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A Contemplation Upon Flowers - Literature Notes

BRAVE flowers--that I could gallant it like you,


And be as little vain! LITERAL MEANING
You come abroad, and make a harmless show, The persona wishes that he could be as brave as the
And to your beds of earth again. flowers, who are aware of their allegiance to the
You are not proud: you know your birth: earth. They know their place and obey the order, or
For your embroider'd garments are from earth. cycle, of life and death. The persona wishes that he
could be this way because he is the opposite, he
You do obey your months and times, but I wants to live forever. The persona wants the flowers
Would have it ever Spring: to teach him NOT to fear death, but to accept it.
My fate would know no Winter, never die,
Nor think of such a thing. LITERARY DEVICES
O that I could my bed of earth but view 1. SIMILE
And smile, and look as cheerfully as you!
 Stanza 1, line: The persona is wishing that
O teach me to see Death and not to fear,
he could be as brave as the flower. This
But rather to take truce!
implies that the persona does not think that
How often have I seen you at a bier,
he is brave, but a coward in the face of
And there look fresh and spruce!
death.
You fragrant flowers! then teach me, that my breath
Like yours may sweeten and perfume my death..

Stanza 2, line 14: This is another comparison between the persona and the plant. The persona wishes that
he could look death in the face and be cheerful, like the plant. Again, this emphasizes that he fears death.
2. EUPHEMISM
This phrase is a replacement for the word death. It softens death and makes it appear welcoming and
pleasant.
3. IRONY
It is ironic that the flowers look so fresh and alive, when they are facing their very mortality, on the top of
a casket. Death is a sad affair, yet the flowers are at their best when ushering people back to the earth.

4. PERSONIFICATION
The persona is speaking directly to the flowers and giving them human qualities, therefore, the whole
poem is an example of the use of personification at its best. He even goes as far as to ask the flowers to
teach him things that will allow him to acquire their qualities.

TONE
The tone of the poem is admiration, because the persona literally admires the flowers for its accepting
attitude towards death.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood, or atmosphere of the poem is a pensive one. The persona is thinking about death, how he
relates to it versus how others relate to it. 

CONTRAST A contrast in this poem is the persona's fear of death, versus the flowers' acceptance of it.
THEMATIC CATEGORY
Death, nature, 
O'l Higue - Literature Notes

You think I like this stupidness! - LITERAL MEANING


gallivanting all night without skin, In this poem, the Ol' Higue / soucouyant tells of
burning myself out like cane-fire  her frustration with her lifestyle. She does not
to frighten the foolish? like the fact that she sometimes has to parade
And for what? A few drops of baby blood?
around, in the form of a fireball, without her
You think I wouldn't rather
take my blood seasoned in fat skin at night. She explains that she has to do
black-pudding, like everyone else? this in order to scare people, as well as to
And don't even talk 'bout the pain of salt acquire baby blood. She explains that she
and having to bend these old bones down would rather acquire this blood via cooked
to count a thousand grains of rice! food, like every-one else. Her worst complaint
is the pain of salt, as well as having to count
If only babies didn't smell so nice! rice grains. She exhibits some regret for her
And if I could only stop  lifestyle but implies that she cannot resist a
hearing the soft, soft call
of that pure blood running in new veins,
baby's smell, as well as it's pure blood. The
singing the sweet song of life 'newness' of the baby tempts the Ol' Higue, and
tempting an old, dry-up woman who been she cannot resist because she is an old woman
holding her final note for years and years, who fears death, which can only be avoided by
afraid of the dying hum ... consuming the baby's blood. She affirms her
usefulness in the scheme of things, however, by
Then again, if I didn't fly and come claiming that she provides mothers with a name
to that fresh pulse in the middle of the night, for their fears (this being the death of a child),
2.how would you, mother,
as well as some-one to blame when the evil that
name your ancient dread?
And who to blame they wish for their child, in moments of tired
for the murder inside your head ...? frustration, is realized. She implies that she will
Believe me - never die, so long as women keep having
As long as it have women giving birth babies.
a poor ol' higue like me can never dead.

LITERARY DEVICES
1. SIMILE
Cane-fire has a very distinct quality. It burns very quickly and its presence is felt through it's pungent
smell. Therefore, when the Ol' Higue compares herself to cane fire in her fireball state, it implies that she
uses a lot of energy quickly, and is very visible.  

2. RHETORICAL QUESTION

 Stanza 1,line 4: This rhetorical question highlights the scant regard that the Higue has for the
average person. She is thoroughly annoyed that she has to literally waste her energy on them.
 Stanza 1, line 5: This highlights the fact that, again, she is annoyed that she has to expend so
much energy to obtain a few drops of baby blood.
 Stanza 1, lines 6-8: The Ol' Higue is emphasizing the fact that regular people ingest blood too,
just in a more palatable manner. She would not mind if she could ingest it in the same manner as
well.
 Stanza 3, lines 22-23: At this point the Ol' Higue is making excuses for her presence, claiming
that she serves an actual purpose in the scheme of life. If a child dies of unknown causes, she can
be scapegoated for it.
 Stanza 3, lines 24-25: 'The murder inside your head' refers to the moments, when out of pure
frustration and tiredness, a mother might wish ill on her child. The Ol' Higue is implying that,
again, she can be used as a scapegoat if something unfortunate happens to the child. The mother
is relieved of bearing the burden of guilt.

3. REPETITION
The repetition of the word 'soft' emphasizes the fact that the call of the child's blood has captured and
beguiled the Ol' Higue'. She implies that she cannot resist that call.

4. ALLITERATION
This device emphasizes the Ol' Higue's dependence, even addiction, to the sweet blood of the baby.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective.

TONE
The tone of the poem is slightly bitter and resigned. She accepts that the cycle of her life cannot change. 

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Supernatural
A Stone's Throw - Literature Notes

LITERAL MEANING
We shouted out A crowd has caught a woman. The persona
'We've got her! Here she is! implies to the reader that the woman is not
It's her all right '. decent. She was beautiful, but scared because
We caught her. she had gotten 'roughed up' a little by the
There she was - crowd. The persona states that the woman has
experienced men's hands on her body before,
A decent-looking woman, you'd have said, but this crowd's hands were virtuous.
(They often are) He also makes a proviso that if this crowd
Beautiful, but dead scared, bruises her, it cannot be compared to what she
Tousled - we roughed her up has experienced before. The persona also
A little, nothing much speaks about a last assault and battery to come.
He justifies this last assault by calling it justice,
And not the first time and it is justice that feels not only right, but
By any means good. The crowd's 'justice' is placed on hold by
She'd felt men's hands the interruption of a preacher, who stops to talk
Greedy over her body –  to the lady. He squats on the ground and writes
But ours were virtuous, something that the crowd cannot see.
Of course. Essentially, the preacher judges them, thereby
allowing the lady to also judge the crowd,
And if our fingers bruised leading to the crowd inevitably judging itself.
Her shuddering skin, The crowd walks away from the lady, still
These were love-bites, compared holding stones [which can be seen as a
To the hail of kisses of stone, metaphor for judgments] that can be thrown
The last assault another day.
And battery, frigid rape,
To come
Of right.
LITERARY DEVICES
For justice must be done 1. SARCASM
Specially when The persona is making the point that the lady
It tastes so good. was in fact NOT decent looking. 

