
Case Studies in Analytical/Critical Thinking and Academic Writing, Language and Education, 15:4,
279-305, DOI: 10.1080/09500780108666814
Introduction
The needs of ESL/EFL students bound for university/professional work have
come under scrutiny of late as teachers and researchers have remarked on an
insufficiency in skills development in ESL/EFL curricula. Among those skills is
‘argumentation,’ the assembly of ‘a coherent series of statements leading from a
premise to a conclusion’ and ‘the act or process of forming reasons and drawing
conclusions, and applying them to a case in discussion’ (Webster’s, 1989). Argu-
mentation is involved in the range of academic/professional tasks – from lecture
comprehension and research to written and oral presentation. It requires both
analytical and critical thinking. The former includes: (1) grasping the claims or
perspectives of readings and lectures; (2) understanding the methods of proof
used to support those claims/perspectives; and (3) synthesising claims and
support from a range of sources. Critical thinking includes: (4) noting the social,
economic and political contexts of claims and support (Cope & Kalantzis, 1993;
New London Group, 1996; Shor, 1992); (5) questioning or challenging them; (6)
evaluating them (Mohan, 1986; 1990; Vygotsky, 1962; Widdowson, 1990); (7)
using one’s understanding, synthesis, and questions as a basis for formulating
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ideas of one’s own; (8) presenting (orally and in writing) ideas/positions of one’s
own using appropriate rhetorical conventions (Carson & Leki, 1993; Horowitz,
1986; Johns, 1990; Swales, 1987) – however, those conventions may differ from
argument and rhetoric in one’s L1 (Al-Abed Al-Haq & Ahmed, 1994; Leki &
Carson, 1994).
As argumentation and rhetorical conventions vary among languages,
(sub)cultures and discourse communities, a gap exists between the argu-
ment-strategies used by non-native speaker (NNS) students and those common
among native speakers (NS) (Connor & Kramer, 1995; Leki, 1995; for discussions
in contrastive rhetoric and second language acquisition (SLA) see, Braine, 1996;
Connor, 1996; Fox, 1994; Mauranen, 1993; Moser & Raphan,1993). As many NNS
write and speak in well-developed English, Anglo-American argumentation
and rhetorical conventions are evidently learnable. Yet research in SLA suggests
that students may not be learning them in ESL/EFL classes, thus leaving
students to acquire those skills as best they can on their own. Leki and Carson for
example (1994; 1997) find that ESL classes often ask for personal reaction papers
but do not often require ‘text responsible’ writing where students must show that
they have grasped course content. Research by Chitrapu (1996), Kasper
(1995/1996; 1997; 1998) and Smoke (1998) similarly shows a gap between the
skills taught in ESL programmes and those needed in academic/professional
settings.
In my own practice, I have looked at this gap in light of research in language
socialisation – specifically, how learners are socialised into discourse communi-
ties, including academic/professional discourse communities – and the role of
context (including schema) in language learning. The work of Bakhtin (Cazdan,
1989); Vygotsky, (1962); Lantolf and Appel, (1994) and Krashen (1981b, 1985)
among others suggests that language emerges from context and purpose (instru-
mental and interactive), and that language learning is boosted by specific
contexts: notably, the real-world tasks and social exchanges in which learners
engage. Thus, the gap between the skills ESL/EFL students need and those they
learn may result from curricula that do not provide the context for full develop-
ment of academic/professional English.
