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Vol. 14, No. 2, April 2009, 209219
research, an active creation of new knowledge, and then comes the writing, a
relatively passive assembling of what has already been achieved. It is as if
researching and writing were two entirely separate processes. Alternatively we
may choose to conceive of academic writing as a set process which overlaps
considerably with researching itself and, indeed, which may contribute dynami-
cally to knowledge making. This article outlines some of the ways in which we
may re-conceptualize academic writing as a more dynamic set of activities and
practices. This includes a consideration of, for example, academic writing as
constructing, deconstructing and reconstructing knowledge, connecting, discon-
necting and reconnecting concepts, describing and re-describing our views of the
world, as well as shaping, mis-shaping and reshaping ideas.
Keywords: academic writing; writing up; knowledge making; shaping and
reshaping ideas
My aim in this article is to examine academic writing the writing of articles, books,
chapters, conference presentations, monographs, reviews, and so on not as a
passive procedure of ‘writing-up’ but instead as a more active set of activities and
approaches. This set includes de-constructing and re-constructing, dis-connecting
and re-connecting, as well as shaping and re-shaping. I see all these activities and
approaches as useful metaphors for academic reading and academic writing,
metaphors which are fruitful ways for characterizing what we do as academics,
when we try to answer research questions or pursue scholarly inquiries.
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210 G. Badley
Writing-up as an add-on
Researchers sometimes give the impression that first of all is the research and then
comes the writing-up. Indeed, in the standard model of qualitative research, writing-
up consists of stating the results of the research and the evidence on which they are
based, and demonstrating the adequacy of the evidence by agreed criteria (see Woods
1999, 5). Writing-up thus appears to be altogether separate from the research process
itself. In this standard account, research results, evidence, and criteria almost acquire
a stand-alone quality. Writing-up seems to be entirely unconnected with the person
who did the data collection, checked the evidence, selected the criteria and set out the
results. In this way, both research and writing-up are presented as almost
disconnected processes.
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We should admit or better celebrate that as writers we are our own chief,
creative research instruments. We are the ones who do the data collecting, data
constructing, observing, seeing, focusing, choosing, who pick the words and form the
sentences which we hope will convince others that we have something useful to say
about important issues and problems. We decide what research questions we will try
to answer. We try to put those questions in words which, we think, make them clear
and accessible. We write down as clearly and succinctly as possible what we think we
see and what we think we understand.
We recognize that all of this is a struggle. We know or soon realize that where to
begin our writing is difficult. Indeed all writing our beginnings, our middles, our
endings, our structurings, our attempts to be as clear, direct and simple as our subject
allows is problematical. All we can do, whether we are writing research papers or
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short stories, is to approach the business of writing as a creative craft and to make
our work as good as we possibly can (see Lodge 1996, 172).
My argument here is that writing about and in our research is best not described
as writing-up. Writing, even in the often arid zones of educational research, is a
matter of constructing, creating, and making. Writers about research are actual
makers of research products: articles, books, conference papers, dissertations,
reports, and theses. We try to find the words which we judge best fit the situations
and issues we are trying to describe, interpret, and analyze. All of this shows us as
researchers and writers who look at aspects of the world and try to note down what
we think we understand about it. We write, we create, we make, we fabricate.
And we needn’t apologize for our writings, our creations, our makings, our
fabrications, because they do not or cannot meet the impossible standards of absolute
objectivity. All we can claim as creators and fabricators is a kind of ‘rigorous
subjectivity’ (see Wolcott 1994, 354) or, preferably, ‘rigorous inter-subjectivity’.
Whether, in the UK, assessors in the Research Assessment Exercise (RAE) would
accept such contentious notions as fitting in with their requirement for ‘rigour’ in
academic research is another matter (see RAE 2006). My view of the RAE is that it is
an anti-carnival which promotes conformity and fails to celebrate the richness and
variety of academic writing, research, and scholarship (see Badley 2007).
do we mean that our account is a ‘write-up’ in praise of our own work as opposed to
a ‘write-down’ where we disparage some other, clearly inferior, account? Finally,
I prefer to see academic or research writing as a constructive and creative process of
learning or transforming what we know, whereas ‘writing-up’ sounds more like an
unconstructive and uncreative claim to be stating what we already know.
writing honestly and truthfully. Instead by de-constructing I mean to read the texts
of others in a spirit of critical appraisal. My approach is to decide, from my own
point of view and through my own critical lens and from my own stance, what
I judge, interpret, to be good for me, and possibly for others, in what I read. My
version of de-constructing is one of examining a variety of texts to see whether I can
see something good or useful there for my particular academic purposes. This is
clearly a critical and interpretative and persuasive process rather than an attempt to
prove that my reading of a text is the right one or the true one.