And then - this guru, 2. PERSONIFICATION


Preacher, God-merchant, God-knows-what - This device is particularly effective because the
Spoilt the whole thing, word 'kisses' is used. Kiss implies something
Speaking to her pleasant, but it is actually utilized to emphasize
(Should never speak to them) something painful that has happened to the
Squatting on the ground - her level, lady; she was stoned.
Writing in the dust
Something we couldn't read. 3. PUN
And saw in her
Something we couldn't see  Title: The title of the poem is itself a
At least until pun on two levels. A stone's throw is
He turned his eyes on us, used by many people in the Caribbean
Her eyes on us, to describe a close distance. eg. "She
Our eyes upon ourselves. lives a stone's throw away". The other
We walked away
Still holding stones 
use of the title is to highlight the
That we may throw
content of the poem. It is a figurative
Another day
stoning, or judging, of a woman.
Given the urge.

 Line 23: There is a play on the word 'come'. The persona is telling the reader that the crowd is
planning to rape the lady. This act is to come, or occur, in the near future. Come, in this context,
also means to ejaculate, the culmination of the act of sex. The rapists in the crowd also plan to
'come'.

4. ALLUSION (biblical)
The content of the poem alludes to the story of Mary Magdalene in the Christian Bible. See John 8 v 5-7. 

TONE
The tone of the poem is mixed. At times it is almost braggadocious, then it becomes sarcastic, moving to
scornful.

THEMATIC CATEGORY
Discrimination, religion, survival, hypocrasy, oppression, alienation.
Dreaming Black Boy - Literature Notes

I wish my teacher's eyes wouldn't


go past me today. Wish he'd know
it's okay to hug me when I kick
a goal. Wish I myself wouldn't
hold back when an answer comes. LITERAL MEANING
I'm no woodchopper now The poem is about a black boy who wishes that he
like all ancestor's. could have regular things in life. Things such as
a congratulatory hug, to be educated to the highest
I wish I could be educated level and to travel without harassment. The
to the best of tune up, and earn persona yearns to stop fighting for the basic right
good money and not sink to lick  to be successful and to rise above societal
boots .I wish I could go on every  expectations.
crisscross way of the globe
and no persons or powers or
hotel keepers would make it a waste.
LITERARY DEVICES 
I wish life wouldn't spend me out 1. REPETITION: 
opposing. Wish same way creation The constant repetition of the phrase 'I wish' points
would have me stand it would have me stretch, and to a yearning, a desperation even, for the basic
hold high, my voice things that life has to offer. The repetition gives
Paul Robeson's, my inside eye credence to the idea that the persona
a sun. Nobody wants to say might believe that his wishes are actually dreams
hello to nasty answers. that might not come true.

.I wish torch throwers of night 2. ALLUSION:


would burn lights for decent times.
Wish plotters in pyjamas would pray  Stanza 1, lines 6 and 7, alludes to slavery,
for themselves. Wish people wouldn't  the state of lacking control over one's own
talk as if I dropped from Mars   life and destiny. The fact that reference is
made to this hints to how the persona feels
I wish only boys were scared about his life. He does not feel as if he has
behind bravados, for I could suffer. control over it.
I could suffer a big big lot.
I wish nobody would want to earn
the terrible burden I can suffer.

Stanza 3, lines 19 to 20, alludes to Paul Robeson, a black intellectual, who attained success despite
difficult circumstances. The persona yearns to be like this person. He wants room to stretch intellectually. 

 Stanza 4, lines 22 to 25, alludes to the klu klux klan. Burning lights refers to the burning of
crosses and the pyjamas alludes to their white outfits that look like pyjamas. The persona wants
them to leave him alone, find something else to do other than make his life difficult by
contributing to his wishes remaining in the realm of  the dreams.  
 TONE
The tone/mood of the poem is one of sadness. The persona is thinking about how he is treated and
he reacts to this in a sad way. He keeps wishing that things were different.

THEMATIC CATEGORY: 
Racism, survival, oppression, desire/dreams. 

Dulce et Decorum Est - Literature Notes


Bent double, like old beggars under sacks LITERAL MEANING
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we Wilfred Owen, the poet, tells of his first hand
cursed through sludge, experience in war. He tells the tale of tired and
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs wounded soldiers walking through dirt and sludge.
And towards our distant rest began to trudge. Suddenly, there is a warning about gas, which the
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots soldiers hurriedly and awkwardly heed by donning
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all their helmets. Unfortunately, one soldier is too late
blind; in donning the helmet and his companions watch
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots him 'drowning' in the gas. The unfortunate soldier
Of tired, outstripped Five-Nines that dropped was thrown in the back of a wagon, where it is
behind. implied that he was left to die. The persona points
out that if you (the reader/ listener) could have
Gas! Gas! Quick boys! - An ecstasy of fumbling, witnessed these events, then you would not tell
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time; children the old lie: dulce et decorum est pro
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling, patria mori (It is sweet and honourable to die for
And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime ... one's country). 
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green
light, LITERARY DEVICES
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning. 1.SIMILE
In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
 Stanza 1, line 1: This simile introduces the
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.
exhaustion of the soldiers.  
 Stanza 1, line 2: This emphasizes not only
If in some smothering dreams you too could
the tiredness of the soldiers, but the fact
pace
that they might be sick as well.
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
 Stanza 2, line 19: This device gives a
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
visual image of how the soldier physically
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
reacted to the gas. Floundering implies
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood 
flopping about, therefore, the soldier was
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
flopping about violently. We know it was
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
violent because fire and lime illicit
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,-
excruciating pain.
My friend, you would not tell with such a high
 Stanza 4, line 39: This device gives a
zest
visual image of the expression on the
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
soldier's face. This is a particularly
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
grotesque image that highlights the soldier
Pro patria mori.
in the throes of death. 

 Stanza 4, line 39: Cancer is a horrible disease that takes many lives on a daily basis. Therefore, to
compare this dying soldiers face to this disease is to emphasize the agony that the soldier was
going through, which was reflected on his face.
 Stanza 4, lines 39-40: This is another graphic comparison that compares the soldier's face to
incurable sores. 'Sores' is a disgusting visual image of degradation which, in turn, highlights the
soldier in the throes of death.
ALLITERATION

 Stanza 1, line 7: This device points to the level of fatigue that the soldiers were undergoing.
 Stanza 1, lines 7-9: This highlights not only the fatigue that the soldiers were feeling, but the fact
that they were injured as well.
 Stanza 4, lines 29-30: This device highlights a visually graphic death mask. The soldier is in the
throes of impending death.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective. The persona/ poet is thinking about his experiences in WW1.

