Master in Business Administration

Far Eastern University

Manila

REVISION MATRIX
 Proposal Defense  Final Defense

Proposed Title :

Name of Proponent :

Comments, Suggestions and

Action Taken Signature
Recommendation
Panel 1 Name:_______________________
1. Avoid using “should” 1. Changed, from should to may or can
whatever is applicable. See
Recommendation.
Panel 2 Name:_______________________

1. Arrangement of SOP based on the 1. Arranged, the SOP was arranged

arrangement of Conclusion and
Recommendation
2. Add Department and Position in the
SOP
3. Add SOP that will address the
hypothesis
4. Add SOP that will answer the basis for
formulating HR Strategic Plan
5. Digits equitability
6. Add significance of the study in the
recommendation
7. Script of unstructured interview
based on the Ch4 to the order of Ch5.
2. Added, department and position in the
SOP p.6
3. Added, Is there a significance…in the
SOP. p.6
4. Added, what can be the basis… p.6
5. Arranged, 1.00-1.50,1.51-2.50… p.53
6. Added, this study may help the Far
Eastern University… p.89
7. Unstructured interview guide was
added, Appendices F

Panel 3 Name:_______________________
1. Remove the 1st segment in the
conceptual framework.
2. Prepare a matrix in the
recommendation.
3. Add the hypothesis in the Statistical
Analysis of Data
4. Center the Title of the Chapters.
1. Removed the “Current HR Strategic
Plan of FEU”, p.5
2. Created, selected opportunities and
challenges in order to have a Basis in
HR Strategic Plan p.90
3. Added, Hypothesis-T-test p.56
4. Arranged, all chapter titles were
centered

Approved by :
Name of Adviser

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