hen Tisten to the cassette
and answer them. You may take notes while listening,
ber a) Why has Dave written a letter?
b) What reasons does he give?
¢) How does Dave's letter end?
4) Is Dave's letter formal or informal?
‘A letter of apology can be either formal or informal. It can be written when
‘someone has made a mistake, has failed to perform a duly or is not able to fulfil
a promise. The main body contains reasons for the inconvenience caused. In the
final paragraph you can express your hope to improve the situation or promise to
make up for any problems that have seen caused.
answer the following question
is gi
: a) Why was the letter written? b) What reason
is given forthe inconvenience? ) What action willbe taken to make up for the
inconvenience caused? d) What style of language has been used? e) What is
the topic of each paragraph?
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inconvenience caused, We Look forward to learn) from you.
Yours sincerely,
John Greenway
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Paragraph 7
season for writing
tain Body
Paragraphs 2 - 3
reasons to explain the
‘inconvenience caused
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Final Paragraph
express understanding/regret
or promise to make op for
the situation
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EB sos Language for Letters of Apology
Opening Remarks: (or!) | am writing to apologise for/l must apologise
foriPlease accept my sincerest apologies for/How can | apologise enough
foxil must apologise profusely for, ete. informal) | hope you will understand
when | say that What can | say, except I'm sorry thati'm sorry for/ lowe you
an apologyil'm so sorry if upset you in any way/ | can’t describe how sorry
11am and how guilty | feel, etc.
Closing Remarks: {orma') Once again, sincerest apologies forll hope you
will accept my apologies/I hope my apologies will befare accepted, etc.
{ioformati hope you believe me when | say how sorry I aril can't tell you
how sorry | am’ | beg you to forgive me for/There is no excuse for... and |)
hope you'll forgive me, etc.
“3 Read the two letters below and fill in the gaps with expressions from
the list. Then answer the following questions: a) Which letter is
formal and which informal? b) What is the reason for writing each
letter? ¢) What is the topic of the final paragraph in these two letters?
a) What complaint had been made in each situation? Finally,
underline the opening and closing remarks then replace them with
others from the table above.
1 toapologise/ to say how sorryTam | 5 Due to my absence/Because I
2 bad behaviour/disgraceful conduct wasn't there
3. [know/l realise 6 but/However
4. sort out the problemiresolve the | 7 severely reprimandediproperly
matter told off
Dear Mr Johnson, a .
Tam writing to you 1). for the 2) Tider
of a member of our staff towards you on Saturday | jase week.
4 Write the following letters in
the appropriate style using
120 - 180 words.
1 You have promised your boss
that you will work some extra
hours next weekend. Due to
family problem, you will be
unable to fulfil your promise.
Write a letter of apology to
your boss explaining your
reasons and promising to
make it up to him/her.
2. Your friend let you spend the
weekend at his seaside cottage.
While staying there you
accidentally stained an
expensive Persian rug, Write a
letter apologising for the
damage and offering to get it
cleaned.
8. be sure/rest assured
9 what happenedithis incident
10. put you offideter you
1)
- for my son's 2) ...
April 23rd. 3)... how much this must have upset ~ how uy ve
thought rd inset you were, and 1
you, and | hope that We CAN A) vnemom agreeably. ‘ant Td write to you to try
5) consume at the time, 1 a unable to apoloane 5) sermons WHEN YOU elle round, coal
to you in person. 6) x» L-abvays take such | )YPMt had happened straight away, 3) ene reals
incidents extremely seriously and, following your | | 9°t Your letter, 1 promise you that he aor ah
letter of complaint, the member of staff has been
7. = You can 8) that he will be
treating our customers quite differently in future.
Uhope that 9). vaill not 10). from
using our store in future. in an attempt to make up
! hope 9).
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Yours sincerely, love,
Peter Brown (Manager) tn Joanne
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