‘Sustained’ content-based instruction (CBI) is an approach to language peda-
gogy that aims at providing this context (Pally, 2000b; see also, Fredrickson et al.,
1991; Leki & Carson, 1997). This article will describe sustained CBI and observe
its effects through case studies from 1998–1999. These are not meant as a compar-
ative argument vis à vis other approaches, but rather are representative of student
work and illustrate patterns that have emerged in sustained CBI classes since
1996. Case studies involve 13 students from eight classes at New York University
and Fordham University (both four-year institutions); students are from Central
and South America, Africa, Asia, and Central and Eastern Europe. A diagnostic
of students’ analytical skills is found in assessing their summary writing, which
requires distillation of key claims and support. The effects of sustained CBI on
the nexus of analytical/critical thinking skills are best seen in student essays
where these skills are used synergistically. These case studies compare the essays
of advanced students who had not had sustained content study and lower lever
students who had. The effect of sustained CBI on synthesising sources will be
explored through student Research Charts and academic papers. Effects on
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Adler-Kassner & Reynolds, 1996; Bensley & Haynes, 1995; CUNY Language
Forum and CUNY ESL Council, 1992; Wade, 1995). Both text analysis research
(Connor, 1994; Connor & Farmer, 1990) and genre studies (Mustafa, 1995)
suggest that students practise in their language classes the conventions of argu-
mentation found in academic/professional settings – both to use those conven-
tions and to understand the socio-political structures they represent (Cope &
Kalantzis, 1993; Gosden, 1992).
Taxonomy of skills
In the case studies described below, the sustained content curricula are based
on a taxonomy of ‘transferable’ skills set in a progressive sequence so that
students build on earlier skills in order to grasp later ones (the Academic Skills
column of Appendix A). Not all the skills in the taxonomy need be studied in
every sustained CBI course. Both course content and skills may be selected to suit
student needs, level and interest.
Developing content
In ESL/EFL classes where students share a major or degree programme, the
content of sustained study may be related to that discipline. However, where
classes are comprised of students from various disciplines or if students wish to
study a subject outside their majors, content must be chosen that is academically
rigorous and that will engage people with different backgrounds and goals. I
have used two criteria in selecting content: the subject must be part of the ‘core’
curricula common to many colleges or it must be familiar to generally
well-educated people. A course in microbiology would likely not be suitable
whereas ‘Contemporary Issues in Public Health’ might be. Sustained CBI
courses based on the above criteria include: Introduction to Psychology/Sociol-
ogy/Health/Environmental Studies/Business/The History of America, Europe, Asia, etc.
(Pally, 2000a), Gender Studies; Society & Cinema (Pally, 1998); Language Learning:
Contrasting Language & Contrasting Cultures, Issues in Contemporary Medical
Ethics (Abarbanel, 2000, personal communication) and The American Mind:
Assumptions, Myths and Contradictions of American Culture. Curricula (course
readings, assignments) are developed through the language teacher’s research
and/or from existing college courses.
modelled, explained and practised, students write main ideas for their papers or
presentations. Thus, students work through progressively more complex units
of content-skill sequences to produce academic/professional work. To illustrate
content-skills integration, a course outline for Introduction to Psychology is
provided in Appendix A.
with the author’s main idea. In addition to misidentified main ideas, 30% of
students imposed their own views on the author:
(3) Lewin writes that abortion was often used too casually and discusses
people’s ambivalent attitude, ‘pro-choice’ and ‘anti-choice’ towards abor-
tion.
(4) Lewin describes their opinions about abortion and the reasons that
lead them to get an abortion the most of the cases ‘is used too casually’ in a
large mass of public.
Also confusing his opinion with the author’s, this student wrote a conclusion that
does not exist in the text:
(5) Now, whether is legal ir illegal, moral or immoral abortion shouldn’t
be accepted.
Of the 40% of students who correctly identified the main idea, 75% could not
identify the author’s central supports, merging them with background informa-
tion or examples, as illustrated in the summary below:
(6) According to Lewin, since the Supreme Court made abortion a consti-
tutional right, the continuing political debate is oddly distant from their
lives. More and more people considered themselves ‘pro-life’ instead of
‘pro-choice’. Especially over the past two decades, there were many young
women under 30 getting abortions. Lewin also mentioned ‘Roe v. Wade’
which was used by anti-abortion groups to call partial-birth. However,
there were few people ever hearing of it; most of them had never heard of
‘Roe. V. Wade’. Besides, he said about the idea of abortion being used as
birth control. Then he took many examples to present women’s opinions
about abortion. But, what interesting was while some parts of the country
where abortion requires some limits and parental notification, women in
big cities had always known where to get an abortion. Though there were
so many different voices about abortion, the most important this is using
some ways of contraception.