TONE
The general tone of the poem is both sarcastic and ironic. The persona/ poet tries to present a visual of the
realities of war while using the haunting words that contradict that reality. It is, in fact, NOT sweet and
honourable to die for one's country.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
War, death, survival, oppression, patriotism
Epitaph - Literature Notes

They hanged him on a 4. clement morning, 5.


swung LITERAL MEANING
between the falling sunlight and the women's The poem is an epitaph to a slave that was hung in
breathing, 1.like a black apostrophe to pain. the past. The first stanza explains that the
All morning while the children 2.hushed nameless slave was hung in the morning, and
their hopscotch joy and 6.the cane kept growing while some respect was paid to his memory, in the
3.he hung there sweet and low. form of the children's actions, life essentially went
                       At least that's how on. In stanza two, the persona makes it clear that
they tell it. It was long ago this slave's death has little relevance in the present,
and 7.what can we recall of a dead slave or two except as a passing memory when islanders think
except when we 8.punctuate our island tale about what has influenced their lives up to the
1.they swing like sighs across 9.the brutal present.
sentences, and 10.anger pauses   
till they pass away.

LITERARY DEVICES
1. SIMILE

 Stanza 1, line 4: The swinging body of the slave is compared with an apostrophe to pain. This
comparison is very powerful because, in English grammar, an apostrophe represents ownership.
Therefore, it is implying that the pain of the black race is so palpable that it is almost something
that they own. It emphasizes the painful nature of their history.
 Stanza 2, line 14: The dead slave's body's swing is compared to sighs. A sigh is an exhalation of
breathe that can signal many feelings; relief, agitation, joy, etc., with the major quality being
brevity. Therefore, the emphasis is not necessarily on the feeling that the dead slave elicits, upon
being remembered, but the brevity with which he is remembered.
 2. METAPHOR
This metaphor emphasizes the fun that the children paused, out of respect for the swinging body
of the dead slave.

3. ALLUSION
This line alludes to the Negro Spiritual 'Swing Low'. This spiritual speaks of an individual's
journey to heaven. This relates to this poem because it carries the implication that the slave's soul
has gone to heaven. He hung 'sweet and low' and the chariot came for him, his soul is at rest. 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective

TONE
The tone of the poem is reflective and slightly sarcastic. 

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Death, racism, desires and dreams
Forgive My Guilt - Literature Notes
Not always sure what things called sins may be, I
am sure of one sin I have done.
It was years ago, and I was a boy,
I lay in the 1.frost flowers with a gun, LITERAL MEANING
2.the air ran blue as the flowers; I held my breath, An adult is reminiscing about a traumatic childhood
2.two birds on golden legs slim as dream experience. The persona went hunting and shot two
things 2.ran like quick silver on the 1.golden sand, birds, plovers. He suffers extreme guilt about this
my gun went off, they ran with broken wings into action in adulthood. The poem describes the event,
the sea, I ran to fetch them in, but they swam with the actions of the bird, how he reacts, and, by the
their heads high out to sea, They cried like two last line, asks the birds to forgive his guilt.
sorrowful high flutes,
With 1.jagged ivory bones where wings should
be. For days I heard them when I walked that
headland, crying out to their kind 4.in the blue, The LITERARY DEVICES
other plovers were going over south on silver wings 1.METAPHOR
leaving these broken two. The cries went out one
day; but I still hear them over all the sounds of  Line 4: The nature of frost is that it covers
sorrow 5.in war or peace I ever have heard, time everything in its path, therefore, when the
cannot 6.drown them, 1.Those slender flutes of flowers are compared to frost, it implies that
sorrow never cease, 3.Two airy things forever there were a lot of flowers, enough to hide
denied the air! I never knew how their lives at last the boy from the birds. 
were split, but I have hoped for years all that is
wild,
Airy, and beautiful will forgive my guilt.

Line 8: The sand is being compared to gold, the colour. It is emphasizing how beautiful the setting was.

Line 12: This metaphor emphasizes the injuries that the birds sustained. The bones are compared
to jagged ivory, which is a direct contrast to the smooth feathers that existed before the injury.

Lines 20-21: The birds are compared to a flute, an instrument that plays beautiful music. This emphasizes
the sadness that is related to their death.

2. SIMILE

Line 5: The air and the flowers are being compared, both are blue.

Lines 6-7: This simile offers a beautiful visual image of the birds. Dreams are beautiful, and the birds are
compared to this.

 Line 7: The speed of the birds is being highlighted, while also maintaining that beautiful visual
imagery.

3. PUN
The pun is between the words 'airy' and 'air'. 'Airy' means light and beautiful, while 'air' refers to the sky
and flying. The poet is lamenting that these light and beautiful things can no longer fly and feel the
pleasure of air rushing past them. 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is nostalgia and guilt. 

TONE
The tone of the poem is sad. The poet's response to his guilt is sadness.

THEMATIC CATEGORY
Death, childhood experiences, nature, guilt, loss of innocence, desire/dreams.
God's Grandeur - Literature Notes

The world is 7.charged with the 8.grandeur of LITERAL MEANING


God. The poet expresses that the world is full of God's
1.It will flame out, like shining from shook foil: glory and greatness. This greatness, however, will
1.It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil burn out in a dramatic manner  because of man
Crushed. 2.Why do men then now not reck 3.his who smears, smudges and pollutes everything
rod? without consciousness. Nature is resilient,
4.Generations have trod, have trod, have trod; however, and will persevere from deep in the earth
9.And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared and burst forth, counteracting all of man's ill. 
with toil;
5.And wears man's  smudge and shares man's
smell: the soil
is bare now, 10.nor can foot feel, being shod. LITERARY DEVICES
1. SIMILE
And for all this, nature is never spent;
5.There lives the dearest freshness deep down  Line 3: This line indicates that the world
things; will burn out in a brilliant way. Think of
And though the last lights off the black West went how shiny and reflective foil can be, that
Oh, morning, 5.at the brown brink eastward, is the brilliance with which the earth will
springs - temporarily burn out.
Because the 11.Holy Ghost over the bent  Line 4: Think of the manner in which oil
6.World broods with warm breast and with ah! slowly spreads across water, eventually
bright wings. taking over as much of the surface as
possible. That is the way in which the
world gathers to a greatness.

2. RHETORICAL QUESTION
The persona questions why men do not care about God's wrath. He implies that this wrath is sure because
the Earth is charged, or commanded with the grandeur of God. 

3. ALLUSION (biblical)
This 'rod' refers to the rod of correction that is found in the Christian Bible. See 2 Samuel 7:14. This line
implies that God will punish man for being reckless with the world.

4. REPETITION
This device highlights the damage that man has done to the world. Trodding implies that one walks, or
tramples, in order to crush or injure.

5. ALLITERATION

 Lines 10-11: This device emphasizes the impact that man has had on his environment. He has
impacted every crevice of the world in some negative way, as implied by words such as 'smudge'.
 Lines 14-15: This device clarifies that the Earth is resilient, no matter what man does to harm it, it
will bounce back. 
 Lines 18-19: This device simply re-iterates the resilience of the Earth, we can actually visualize
the sun rising.

6. PERSONIFICATION  
When one broods, they are pondering on something. Therefore, the world ponders, but in a positive way,
with warm breasts. This implies that it feels good because it has persevered despite of man's interference. 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is pensive because the persona is reflecting on man's influence on the world.

TONE
The tone of the poem is one of confidence and formality.

