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CAR ACCIDENT
It was a beautiful Sunday afternoon. The sun was slowly making its way through the

clouds casting a golden hue. I was go to the school in a heavy heart. I trudged with heavy

steps out of my house gate. Feel bored, I hope that I can skip school and could stay at home

as my relatives will visited us on Sunday but I need to attend classes at school.

While walk, I looked around the surrounding. I saw a gang of motorist fool around under a

tree by the roadside. One of the motorists started to playing stunts with his motorbike.

Unfortunately, he failed and fell down from his bike. His friends started to laugh and mock

at him. Meanwhile, I burst out laughing as it was really hilarious and I could not hold myself

from laugh.

All of the sudden, a container lorry appear out of the gloom. Its menacing shadow loomed

over the motorist. There were a blaring of a horn and the screeching of brakes. The driver

attempted to swerve to avoid hit the motorist but was to no avail. I was shocked and my eyes

nearly popped out of its sockets.

The motorist was hitted and he collapsed like a rog-doll, his arms and legs sprawled on the

ground motionless. He lost his conscious and the pool of crimson blood formed beneath him.

Without hesitation, I immediately run to the nearby telephone booth and lodge a report

to the police and summoned the ambulance. I so nervous and curious about the happening and

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I ran back to the scene. When I reached there, I could not see anything as the crowd had

surrounded the scene.

After a while, the police and ambulance arrived the scene. The police regulated the

traffic and the victims were admitted to the hospital in no time. After that, the crowd

evacuated from the scene and I continued my journey back to the school but I fasten my

pace as I was late. Along the way, I reminisce back to the accident and I think that we

should careful while driving. We must obeying the rules and regulations and do not speed on

the road. This was indeed a special experience to me. I had learnt a valuable lesson as we

should never fooling around on the road as the saying goes ‘it is better safe than sorry.’

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