Summary discussion
The confusions above were common in all the intermediate-advanced ESL
classes observed in this study. As students had little difficulty with the vocabu-
lary or forms in the text, these confusions suggest that lexical/syntactical
command of English, while necessary, is not sufficient to grasp argumentation. If
students cannot grasp the claims and proofs of readings, they cannot synthesise
sources, question or evaluate them, or perform other analytical and critical think-
ing skills.
lower-level student who’d had sustained CBI, the other an advanced student
who had not. The lower level students showed clearer grasp and synthesis of
sources, stronger political/economic/social contextualisation of material, and
more academically persuasive argumentation. To illustrate this emerging
pattern, one pair of essays is compared below, allowing readers to see the full
development of student argumentation (rather than out-of-context excerpts).
Both the advanced student and the student two levels below her were under-
graduates at Fordham University; both papers (on the purpose of story telling)
were the first assignments of the semester. ESL levels are assigned according to
reading, grammar and writing test scores and an oral interview, assessed by the
department chair and two other faculty for inter-rater reliability. The author did
not participate in levelling. Essay by the advanced student:
Since the beginning of history, people have always told stories to each
other. In old times, people were gathering at fireplaces to listen to old men
or women telling either the story of their lives or the history of the village.
Everyone was enjoying those moments. They were bringing happiness to
people’s lives and were a source of hope. Stories had a lot of mystery, magic
and beauty. Those are things that people love and enjoy listening to.
Stories are about good and evil that always fight a battle. There are bad
characters and good ones. Most stories end with the good winning. Those
kinds of stories include morals that the good always wins, and that is why it
pays to be good and fight in the name of all small and unwanted creatures.
Stories include part of history. Before books were written, people had to
find some sources how to pass their knowledge and experience to future
generations. Telling stories was one of the solutions. Some fantasy elements
were added as time was passing but still an idea of truth was immortal.
Thankful to those history stories, people had the discovery of new conti-
nents because they wanted to have their own story to tell. Those stories
were seeds that grow in people and were pushing them to have their own
adventures.
A different meaning of stories is to show people a different life, unknown
to them. Books and plays show how different social classes are living and
what kind of problems and happiness they have. Sometimes movies and
plays can give people ideas about how real life looks like. Every day strug-
gles can raise compassion and the need to help and understand their neigh-
bors. Romances can show how beautiful life can be and give people a goal
that they might try to reach.
All those stories about heroes’ true love and the good always winning
can be heard millions of times but it is what people love to hear. People need
hope, and stories are giving them it. Stories are like religion books which
people open with respect and need, in order to hear good words or advice.
story telling that I find is: to offer new perceptions about human beings and
the world around us, to provide diversion for an ordinary people and to
give the chance to learn a language.
The creative process can be carried on only when people are deeply
engrossed in their imagination. Compared with general areas such as math
and science, which are passive activities, in story telling, people can be in a
position to direct their feelings and harvest ideas from them. The story tell-
ing has the same function as art such as a theater, movie, and drawing a
picture. In ‘Early Adolescence Art Education’, Carl Reed says, ‘each
artwork is a personal journey of promises and possibility’. Through imag-
ining the unreal events or characters in story, people establish and realize
themselves and their world (Essay 1, page 16, 17).
Story telling provides people for new perceptions around the world. In
Japan, western story such as [Hans Christian] Anderson is popular among
children. Most of all know the story of ‘Hazel & Gratel’ in the Anderson.
They enjoy the story and at the same time they will be interested in western
culture. They try to compare it with their own culture and find out what
they story makes them understand. This process leads people to explore
themselves and their world. It is the time for each individual to understand
that story telling is one form of global studies to provide people new
insights and stimulate their lives and world.