THEMATIC CATEGORY
Nature, religion
It is the Constant Image of your Face - Literature Notes

It is the 3.constant image of your face


framed in my hands as you knelt before my chair
the 4.grave attention of 1.your eyes
surveying me amid my 5.world of knives LITERAL MEANING
that stays with me, 1.perennially accuses The persona reflects on the image of some-one he
and convicts me of 2.heart's-treachery: cares for. This love interest accused him, with
and neither you nor I can plead excuses their eyes, of breaking their heart. The persona
for you, you know, can claim no loyalty -  admits that both of them (he and the love interest)
my land takes precedence of all my loves. can make no excuses for his behaviour because the
love interest does not take precedence over his
Yet I beg mitigation, pleading guilty land, or country. Despite this fact, the persona
for you, my dear, accomplice of my heart begs for mercy, pleading guilty for being seduced
made, without words, 6.such blackmail with your by his love interest's beauty. This person protects
beauty him dearly and he admits that, as a result of this,
and proffered me such dear protectiveness he has committed treason against his country. He
that I confess without remorse or shame hopes that his country, his other dearest love, will
my still-fresh treason to1.my country pardon him because he loves both his country and
and hope that she, my other, dearest love his love interest.
will pardon freely, not attaching blame
being your mistress (or your match) in tenderness.

LITERARY DEVICES
1. PERSONIFICATION

 Lines 4, 6-7: The love interest's eyes constantly accuses and convicts the persona. This device
highlights the extent to which the persona has hurt this person.
 Lines 18-20: The persona hopes that his country, his other dearest love, will forgive him for the
treasonous act of loving another. This highlights the patriotism that defines the persona's
relationship to his country.

2. OXYMORON
The term heart's-treachery implies that the heart, something so vital and indicative of love, has committed
a terrible crime. It highlights the heartbreak that the persona has caused his love interest. 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective. The persona is thinking about his two loves and how he is torn
between them.
 TONE
The tone of the poem is sadness and guilt. The persona is guilt ridden over this love triangle and sadness
permeates the words that he uses to describe it.

THEMATIC CATEGORY
Love, guilt, patriotism, places, desires/ dreams 
Le Loupgarou - Literature Notes
A 5.curious 1.tale that threaded through town
Through greying women sewing under eaves,
Was how his greed had brought old Le Brun
down, 1.greeted by slowly shutting jalouses LITERAL MEANING
When he approached them in 6.white linen-linen This poem tells the tale of old LeBrun, a man that
suit, was rumoured by the townspeople to be a
Pink glasses, cork hat and 2.tap-tapping cane, loupgarou. Old women would relax under eaves
3.A dying man licensed to sell sick fruit, and gossip about Le Brun, while literally shutting
Ruined by fiends with whom he'd made a bargain. him out of their lives with their closing windows.
It seems one night, these 4.Christian witches said, The prevailing gossip, in this poem, is that he
He changed himself into an 7.Alsatian hound, transformed into a hound one night, but was dealt
A slathering lycenthrope, hot on a scent, a wound by his own watchman. He then lugged
1.But his own watchman dealt the thing a wound his entrails back to his doorstep, almost dead.
Which howled and lugged its entrails, trailing wet   
With blood back to its doorstep, almost dead.

LITERARY DEVICES
1. ALLITERATION 

 Lines 1-3: This alliteration gives the reader a visual imagery of the manner in which the gossip
about Le Brun spread. A thread is thin and fine and can weave itself in any crevice, sometimes in
a very non-linear and sinuous manner. This describes the way in which the gossip spread. It
managed to touch the whole village in an almost insiduous, and complete, manner.
 Line 5: This literary device speaks to the results of the gossip. Le Brun is alienated from the
people of the town. Their fascination with him, however, is evident by the fact that they slowly
shut their jalouses/windows. The lack of speed implies that they are watching him, while also
alienating him.
 Lines 17-21: This alliteration highlights the severity of the loupgarou's injuries. You can almost
see and hear the wetness of the blood, as well as see the entrails trailing wet through the use of
this device.

2. ONOMATOPOEIA
The tap-tapping cane is a part of Le Brun's physical description. He appears to stand out, in terms of his
physical appearance, down to the use of his cane.

3. PARADOX
This statement appears nonsensical at first, but actually makes sense in the long run. The loupgarou is, in
fact, a man who is leading a half life as man and beast, so he is not really 'living'. The fact that he can pass
on the 'gift' of becoming a werewolf clarifies the fact that Le Brun is actually 'licensed to sell sick fruit', or
pass on his sick 'gift'.

4. OXYMORON
The words 'Christian' and 'witches', placed together, emphasizes the dual nature of the women in the
village. They are good Christian women who mean no harm, but their fear of the 'difference' that they
sense in Le Brun (contributed by his mode of dress), leads them to react in an unchristian manner, like
witches, in dealing with him. 

* IRONY
It is ironic that Le Brun's own watchman dealt him a lethal blow.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective.

TONE
The tone of the poem is calm and reflective. The persona appears to be simply recounting a piece of
gossip.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Supernatural
Once Upon A Time - Literature Notes.

3.Once upon a time, son, LITERAL MEANING


they used to laugh with their hearts A father is talking to his son and telling him how
and laugh with their eyes; things used to be. The father tells his son that people
but now 4.they only laugh with their teeth, used to be sincere, but are now superficial and seek
while 1.their ice-block eyes only to take from others. The persona tells his son
5.search behind my shadow. that he has learnt to be just like these people, but he
does not want to be. He wants to be as sincere as his
There was a time indeed son.
they used to 6.shake hands with their hearts;
but that's gone, son.
Now they shake hands without hearts
while their left 7.hands search  LITERARY DEVICES
my empty pockets. 1. METAPHOR
The people's eyes are as cold as ice. This means that
'Feel at home'! 'Come again' ; there is no warmth or real feeling in the words that
they say, and when I come they say, or how they behave.This metaphor
again and feel literally allows you to visualize a block of ice, cold
at home, once, twice and unwelcoming.
there will be no thrice - 
for then I find doors shut on me. 2. SIMILE

So I have learnt many things, son.  Stanza 4, lines 20-21 emphasizes the
2.I have learnt to wear many faces constant changes in the persona's face. If
like dresses - homeface, you think of how often a woman changes
officeface, streetface, hostface her dress, then that is how often the persona
cocktail face, with all their 2.conforming smiles like adjusts his personality to suit the people
a fixed portrait smile. around him. The list of faces that follow
this line emphasizes this point. 
And I have learned, too.  Stanza 4, lines 23-24 compares people's
to laugh with only my teeth faces to smiles in a portrait. If you think
and shake hands without my heart about a portrait, it is usually very formal
I have also learnt to say, 'Goodbye', and stiff, even uncomfortable. Therefore,
when I mean 'Good-riddance' ; the implication is that the smiles are
to say 'Glad to meet you', actually fake and stiff. They are
without being glad; and to say 'It's been conforming, or trying to fit, to a
nice talking to you', after being bored. preconceived mold that is set up by societal
expectations.
But believe me, son.
I want to be what I used to be
when I was like you. I want
8.unlearn all these muting things.
Most of all, I want to relearn
how to laugh, for 2.my laugh in the mirror
shows only my teeth like a snake's bare fangs!