Deconstruction is, as Derrida has said, ‘affirmative in a way that is not simply
positive that is, it is not simply conservative’ (Derrida 1994a). I believe that when
we read other texts, we do so not in order to reproduce them exactly but in order to
examine them for ideas which mean something for our own particular purposes. This
is especially the case with academic reading, where we are examining a topic or
question which interests us and for which we want to provide at least some kind of
response. We are, I think, reading texts to decide if we can see in them things
concepts, ideas, suggestions, values which may be good for us as, say, teachers or
researchers. Whether our reading, our de-constructing of a particular text, opens up
something new or original would be a bonus. Whether it produces something true is,
further, a matter for the consensus of our peers.
Derrida suggests, indeed, that deconstruction creates a tension between a
conservative fidelity to existing texts and the radical possibility of something new,
some new insight or interpretation as a result of our particular reading of a text. An
interdisciplinary approach may be especially helpful here where readers/researchers
could be encouraged to cross borders, establish new themes and make new
connections between ideas (based on Derrida 1994a). Derrida agrees that decon-
struction is characterized by a possible tension between a deliberate disruption of
existing texts and a tendency to be, perhaps, (over) attentive toward them. He insists,
however, that deconstruction is, despite this tension, a respectful process. It is, for
him if not for some of his followers, a matter of ‘trying to read and understand’ the
texts he examines. Indeed, where, in his case, the great texts of Plato and Aristotle are
concerned, he feels we have to read them again and again in order to learn more from
them (Derrida 1994b). This is not a matter of ‘commending or repeating or
conserving’ them but rather ‘an analysis which tries to find out how their thinking
works or doesn’t work, (an analysis) of the tensions, the contradictions, the
heterogeneity within their own corpus, as well as the law of this self-deconstruction’
(Derrida 1994b). De-constructing such texts is not applying an alien tool or method
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to them. Instead it is analyzing, out of respect, how they function internally (Derrida
1994b).
Another way of putting this is to suggest that reading important texts for research
and scholarly purposes is de-constructing them in order to work out how their authors
have actually made them, fabricated them, that is constructed them. ‘Making’ and
‘fabricating’ are especially honorable metaphors for the creative process of writing.
De-constructing a text is trying to tease out, for own critical appreciation and
understanding, how a writer as maker or fabricator has gone about constructing and
shaping that text. Significantly, an archaic meaning of ‘maker’ is that of poet, someone
who especially deals in metaphors and other images in order to illuminate and
communicate an understanding of some aspect of the world. Similarly, ‘fabricator’
derives from ‘faber,’ a skilled worker originally in metal, but later in textile fibers.
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re-evaluate and re-interpret our new texts in order to put forward our own
understandings of educational issues and topics. I would further suggest that our
deconstructive reading of ‘other writing as writing’ (Said 1975, 20) is not just
affirmative but is also energizing and enlivening as we ‘write over’, ‘rewrite’, ‘write
about’, and ‘write to other writing’. Indeed, Said suggests that such a view of writing,
‘writing against writing,’ may sound like antithetical criticism but should also be seen
as constructive (that is, affirmative). His summary of writing as ‘a ceaselessly
changing triangle of encipherment, decipherment, and dissemination’ is similar to
my view of academic writing as deconstruction, construction, and reconstruction
(Said 1975, 201). It also resonates with Derrida’s view of deconstruction as the
decipherment of (Joycean) encipherment. Writing is the act of taking hold of
language in order to do something to act and not just to repeat ideas verbatim
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(Said 1975, 3778). Said calls this taking hold of language an active, even aggressive,
sense of writing in which we may ‘write in and as an act of discovery rather than out
of respectful obedience to established ‘‘truth’’’ (Said 1975, 379). Writing is a
beginning to the production of knowledge (see also Winter and Badley 2007, 2689).