The second purpose of story telling is to entertain people. It helps them to
forget about their worries and difficulties in their real life and gives them
happiness and comforts. When they listen to a story, they will transform
their emotional worries into the story they are listening and create their
owns fantastic space where they feel comfortable with (Essay 3, page 29). A
Japanese fairy tale, ‘Momotaro’ which is popular among children is a good
example. The story is about a fine strong hero, Momotaro in a small town
defeats a cruel demon that tries to destroy the town. In this story the audi-
ences imagine they are a strong men like Momotaro. They understand that
a hero always defeats a devil at the end, and they will have a satisfaction in
their reality. Moreover, they will have a confidence in themselves and their
lives as well as they enjoy story telling. They may think like this way:
Momotaro with courage defeated a devil and became hero, so that they can
succeed in their reality if they work hard for their present conflicts in their
reality like Momotaro does. The story which has the function of entertain-
ing people also help people to release their stress and gives them a comfort-
able space in the world of their owns. Story telling which is one of the
recreations in human life such as traveling, movie and theater lead people
to compare the reality and entertain ordinary people who are facing with
life difficulties in the business and personal life.
The third purpose of story telling is to teach people who are especially,
children, their own languages. Some books about a child rearing explore
that children learn their own language by listening to their mothers’ talk.
This shows that it is easy and fast for children to learn how to speak
language by hearings. The child rearing in Japan has an intimate relation-
ship to story telling. Most of children are brought up by their mother’s story
telling such as the story about a hero and devil or an imaginary animal. At
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this stage they learn how to speak language, moreover, how to pronounce
and read words.
In this way, story telling is indeed useful to real life. The story telling is
significant for each individual in harvesting new perception about human-
ity and life’s universal myth, in entertaining their lives, and, in learning
their own language quickly. In order to stimulate story telling, what the
society around us need is to hand down a legend, fairy tale and mythology
from generation to generation. If each society, school, family and individ-
ual opens his or her eyes to story telling, people have better understanding
to themselves, their country and world around them. Even if a computer
will dominate the world more and more for a next few centuries, I hope
each individual will remember three main benefits from story telling and
keep living with story telling forever.
In sum, the essay by the higher level student has fewer surface errors and is
more idiomatic than the lower level student’s (‘it pays to’, ‘in the name of’) but it
is less developed in ideas, structure and complex sentence forms.
but in support of her own claims. She shows that she has grasped the psychological
argument of the readings when she writes, ‘Through imagining the unreal events
or characters in story, people establish and realize themselves and their world’,
and ‘when they listen to story, they will transform their emotional worries into the
story they are listening and create their owns fantastic space where they feel
comfortable’. And finally in the Momotaro example: ‘audiences imagine they are a
strong men like Momotaro . . .. They may think like this way: Momotaro with cour-
age defeated a devil and became hero, so that they can succeed in their reality if
they work hard for their present conflicts in their reality like Momotaro.’
Regarding the setting of texts in their political/economic/social contexts, this
student does not yet identify the specific cultural bounds of the readings (e.g.
cultural relativism) but she does grasp the principle of politi-
cal/economic/social bounds when she writes, ‘They try to compare it with their
own culture and find out what the story makes them understand. This process
leads people to explore themselves and their world.’ She shows that she has a
conceptual foundation for contextualising readings and, again, that she grasped
the cultural-psychological arguments of what she read.
Reflecting her ability to develop a position of one’s own and present it using appro-
priate rhetorical conventions, the student has a clear main idea and structure, and
appropriate support. After a brief introduction, the main idea is clearly stated:
‘The three important purpose of story telling that I find is to offer new percep-
tions about human beings and the world around us, to provide diversion for an
ordinary people and to give the chance to learn a language.’ Each of her three
points is developed separately, indicating that she has learned both to distin-
guish between separate concepts and to group like examples together with the
point they support. Exemplification follows English evidentiary conventions
(research data, quotations from authoritative sources, specific case studies, etc.)
if not accepted rules of citation. The first point is supported by a quote from Carl
Reed, a reference to Essay 2, and the example about Japanese children reading
Hansel and Gretel; her second point, by a reference to Essay 3 and the example of
the Japanese fairy tale ‘Momotaro’; the third (and least developed point) by a
discussion of the links among story telling, ‘mother talk’ and child language
learning. The transitions between these points are clear if not elegant but she is in
a position to refine transitional conventions. Her conclusion both summarises
her argument and opens up two new lines of thinking, a suggestion about
preserving story telling and about the effects of computers on stories. Finally,
this paper contains both more writing and more complex forms than that of the
higher level student: 34 sentences compared with 23; 61% of sentences include
subordination compared with 50%; 32% of sentences contain three or more
clauses compared with 22%.