So show me, son,


how to laugh; show me how
I used to laugh and smile
3.once upon a time when I was like you.

Stanza 6, lines 38-40 compares the persona's laugh to a snakes. When you think of a snake, words such as
sneaky and deceitful come to mind. Therefore, the implication is that the persona is fake, just like the
people he despises. 

3. REPETITION
This phrase is repeated at the beginning and the end of the poem. This usually signals the beginning of a
fairy tale. Therefore, it is implied that the persona is nostalgic about the past.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is nostalgic. The persona is remembering how things used to be when he was
young and innocent, like his son.

TONE
The tone of the poem is sad. The poet's response to his nostalgia is sadness.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Death, childhood experiences, hypocrasy, loss of innocence, desire/dreams.

* It is IRONIC that the persona is behaving in the exact way that he despises. However, and there is an
implication that things cannot go back to what he remembers, due to the influence of societal
expectations. 
Orchids - Literature Notes

I leave this house


3.box pieces of the five week life I've gathered.

I'll send them on


LITERAL MEANING
to fill spaces in my future life.
The persona is moving from a house that she has
occupied for five weeks. She has sent her
One thing is left
belongings to her future home, but one item remains
a spray of orchid someone gave
in her old space, an orchid. The persona clarifies
4.from bouquet one who
that she was given the orchid as a gift, but implies
makes a ritual of flower-giving sent.
that it holds no value because the gifting of orchids
is habitual for the person who gave her. She
The orchids have no fragrance
describes the flower as odourless, but attractive. She
but purple petals draw you
watered the orchid once, expecting it to die, but it
to look at the 2.purple heart.
survived. It not only survived, but bloomed. The
persona contemplates plucking the bloom and
I watered them once
pressing it between the pages of a book. The
when 1.the blossoms were full blown
purpose of this is to allow her to appreciate the
like polished poems.
flower.
I was sure they'd wilt
and I would toss them out with the five week litter.

They were stubborn.


LITERARY DEVICES
I starved them.
1. SIMILE
They would not die.
The orchid's full blown blossoms are being
compared to a polished poem. The word polished in
This morning the bud at the stalk's tip 5.unfurled.
this comparison implies perfection, shiny and
pleasant to read. 
I think I'll pluck the 6.full-blown blooms
press them between 7.pages of memory.

Perhaps in their thin dried transparency

I'll discover their 8.peculiar poetry.

2. PUN
The purple heart literally refers to the splash of color in the center of the orchid's bloom, but it could also
refer to the bravery of the flower. This is so because a purple heart, in the army, is a medal that a soldier
receives for bravery.
MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is pensive, or thoughtful. The persona is thinking about the lack of value that she
places in the orchid.
TONE
The tone of the poem is one of almost bored musing.
THEMATIC CATEGORY
Death, nature, survival, desire/ dreams.
Sonnet Composed Upon Westminster Bridge, September 3, 1802

Earth has not anything to show more 4.fair:


Dull would he be of soul who could pass by
A sight so touching in its 5.majesty:
LITERAL MEANING
1.This City now doth, like a garment, wear
The persona in this poem is reflecting on the
The beauty of the morning; silent, bare,
perfection of the city. He believes that there is
Ships, towers, domes, theatres and temples Lie
nothing on Earth so beautiful as the city in the
open upon the fields, and to the sky;
morning. Only a dull person would not appreciate
All bright and glittering in the smokeless air.
such a majestic sight. He is awed by the calm of
2.Never did sun more beautifully 6.steep
the city.
In his first splendour, valley, rock, or hill;
Ne'er saw I, never felt, a calm so deep!
3.The river glideth at his own steep will:
Dear God! 4.the very houses seem asleep;
And all that mighty heart is lying still!

LITERARY DEVICES
1. SIMILE
The persona compares the manner in which the beauty of the morning settles over the city, to that of a
garment on a body. This emphasizes the perfection of the beauty of the morning, just as a garment flows
smoothly over a body.

2. PERSONIFICATION

 Lines 9-10: The sun is referred to as a male who rises sharply and beautifully. This emphasizes
the beauty of the city in the morning. The use of this personification also helps the reader to
personalize this beauty.
 Line 12: Like the sun, the river is personalized as well. This allows the reader to see the river as
real, instead of a thing. It comes alive and we can visualize it's movement, gliding, as beautiful.
 Line 13: When some-one is asleep, they are usually peaceful. Therefore, when the persona
describes the houses as sleeping, he is emphasizing the peace that exists in the city in the
morning. The inhabitants of the houses are asleep, therefore the houses are quiet and peaceful.
MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is pensive, or thoughtful. The persona is expressing his thoughts, and
reaction to, the city in the morning.
TONE
The tone of the poem is one of awe.
THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Nature, places.

South - Literature Notes

1.But today I 4.recapture the islands LITERAL MEANING


bright beaches: blue mist from the ocean The persona speaks about the fact that today he is
rolling into the fishermen's houses. recapturing the beauty of the island of his birth.
1.By these shores I was born: sound of the sea He reflects on the fact that he has travelled to the
came in at my window,2. life heaved and breathed lands of the north, which appeared to be the very
in me then opposite of his island. The persona appeared, at
with the strength of that turbulent soil. that point, to be homesick for his island and
resented the ease and comfort that the Northerners'
5.Since then I have travelled: moved far from felt towards their land. He then shifts back to the
the beaches: present where he appreciates certain features of
6.sojourned in stoniest cities, walking the lands of the island, particularly those that remind him of
the north his past on the island.
1.In sharp, slanting sleet and the hail,  
crossed countless saltless savannas and come
to this house in the forest 2.where the shadows
oppress me LITERARY DEVICES
and the only water is rain and the tepid taste 1. ALLITERATION
of the river.
 Stanza 1, lines 1-2: The sound that the
7.We who are born of the ocean can never seek alliteration illicits, when spoken, is a
solace positive one. This is the case because the
in rivers: 3.their flowing runs on like our longing, alliteration forces the reader to sound
8.reproves us our lack of endeavour and purpose, cheerful, thereby facilitating the
9.proves that our striving will founder on that. interpretation that the persona is happy to
We resent them this wisdom, this freedom: be home.
passing us  Stanza 1, lines 4-5: This alliteration,
toiling, waiting and watching their cunning again, draws the reader through the sound
declensions down to the sea. that it illicits. One can almost hear the
sound that the sea makes through the
Bright waves splash up from the rocks to refresh repetition of the 's' sound. It emphasizes
us, the joy that the persona feels to be home.
1.blue sea-shells shift in their wake  Stanza 2, lines 13-14: This alliteration,
and 10.there is the thatch of the fishermen's when spoken, is staccato. It literally
houses, the path emphasizes the persona's discomfort, and
made of pebbles, 11.and look! dislike, of the new context that he is faced
Small urchins combing the beaches with. It is alien to him, as seen when
look up from their traps to salute us: contrasted with the scene that he describes
they remember us just as we left them. in the first stanza.

