Ars Hafizhah Ramadhanita

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1. Hook : It was a sunny day in the summer of 1998 when my family moved out of the city
to the suburbs.
2. Background information : I did not like leaving because I would lose my friends and the
places where I had so much fun. It was very sad for me to see my friends standing in
front of the old house as we said our last goodbyes
3. Thesis statement : little did I know that this move would turn out to be one of the best
moments of my life
4. Topic of the thesis statement : The writer move
5. Controlling idea of the thesis statement : would turn out to be one of the best moments of
my life

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1. Topic sentence : the writer realized that writing on the college is different from
writing in the high school.
2. Supporting details in this text consist of example and reason. The example is the
writer gives a different about write in college and write in high school. If in high
school, he write about his family, childhood, and friend while he at the collage he
write about a variety of issues that unfamiliar with his, such as reacting a piece of
literature or writing about community. And the reason is as a writer he must
understand the assigned topic. because in some cases he has to read and do research
to build a foundation such as including examples, statistics, and direct quotes to
support his opinion
3. a. Therefore, we must pay attention to the grammar that we will use the essay we
write to be correct
b. the contents of the next paragraph explain detail how to use good and correct
grammar