Summary discussion
The backgrounds of these students might have predicted opposite results.
Both received strong L1 educations through high school in their home countries,
Europe for the advanced student and Asia for the lower level student. Though
the argument and rhetorical conventions of both L1s differ from those of
academic/professional English, the European conventions differ less. One
might expect the advanced student to more closely approximate an English essay
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(even without instruction) because she had less of a gap to close. Moreover, as
with all the lower level students in this six-pair investigation, the levelling exam
of this lower level student showed that she was not familiar with Anglo-Ameri-
can analytical/critical thinking when she entered the ESL programme. Yet, in
this essay, she produced better argumentation than a higher level student, over-
coming both the impediments of less competence in English and greater differ-
ences between L1 and L2. One possible contribution to the improvement of these
lower level students was their sustained CBI classes in previous semesters. In
sum, though they began with lower-level skills, their experiences since the level-
ling exam allowed them to perform better at analytical/critical thinking than
advanced students. This paper suggests that among those helpful experiences
was sustained CBI.
Main Idea: Men also should take care of children 50% when both men
mother work.
I (opponent) Men should not required to take care of children as much as
mother
1. Since men have more responsible in companies than women, they
can’t move freely. It’s not easy for men:
a. to leave their office earlier and pick their children up
b. to take a day off for nursing their children who catch a cold
2. Traditional thoughts are existing.
a. stay-at-home moms
b. the man is the achiever outside the home and the woman takes
care of the home and the families
3. Women are better at bringing up their children because
a. they spend more time than men from they are pregnant
b. of motherhood
c. they learn from their mother
II. Men should take care of children 50% when the mother works
1. Men having children have responsibility as father before as busi-
nessmen because having children is both men and women choice: not
only men’s, not only women’s. (If men can’t take care of children and
depend on women completely the mane are just selfish and they
shouldn’t have had their children.) So it’s quite natural that fathers:
a. pick up their children
b. nurse their children
2. Traditional thoughts are being broken
a. a survey question: ‘Do you agree or disagree that it is much
better for everyone involved if the man is the achiever outside the
home and the woman takes care of the home and the families?’ In
1977, 66% of adults agreed. In 1996, 38% of adults agreed (‘By the
Numbers’ by Andrew Cherlin).
3. The percentage of married women who work outside the home has
increased significantly.
a. In 1996, of all married women with school age children were
employed or looking for work.
b. The figure was 63% for those with pre-school age children –
five times what it was in 1950.
4. It’s good for children to be up brought by both a father and a mother.
a. children can catch a glimpse of the adult society at least more
the only men or only women take care of them
b. children can get ability to think, since they would listen to both
mothers’ and fathers’ opinion and they have to think about it by
theirselves
Conclusion: It’s an ideal that a man and a woman discuss the percentage
and agree with it each other, even though it’s not 50%–50%. Men have to
accept the recent situation and change their mind for the sake of men’s and
women’s equality.
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Summary discussion
At the beginning of the sustained study class on Gender Studies and The Ameri-
can Mind, students had either vague opinions or opinions they could not back up.
Frequent comments included: ‘I don’t know about that’; ‘I never thought
about/read about that’; ‘It’s ‘natural’ that women to stay at home’; ‘I don’t know
about American economy/about how immigrants influence America’, etc.
Moreover, like the students interviewed in earlier research, students here
reported being unfamiliar with questioning texts, even unable or unwilling to do
so. The outline above and in Appendix B suggest that reading a range of texts and
working with the Question-Outline helped students to note points they disagree
with, discover their views, and gather the wherewithal to back them up. While
there is no a priori reason why students cannot question texts after reading only
one, they may find it easier after studying a variety of sources that provide a
range of concepts and information.
Synthesising sources
In the section above on questioning/challenging texts, students support their
positions by drawing on a number of readings – that is, by synthesising sources.
They must identify materials across texts that support their views, categorise
them together, and distinguish them from material that supports other or oppos-
ing claims. Thus, reading a range of material is a first step; students must also
organise it. Without such categorising, they are apt to present lists of summaries
in their essays or presentations, rather than claim-and-support argumentation.