The fisherman, hawking the surf on this side


of the reef, stands up in his boat
and halloos us: a starfish lies in its pool.
1.And gulls, white sails slanted seaward,
fly into limitless morning before us.

Brathwaite, K. 'South' in A World of Prose. Edited


by Mark McWatt and Hazel Simmonds
McDonald. Pearson Education Ltd, 2005.  

 Stanza 4, line 33: This device gives the reader a visual image of the scene. It is simple image that
highlights the persona's excitement at being home and seeing scenes, even seemingly
inconsequential ones, that he knows and loves.   
 Stanza 5, line 43: This alliteration gives the reader a visual of what the persona sees as pleasant
and calming, as opposed to the alliteration in stanza 2. The sound that the alliteration illicits is a
calm one, implying that the persona is at peace.

2.PERSONIFICATION

 Stanza 1, lines 6-7: This device gives a beautiful impression of the effect that the island had on
the persona. He felt whole when he was there, at peace.
 Stanza 2, lines 16-17: The shadows, in this context, represents his past life and experiences on the
island. The memories of his island illicits feelings of sadness, even homesickness. These
memories cast an oppressive shadow over his life in the north.  

3.SIMILE
The persona compares the flowing of the rivers, which represents the north, to his longing for his island
home. This comparison indicates that his longing is an intense one, he is homesick.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective. The persona is thinking about his island home, as well as places that
he has visited in the north.

TONE
The tone of the poem goes from being reflective, to being elated.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Patriotism, places, desires and dreams
Test Match Sabina Park - Literature Notes

Proudly wearing the 4.rosette of my skin


I 5.strut into Sabina
3.England boycotting excitement bravely,
6.something badly amiss.
The persona, a white male, proudly enters Sabina
Cricket. Not the game they play at Lords, Park to watch a cricket match between England
the crowd - 1.whoever saw a crowd and the West Indies. The persona notices that the
at a cricket match? - are caged game is slow and that the crowd is not reacting
7.vociferous partisans, quick to take offence. well. He is, in fact, initially shocked that there is a
crowd at all because this is usually not the case at
8.England sixty eight for none at lunch. Lords. By lunch, England is sixty eight for none,
1.'What sort o battin dat man? and the crowd gets abusive. They even state that
dem kaaan play cricket again, maybe they should borrow Lawrence Rowe. The
praps dem should-a-borrow 2.Lawrence Rowe!' persona tries to explain the reason behind the slow
pace of the British side, but fails to convince even
And on it goes, 9.the wicket slow himself. His embarrassment at England's
as the batting and the crowd restless. performance has him eventually skulking out of
1.'Eh white bwoy, how you brudders dem the venue.
does sen we sleep so? Me a pay monies
fe watch dis foolishness? Cho!

So I try to explain in my Hampshire drawl LITERARY DEVICES


about conditions in Kent, 1. RHETORICAL QUESTION
about 10.sticky wickets and muggy days
and the monsoon season in Manchester
 Stanza 2, lines 6-7: This question reveals
but fail to convince even myself.
that, despite the fact that cricket is a
popular sport in England, the venues for
The crowd's 11.loud 'busin drives me out
the matches are not crowded. This
12.skulking behind a tarnished rosette
question could also point to the fact that
somewhat frayed now but unable, quite,
Sabina Park was very crowded.
to conceal a 13.blushing nationality. 

Brown, S. 'Test Match Sabina Park' in A World of


Prose. Edited by Mark McWatt and Hazel
Simmonds McDonald. Pearson Education Ltd,
2005.  

 Stanza 3, line 10: This question represents the general frustration of the West Indians in the
crowd. They are annoyed that the cricket match is progressing so slowly.
 Stanza 4, lines 16-18: These questions imply that the West Indian crowd's level of frustration has
escalated. 

2. ALLUSION
The allusion to Lawrence Rowe, a very colourful and successful West Indian cricketer, emphasizes the
fact that the match is slow and boring. 

3. SARCASM
To 'boycott' is to abstain from, or to stop, doing something. Therefore, the persona is being sarcastic
because excitement is a good thing. People usually boycott for something negative, therefore the persona
is, again, highlighting the slow and boring pace of the cricket match.

*There is a distinct CONTRAST between the beginning of the poem when the persona is proud, and
'struts'. However, by the end of the poem, he is embarrassed and 'skulking'

VOICES
There are two distinct voices in this poem. The English man's and the West Indian's.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE 
The mood of the poem is tense.

TONE
The tone of the poem is one of frustration (West Indian) and embarrassment (English man). 

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Discrimination, places, culture and sports
The Woman Speaks to the Man Who Has Employed Her Son

Her son was first known to her


as a sense of unease, 5.a need to cry LITERAL MEANING
for little reasons and a metallic tide The persona in this poem is telling the story of
rising in her mouth each morning. a mother who loved her son. The mother
Such signs made her know became aware of the child's presence when she
that she was not alone in her body. experienced morning sickness. She placed all
She carried him 6.full term her hopes in the child and raised him as a single
7.tight up under her heart. parent because his father was indifferent to the
child's existence. The mother had set no
1.She carried him like the poor  barriers on what the child could become, but is
carry hope, hope you get a break told that he has an employer who values him so
or a visa, hope one child go through much that he is given his own submarine gun.
and remember you. He had no father. The son tells his mother that his employer is
The man she made him with had more like a father  to him, but the mother wonders at
like him, 2.he was fair-minded the father figure who purposefully endangers
he treated all his children  his child. She prepares for her son's death by
with equal and unbiased indifference. going downtown to buy funeral apparel. The
mother feels powerless, so she prays for her
She raised him twice, once as mother child and says protective psalms for him. On
then as father, 8.set no ceiling the other hand, she reads psalms of retribution
on what he could be doctor for the employer and weeps for her son. Her
earth healer, pilot take wings. situation does not look good and is likened to a
But now he tells her is working partner system in which she draws both the first
for you, 3.that you value him so much and the last hand.
you give him one whole submachine gun
for him alone.

He says 1.you are like a father to him


she is wondering what kind of father LITERARY DEVICES
would 4.give a son hot and exploding 1. SIMILE
death, when he asks him for bread.
She went downtown and bought three  Lines 1-2: The persona emphasizes that
and one-third yard of black cloth the mother placed all her hopes in her
and a deep crowned and veiled hat son. When you are poor, generally, you
for the day he draw 9.his bloody salary. have no prospects, you only dream and
hope. Therefore, the persona uses this
She has no power over you and this metaphor to emphasize the mother's
at 10.the level of earth, what she has dependence on her son's success.
are prayers and a mother's tears  Line 17: The employer is being
and at 11.knee city she uses them. compared to a father figure. This
4.She says psalms for him implies that this person fills a gap in
she reads psalms for you the son's life.
she weeps for his soul
her 12.eyewater covers you.

She is throwing a 13.partner


with 4.Judas Iscariot's mother
the thief on the left hand side
of the cross, his mother is the 14.banker, 15.her
draw though
is first and last for she still throwing two hands
as mother and father.
She is prepared, she is done.4.Absalom.