This approach to the complexity of writing also takes us a long way from the
banalities of ‘writing-up’.
between the texts we read and the writing we produce in order to answer the problems
we are examining. Our writing then becomes a form of learning by doing, learning by
trying, learning by experimenting, in order to set down, what we think we know and
understand by the questions posed. Such writing helps us to construct or make or
fabricate ‘the connections of things’. Each piece of writing becomes a reflective and re-
constructive essay, an attempt, a try, to set down a plausible answer to a specific
problem. We may even manage to persuade others that our essay is an authentic
attempt to write something useful about the topic under discussion. This is my
reading, my deconstruction, of Dewey’s account of learning from experience:
To learn from experience is to make backward and forward connections between what
we do to things and what we enjoy or suffer from things in consequence. Under such
conditions, doing becomes trying, an experiment with the world to find out what it is
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like; the undergoing becomes instructions the discovery of the connections of things.
(Dewey 1916, 140)
engage with the texts of others. Indeed, we might hope that such writing spaces
become new arenas in which ‘writing itself can take on new forms and so inject new
light on dusty areas of academic life’ (Barnett 2005, 3). But does the university ‘in
ruins’ (Readings 1996) currently provide such free and open writing spaces and new
arenas for critical, yet affirmative, appraisal?
The evidence offered by the UK current RAE is that our writing spaces
are severely restricted. Instead of offering us opportunities for Derridean life
affirmation, for a resounding Joycean ‘yes,’ the RAE presents academic writers with
an anti-carnival. It is:
a collusive assessment of the usual ideas and the usual players. Unlike most carnivals it
fails to celebrate. It merely confirms the state of the lack of the art. It conforms to what
the system and its funders want. It commodifies and reifies what should, instead, be
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interesting and useful accounts of what the academic players have been up to over the
past few years . . .Ours is an anti-carnival which rewards the few and insults the many in
the interests of performativity, the surveillance state and the managerial university.
(Badley 2007)
In order to encourage new writing and new research in higher education, we need to
re-shape the RAE too. Perhaps, we should re-shape it into:
an academic festival which appraises but mainly praises the work of us all. Yes there
should be criteria even originality, significance and rigour but these should be
extended to embrace accessibility, clarity, readability and simplicity too. The aim of this
great academic festival should be to show what we are all getting up to, the good work
we do critiquing, discussing, thinking about and researching all aspects of the worlds we
inhabit. Sure the big prizes will and inevitably must go to those who need big money to
do their research the scientists, the engineers and the medical researchers particularly.
But research prizes should not stop with research products which directly serve the
military-industrial complex and the global economy. We need to preserve and develop
our civilisation by encouraging and rewarding the arts, the humanities and the social
sciences too. Even education. Even, for the world’s sake, geography and history and
philosophy. (Badley 2007)
Barnett argues that we need ‘scholarly space’ in order to pursue our research
interests and ‘intellectual and discursive space’ in order to make our contributions to
wider social debate rather than to be constrained by the distorting and performative
restrictions of the RAE (Barnett 2005, 78). Undistorted discursive, intellectual,
scholarly and writing spaces will only be created in higher education when students
and staff are encouraged to experiment with the ‘new forms’ of writing that Barnett
calls for. Examples of such forms new shapings for academic writing include the
kaleidoscope texts discussed by Nolan (2005) and the patchwork texts pioneered by
Richard Winter and referred to by Parker (2005).
The continuous re-shaping of academic writing facilitated by kaleidoscope texts
allows us to see ‘the complex nature of knowledge in process’ so that writing ‘portrays
researching and learning as contextual, learner-centred, negotiated, discursive, and
reflexive’ (Nolan 2005, 135). Academic writing shaped and continuously re-shaped
into kaleidoscope texts enables us to address and challenge ‘the problematic nature of
academic discourse in its rigid compliance with certain norms and traditions for what
counts as research and as knowledge’ (Nolan 2005, 132). This would move us away
from reading texts as linear and tidy narratives which fail to ‘fully challenge us to make
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our own connections within multiple layers of meaning’ and remind us that ‘research is
often messy, ambiguous and even twisted at times’ (Nolan 2005, 128, my italics).