Yet, ESL/EFL students even at the advanced level typically report being
confused about what’s considered ‘like’ and ‘different’ information in English
writing; about methods to categorise information; and about how such catego-
ries might contribute to their academic work. In class and interviews, students in
these case studies report that they ‘just highlight the important facts’ and, when
they have to prepare a paper or oral presentation, ‘have to read again all articles
to find important ideas, good facts’. The dearth of note-taking and synthesising
skills hobbles development of argumentation and increases student workload.
The Research Chart (sequence 3 of the skills taxonomy) helps students organ-
ise their readings, first by having them identify sub-topics as they read and listen
to lectures and then by having them create a chart with a box for each sub-topic
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and record the source of important information (author’s name, page) in each
box. Students work on their charts alone, in groups and as a class; as they
continue reading, they identify more sub-topics so that the chart continues to
develop. For instance, in the Work unit of the Gender Studies course, intermediate
students identified as sub-topics: salary, promotion, number of female employ-
ees in a workplace, job conditions, and discrimination in the company and in
society (see Appendix C). As a single article may include material on several
sub-topics, students must correctly categorise each item and place it in the appro-
priate boxes in their charts so that the material on housework is in one box, mate-
rial on salaries in another, and so on. When they prepare papers or presentations,
the categories of the chart first suggest a basic structure. For instance, if one is
writing a paper on gender roles, one can identify areas of change in the last 30
years by looking at the boxes, and so organise one’s paper to investigate each
area. The chart also provides a handy way to retrieve data in support of one’s
claims.
The outline below for a research paper on Society & Cinema demonstrates how
students incorporate research charts into papers and presentations. In this paper,
the student analyzes the conflicts in the film The Untouchables and shows how
they reflect parallel issues in American life.
Main Idea: The unresolved issues in The Untouchables are: following the law
or doing thing our own way, using violence in society, and using corrup-
tion. The film makes the following propositions about them: people should
do thing their own way because people shouldn’t follow the law in some
cases, people should prevent violence in the society, and people should
advocate incorruption.
[in Section I of her outline, the student explains each unresolved issue and
shows how it appears in the film using examples from various scenes; in
Section II, she explains each proposition and, again, uses examples to
show how it appears in the film; Section III is excerpted below]
III. These unresolved issues and propositions reflects unresolved issues in
American life.
1. Unresolved issues in films reflect those of the society in which the
film was created
a. quote from Ch. 2: ‘Opposing propositions in a film often reveal
an unresolved issue of the society in which the film was made’
b. quote from ‘Shaking Up the World’: ‘Films . . . are much more
likely to reflect their culture than transform it.’
c. example about police violence in the film and in society: the
film Mercury Rising and New York Times article about Amadou
Diallo: ‘Four plainclothes police officer fired 41 bullets at
Amadou Diallo, 22, as he stood in the vestibule of his apartment
house in the Bronx on Feb.4. Many have questioned why so many
shots were fired.’
2. The first unresolved issue reflects the conflict in American life
between following the law and doing thing our own way.
a. KKK always do thing their own way without following the law
(Wilentz quote)
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Conclusion
The 13 case studies above illustrate patterns in student work that have
emerged in sustained CBI classes since 1996. The excerpts are representative and
were selected to show both the challenges of analytical/critical thinking and
some ways of tackling them. The summaries reflect difficulties in analyzing texts
(grasping main ideas and support). Research Charts, Question-Outlines and
student papers show, respectively, how students synthesise sources, question
them, and develop argumentation using appropriate claim-and-support and
rhetorical conventions.
Papers by lower level students who had sustained CBI showed stronger argu-
mentation than papers by advanced students who had not, suggesting an emerg-
ing pattern of benefits from sustained CBI. One such pair of papers from 1999 is
examined in detail. As both advanced and lower-level students had strong
secondary school educations in their home countries and good experiences writ-
ing in their L1s, quality of L1 training cannot in theses cases account for differ-
ences in English. In the case study detailed here, the lower-level student more
sharply analyzed readings, incorporated them into her paper, synthesised
sources, noted political/social/economic contexts, developed a clear
claim-and-support structure for a paper, and provided appropriate exemplifica-
tion. Interestingly, the paper by the lower level student also showed more
instances of complex forms, a finding that may be pursued in future research.