2. SARCASM
The persona appears to praise the child's father by referring to him as 'fair-minded'. She is, however,
chastising him for not only ignoring his son, but all of his other children.
3. IRONY (situational)
The son innocently tells his mother that his employer values him so much that he gave him a whole
submachine gun for himself. The irony in this situation is that if you really care about someone, you do
NOT give them a gun due to the negative results that are bound to occur.  
4. ALLUSION (biblical)

 Lines 28-29: This line alludes to a particular verse in the Christian Bible, Luke 11 vs 11. The
verse questions what the actions of a good father should be. 

 Lines 38-39: Psalms is a particular chapter in the Christian Bible. In this chapter there are verses
for protection, the mother uses those for her son, as well as verses for retribution and rebuking. It
is implied that the mother chooses those for the employer. 
 Lines 43-45: In the Christian Bible, Judas Iscariot betrayed Jesus. Therefore, it does not bode
well for the mother if she is in a 'partnership' with this person's mother because she might also be
betrayed. The banker in the 'partnership' also happens to be the thief on the left hand side of the
cross' mother. This also does not bode well for the mother if the apple does not fall far from the
tree.
 Line 49: Absalom is the son of David, in the Christian Bible. Absalom betrayed his father, which
implies that the mother feels betrayed by her son because she has placed all her hopes in him. 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is reflective. The persona is thinking about a mother's response to her son's life
choices.
TONE The tone of the poem is pragmatic and pessimistic. The persona is telling the tale as it is, with no
positive energy.

THEMATIC CATEGORY
Death, love, survival, desires/ dreams, childhood experiences.
Theme For English B - Literature Notes
The instructor said,

        Go home and write LITERAL MEANING


        a page tonight. The persona's lecturer gave him an assignment
        And let that page come out of you - to write a page that reflects 'him', or his
        Then it will be true. character. The persona wonders if this is a
simple task, and begins to think about his life.
1.I wonder if it's that simple? Things like his age, place of birth, race and
I am twenty-two, colored, born in Winston- place of residence. Based on these musings, he
Salem.  surmises that he is confused due to his youth.
3.I went to school there, then Durham, then He guesses that he is what he feels, sees and
here to this college on the hill above Harlem. hears, which is Harlem, New York. He
I am the only colored student in the class. continues his musing about what he likes, and
The steps from the hill lead down into Harlem, concludes that he likes the same things that
through a park, then I cross St. Nicholas, people of other races like. On this basis, he
Eighth Avenue, Seventh, and I come to the Y, questions whether or not his page will be
the Harlem Branch Y, where I take the elevator influenced by race. He concludes that it will not
up to my room, sit down, and write this page: be white. He admits that his instructor, as well
as the fact that this instructor is white, will have
It's not easy to know what is true for you or me  some influence on his page. He states that they
at twenty-two, my age. But I guess I'm what both influence each other, that is what being
I feel and see and hear, Harlem, 2.I hear you: American is about. He believes that both of
hear you, hear me - we too - you, me, talk on them might not want to influence each other,
this page. but it cannot be helped. He concludes that both
(I hear New York, too.) 1.Me - who? of them will learn from each other, despite the
fact that the instructor has the advantage of
Well, I like to eat, sleep, drink, and be in love. being older, white and 'more free'. All of these
I like to work, read, learn, and understand life. musings and conclusions become his page for
I like a pipe for a Christmas present, English B.
or records - Bessie, bop, or Bach.
I guess being colored doesn't make me not 
like the same things other folks like who are
other races. 
1.So will my page be colored that I write? LITERARY DEVICES
Being me, it will not be white.
4.But it will be 1.RHETORICAL QUESTION
a part of you, instructor.
You are white -  Stanza 2, line 6: The persona ponders
yet a part of me, as I am a part of you. the ease of what he is asked to do. This
That's American. question, in turn, actually highlights the
Sometimes perhaps you don't want to be a part difficult nature of the task.
of me.  Stanza 3, line24: This question
Nor do I often want to be a part of you. highlights the persona's confusion as to
But we are, that's true! who he is, or his character. He is
5.As I learn from you, unsure.
I guess you learn from me -  Stanza 4, line 32: The persona is
although you're older - and white -  wondering whether his race will affect
and somewhat more free. what he writes on the page. This is
despite the fact that he concludes that
race does not hinder people, in general,
This is my page for English B.
liking the same things.

2. REPETITION
This repetition emphasizes the profound impact that Harlem, New York, has had on the personality of the
persona. 

* It is interesting to note that the persona's 'page for English B' becomes a journey of self discovery that
actually does not end. He forms no conclusion as to who he is because his personality is still 'in process' 

MOOD/ ATMOSPHEREThe mood of the poem is reflective.

TONE
The tone of the poem is also reflective.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Racism, places
West Indies, U.S.A - Literature Notes

Cruising at thirty thousand feet above the endless


green 1.the island seems like dice tossed on a LITERAL MEANING
casino's baize, some come up lucky, others not. The persona is travelling in a plane, looking down
Puerto Rico takes the pot, 2.the Dallas of the West at San Juan, Puerto Rico, as the plane descends. He
Indies, 2.silver linings on the clouds as we descend is saying that this island is the wealthiest in the
are hall-marked, 1.San Juan glitters like a Caribbean because it has won the jackpot, it has
maverick's gold ring. come up lucky. He then points out that he, and
                                  All across the Caribbean we'd others, had travelled to many Caribbean islands
collected terminals - 1.airports are like calling and received a hint of the flavour of each island
cards, cultural fingerprints; the hand written signs through it's calling card, - its airport - all of which
at Port-au-Prince, Piarco's sleazy tourist art, the fail when compared to plush San Juan. As they
lethargic contempt of the baggage boys at 'Vere land, they are instructed to stay on the plane if their
Bird' in St. Johns .... destination is not San Juan. The persona takes
And now for 4.plush San Juan. offence and states that America does not want
                                  But the pilot's bland you're blacks in San Juan, implying that they might be a
safe in my hands drawl crackles as we land, 'US disruptive force. He notes the efficiency with
regulations demand all passengers not which things flow, enabling them to take to the
disembarking at San Juan stay on the plane, I skies once more. During the ascent, the persona
repeat, stay on the plane.' 3.Subtle Uncle Sam, notes the contrast between the influences of the
afraid too many 5.desperate blacks might re- Caribbean and America. He likens San-Juan to a
enslave this Island of the free, might jump the broken TV, it Iooks good on the outside, but
barbed broken on the inside.
                                  electric fence around
6.'America's back yard' and claim that vaunted
sanctuary ..... 3. 'give me your poor .....' Through
toughened, tinted glass 7.the contrasts tantalise; LITERARY DEVICES
US patrol cars glide across the shimmering tarmac, 1. SIMILE
containered baggage trucks unload with 8.fierce
efficiency. So soon we're climbing,  
 Line 2: Puerto Rico is compared to dice
                                   low above the pulsing city
that is tossed on a casino's baize, it can
streets; galvanized shanties overseen by
either come up with winning numbers, or
condominiums polished Cadillacs shimmying with
losing numbers. Puerto Rico comes up
pushcarts and as we climb, San-Juan's 9.fools-
with winning numbers in the game of
glitter calls to mind the shattered innards of a TV
chance, as reflected in its wealthy exterior,
set that's fallen off the back of a lorry, all painted
which is supported by America.
valves and circuits 1.the road like twisted wires,
                                    the bright cars, micro-chips.
10.It's sharp and jagged and dangerous, and
belonged to some-one else.