There is some hope that new forms and shapes of academic writing, even in the
hard sciences, are helping students deepen their engagement with their discipline.
This approach rejects the traditional notion of scientists first doing their research
and then ‘writing-up’ their results. Instead, students are encouraged to develop their
understanding of and thinking about science through as well as in writing, and
to move away from article and essay writing and the writing-up of lab reports toward
more experimental writing (see Parker 2005, 160). Somewhat ambivalently, Parker
also reports that experiments with patchwork texts in the UK have ‘struggled
successfully’ to be acknowledged as disciplinary writing. Such ‘alternative’ writing is
often viewed as ‘developmental, therapeutic, self-expressive, and creative rather than
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academic’ (Parker 2005, 1623, n5). The disciplinary gatekeepers, especially in such
sterile exercises as the RAE, seem charged to exclude any writing which might just be
regarded as therapeutic and creative. Developmental and self-expressive writing
might even contaminate the pure languages of their disciplines.
Richard Rorty mocks those who regard their disciplinary languages in these
purist terms. For example, he singles out macho philosophers who solemnly tell us
that they seek the truth, an accurate representation of the way the world is, in writing
which is clear, manly, precise, straightforward and transparent and which abjures all
‘literary’ devices (Rorty 1991, 86). Instead, he proposes a blurring of the distinctions
we academics make between disciplines in favor of the idea of ‘a seamless,
undifferentiated ‘‘general text’’’ (Rorty 1991, 867), a proposal which would hardly
be welcomed by those who, self-deceptively, ‘magnify the importance of an academic
speciality’ (Rorty 1991, 87). Few academic philosophers would, like Rorty, describe
their own writing as bricolage and urge us not to underestimate ‘the utility of merely
therapeutic, merely ‘‘deconstructive’’ writing’ (Rorty 1991, 6). The new forms of
academic writing should encourage a creative re-shaping of all existing genres as well
as an enthusiastic admission of new shapings, such as bricolage, the kaleidoscope text
and the patchwork text, into one general, undifferentiated, academic text.
Second: this text was written without my knowing exactly beforehand which
words I would use and which de-constructions, dis-connections, constructions and
connections, re-constructions and re-connections I would make. Isn’t all writing like
this? ‘I, of course, have opened my mouth without knowing what words to bring
forth, what beliefs to proclaim or validate, what human condition to hold under my
tiny microscope. It’s frightening. And yet it’s what everybody does learning how
you stand by hearing yourself talk (Locution, locution, locution)’ (Ford 1995, 182).
We learn where we stand by re-constructing and re-connecting the words as we write
them: our slogan as academic writers could well be ‘locution, locution, locution.’
Third: ‘Writers . . . understand that almost everything e-v-e-r-y-t-h-i-n-g is not
really made of ‘‘views’’ but words, which, should you not like them, you can change’
(Ford 1995, 248). As verbivores (and some of us are also verbibores) we live on words,
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words which we can change as we wish as we write and re-write, as we shape and re-
shape our limited knowing and understanding of where we currently are.
Fourth: ‘Martin Amis wrote that as readers we always have a ‘‘conversation’’
(possibly even an argument) with any piece of literary fiction’ (Ford 2007, 6).
‘Conversation’ and ‘argument’ as well as ‘negotiation’ are also processes we engage in
when we read, de-construct, dis-connect, and contest academic texts in preparation
for making the connections which help us to construct our own soon-to-be-contested
fabrications.
Fifth: any piece of writing, even the minor fabrications we academic constructors
and makers come up with, contributes to what Rorty calls ‘humanity’s ongoing
conversation about what to do with itself’ (Rorty 2007, ix). Just as he urges
philosophers to choose sides in debates about cultural and social change we, as
academics, should ask ourselves whether our modest contributions to this conversa-
tion, our humble texts, will ‘make any difference to social hopes, programs of action,
prophecies of a better future’ (Rorty 2007, x). I have described academic writers as
dis-connectors and re-connectors in their attempts to make useful texts. I would not
describe academics as dis-interested pursuers of truth. Like Rorty, I want us to be so
interested in democracy, freedom, justice, tolerance that we take sides by shaping
our academic writing and our socio-political actions in favor of justice and against
oppression.
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