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Appendix A
Appendix B
Advanced level question outline
The sustained content for this Question-Outline is The American Mind course;
the unit for which this Question-Outline was written is Immigration. Here, the
student takes issue with an article claiming that immigration has positive effects
on the American economy.
Main Idea: I believe that Mr. Chan’s views on immigration ignore the
following issues: the affect of low-skilled and poor immigrants on America.
I. Chan writes that immigration does not reduce job opportunities of Amer-
icans, increase the number of high school dropout or increase the costs of
services to immigrants.
1. Chan suggests that those wealthy immigrants who immigrate into
America can create more job opportunities for Americans.
2. He claims that some immigrant groups’ children, who study in
American high schools, have a greater high school graduation rate
than Americans.
3. He writes that wealthy immigrants do not use social services; there-
fore, the costs of services to immigrants should not increase.
II. However, Chan does not consider the effect of poor, struggling and
low-skilled immigrants.
1. Even though the wealthy immigrants who immigrate unto Ameri-
can can create more job opportunities for Americans, the poor and
struggling immigrants compete the job opportunities from the
low-skilled Americans.
a. The United States admits 800,000 to 900,000 mostly poor people
into the US every year (‘The Costs of Immigration’, 1996)
b. In 1996, while there were nearly 7½ million unemployed Amer-
ican workers, the U.S. admitted over 900,000 immigrants (‘Immi-
grations Lowers Wages for American Workers, 1998’)
c. 23% of Americans are employed in the low-skilled occupations
(about 25 million workers). If there is a 1% increase in the immi-
grant composition of their occupations, there is a 0.8% reduce in
wages. Since these occupations have 15% immigrants, the article
suggests that immigrations may reduce the wages of the average
American in a low-skilled occupation by perhaps $1,915 a year
(‘The Wages of Immigration: The Effect on the Low-Skilled Labor
Market,’ 1998)
2. I agree with Can that some immigrant group’s children, who study
in American high school, have a greater high school graduation
percent than American children. But most of the immigrant groups’
children have a lower high school graduation rate. Specifically, the
greatest immigrant group – Mexican – has the lowest high school
graduation rate.
a. Mexican immigrants have the lowest percent of high school
graduation – 21.3% – while Americans have a 66.5% high school
graduation rate (‘Immigration Assimilation Quotient, 1997’)
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b. immigrant high school drop out rate is 123% higher than the
native-born Americans (‘Immigration Assimilation Quotient,
1997’)
3. Chan claims that wealthy immigrants do not need many social
services; however, he ignores the costs to the states of struggling
immigrants.
a. The United States admits 800,000 to 900,000 mostly poor people
into the US every year (‘The Costs of Immigration,’ 1996)
b. immigrants use Medicaid is 175% higher than native-born
Americans
c. immigrants use food stamps is 98% higher than the native-born
Americans
d. immigrants use SSI is 39% higher than the native-born Ameri-
cans
e. immigrants use AFDC is 33% higher than the native-born
Americans
f. immigrants use cash welfare is also 29% higher than the
native-born Americans (‘Immigration Assimilation Quotient,
1997’)
Conclusion: In sum, I am skeptical of Chan’s conclusion unless he can
explain that there is not negative effects from the poor immigrants.
The student begins with a statement of her position based on experience, reading
and discussion. She then describes the views of the author she wishes to chal-
lenge and addresses each one of his claims with counterclaims supported by data
from four research articles. By rewriting the outline in paragraph form, the
student incorporated this challenge into a paper on immigration which asked
students to describe the advantages and disadvantages of current policies and
suggest changes in immigration law.
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Appendix C
Research Chart from Gender Studies
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Correspondence
Any correspondence should be directed to Dr Marcia Pally, 308 West 103 St.
#5D, New York, NY 10025, USA (mp28@is.nyu.edu).
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