 Lines 7-8: San Juan's glitter is compared to a maverick's gold ring. The word maverick implies
non-conformist, an individualist. This implies that San Juan, Puerto Rico is in the Caribbean, but
not a part of the Caribbean. It belongs to America.
 Lines 10-11: Airports are compared to calling cards. This means that, like a calling card, the
quality of the airport gives you an idea of the island's economic status. The airport is also
compared to a cultural fingerprint. A fingerprint is an individual thing, therefore the airport gives
the traveler an idea of the island's cultural landscape. 

 Line 39: The road is compared to twisted wires. This means that the roads, from above, look both
plentiful and curvy. This does not carry a positive connotation, but implies confusion. 

2. ALLUSION Line 5: Dallas is an oil rich state in America. Therefore, many of its inhabitants are
wealthy, and the state itself, is wealthy. By stating that San Juan is the Dallas of the West Indies, it
implies that it is a wealthy island in the West Indies.

 Lines 5-7: An allusion is being made to the well known cliche; 'every cloud has a silver lining'. It
means that behind everything that is seemingly bad, there is good. In the context of this poem, it
means that the good, the silver lining, has a mark, or stamp, that authenticates its good quality; it
is hallmarked. This implies that it will always have its silver lining showing.

3. SARCASM Line 20: This statement means the exact opposite of what is stated. The persona is
disgusted that Uncle Sam (America) would have such a regulation. This regulation bars anyone from
stepping a toe on Puerto Rican soil, if it is not your intended destination. You just have to remain in the
air craft, no matter the waiting period, until it is time for takeoff. The persona believes that the Americans
are being blatantly discriminatory, and are attempting to camouflage it through the use of regulations. He
does not believe that they have achieved their goal of subtlety. 

 Line 26: The persona implies that America is all talk and no action. They really do not want the
poor because they bar them from entering and expediently sends them on their way when they
enter their airport. The statement is sarcastic because it is loaded with an alternate meaning, due
to the contrast in statement and action.

CONTRAST
The contrast in this poem is found in stanza 5. The American cars etc, against the pushcarts. The
American culture versus the Puerto Rican culture.

MOOD/ ATMOSPHERE
The mood of the poem is sarcastic.

TONE
The tone of the poem is slightly bitter, which is fueled by the sarcastic atmosphere.

THEMATIC CATEGORIZATION
Discrimination, oppression, places, culture.
Ballad of Birmingham - Literature Notes
'Mother dear, may I go downtown
instead of out to play, LITERAL MEANING
1.and march the streets of Birmingham The poem is about about a mother who loses her
in a freedom march today? child. The child made a request to attend a freedom
march through the streets of Birmingham, but the
1.'No, baby, no, you may not go,  mother said no. She feared the many violent things
for the dogs are fierce and wild,  that could befall her child in this setting. She,
and clubs and hoses, guns and jails however, agreed that the child could attend church.
ain't good for a little child.' She was content with the knowledge that her child
was safely at church, until an explosion saw her
'But mother, I won't be alone. racing through the streets of Birmingham to find her
Other children will go with me, child. She did not find her, but instead, found a foot
1.and march the streets of Birmingham of shoe in the rubble.
to make our country free.'
LITERARY DEVICES
1.'No baby, no, you may not go, 1. REPETITION
for I fear those guns will fire.
But you may go to church instead,   The purpose of the child's repetition of
and sing in the children's choir.' where she wants to go and why, is to
contextualize the poem. The reader is made
She has combed and brushed 2. her night dark hair, aware that the poem is set in Birmingham
and 2. bathed rose petal sweet, during the civil rights movement. The
and drawn white gloves on her small brown  hands, repetition is for emphasis of this fact. 
and white shoes on her feet.  The mothers repetition of no, highlights her
fear of the harmful things that could happen
The mother smiled to know her child to her child. Note that after each no, she
was in the sacred place, lists possible harmful things that could
but that smile was the last smile occur if the child goes on the freedom
to come upon her face. march.
For when she heard the explosion, 
2. METAPHOR
her eyes grew 4.wet and wild.
She 5.raced through the streets of Birmingham
calling for her child.  The comparison of the darkness of the
child's hair to night is purely to emphasize
She 6. clawed through bits of glass and brick, how black the persona's daughters hair is.
then lifted out a shoe.  The comparison of her sweet  smell, after
'O, here's the shoe my baby wore, her bath, emphasizes the care that went into
but, baby, where are you? preparing the child for church. She did not
send her child out into the world with an
uncaring touch.

3. IRONY (situational)
The overwhelming irony that exists in this poem is the fact that the mother was so adamant about NOT
sending her child to the freedom march, because she considered it to be so dangerous. Yet it is while in
church, the place that she thought was sacred and safe, that the child got killed.  
THEME
Death is the overwhelming theme in this poem. A mother's over protectiveness does not, and seemingly
cannot, prevent this tragic event from occurring.  

The Lynching - Literature Notes


LITERAL MEANING
The poem is about a black male who has been
His spirit in smoke ascended to high heaven. lynched. The morning brings with it spectators that
1.His father, by the cruellest way of  pain,  have come to see the body. These are women and
Had bidden him to his bosom once again; children who show no remorse for the scene before
The 3.awful sin remained still unforgiven. them.
1.All night a bright and solitary star
(Perchance the one that ever guided him, LITERARY DEVICES
Yet gave him up at last to Fate's wild whim) 1. ALLUSION
Hung pitifully o'er the swinging 4.char.
Day dawned, and soon the 5.mixed crowds came to
 This alludes to the death of the individual,
view
presumably a Black person, who is now in
The 6.ghastly body swaying in the sun:
heaven. This seen in the reference to being
The women thronged to look, but never a one
bidden, or called, to his father's 'bosom'.
2.Showed sorrow in her eyes of 7.steely blue;
 This star alludes to the one that guided the
And little lads, lynchers that were to be,
three wise men to baby Jesus. In this
Danced round the dreadful thing in 8.fiendish glee.
context, it highlights that this star has,
possibly, provided illumination in the night
Claude McKay, A World of Poetry (2005)
for the victim of the lynching, but also
served to lead others to him as well.  

2. ALLITERATION / METAPHOR

 The alliteration serves the purpose of drawing the readers' eye to this particular passage in the
poem. This line also doubles as a metaphor. In this case, the metaphor tells the reader that the
woman is white, because blue eyes are a feature of the Caucasian race. It also highlights the level
of racism in the society. This is the case because if women, who are suppose to be nurturing and
caring, show steel (unfeeling, clinical) in their eyes, then it is an echo of the views of the society. 

THEME
Racism
The poem confronts a time in history when Black people were not viewed as human. On this premise,
they could be lynched without it causing a ripple in the moral fiber of their society. The fact that women
and children could view the charred remains with little or no feeling speaks volumes about the extent to
which racist values were entrenched in the society.

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