Colegio El Jazmín IED

Humanities:
English
Teacher´s name: Nicolas Esteban Gómez - Universidad Distrital

Guide 1 OBSERVATIONS and grades

To collaborate is an important skill for life, but be sure that you are working
together to share what you understood and learn together, if you are not sure
about a topic, you may be giving wrong information to your friends.
Hope you the best

Grade 801
 Johan Lobo: 4.8
Is a very well organized work.
To keep in mind: A little bit of salt, or some salt is better to write “little
salt”, also as it is hard to pronounce two vowels together we write “an egg”.
5 minutes and a half

 Andrés Cediel: 4.0

I appreciate the effort you put in the video, but YouTube can deactivate the
videos if you used music without copyrights for a “commercial” video, next time
upload your video in another category; we can´t watch the video.
You used friend instead of fried, take care of the difference between those 2
words.
You can use “serve them on ” instead of sirvelas.
 Laura Nataly Fernandez: 5
You can use the verb mix instead of ” beat “ so the meaning is more accurate.
I like a lot how you used certain words in your description about the dish.
Very well done.

 Juan Sebastian Barbosa: 5

The pizza was not an easy recipe, so the effort to describe it was very good, I
like this description and the steps organized to do it.
 Nicolas Erazo: 4.5
Good exercise, you can use “there are x ingredients” to be more precise when
you describe.
 Junior Polo: 3
Good description of the recipe, one of your classmates has very similar words
to describe this recipe, I hope you both were working to learn together.
I think you had a mistake when you wrote “ could “.
 Nicolas Aguirre: 3,5
Good recipe, you forgot to write the process to prepare it, it was key.
Good answers in your second point.
 Sofía Valderrama. 4
Good recipe, nice effort, the recipe is very interesting, you had some words to
practice as “then” you are using “the” so you forgot the n , also you can use
warm instead of “tibiar” for this context, very well done.
 Johan Lozada: 4
Is a good recipe, you can put “ an arepa” because when a word begins with
(a,e,I,o,u) we use “an” before to speak about that word.
 Daniel Felipe Segura: 3,8
Good recipe, you can make it better if you write “ an hour and a half”
,also you can use “ 5 ingredients are used “ or “the recipe requires 5
ingredients”.
 Luisa León: 4,5
The stew and beans seems a very tasty food, take into account you can use
“teaspoon salt”

 Federico Franco: 4
You can use Some salt without “of” , also a “little bit of rice”.
Good job, tasty food, keep on working.
 Kevin Urrea: 4,5
You can simplify writing “ we mix” then to write the “to mix the mixture” is not
required.
Good job.
 Daniel Trinidad: 3
Some words are not complete as “buter”.
You wrote some ingredients in Spanish and the text was short in general.
Keep on working, good effort.

 Alejandra Ortiz: 4
 Very good, you can start the instructions of your recipe with” what we have to
do “
Try to negate with “there are not fruits , there is not salt” etc according to
the ingredients we have not.
 Angela Acevedo: 4
Nice work, you can change “invest the spaghetti” , invest is like an inversion,
You can also avoid using “already”, most of the times that word was not
necessary
 Daniel Felipe Ceballos: 5
Very well done, you can use “formed” instead of structured in the case of the
hamburger, you can also use other connectors to avoid the continuous use of
“then” as “and” or “later”.

 Luis Quiñones: 4,5

Nice and very healthy food, try to say “ between 10 and 15 minutes” so is more
clear, also you can make more complete answers instead of just “ no” etc.
Good job.
 Julian Cordoba : 4,5
You can write “some butter”, or “a little bit of butter “ to make the sentence
more precise , good job.
 Andrey Velazquez: 4
Interesting recipe, try to reinforce your answers, as for example: “
There are 6 ingredients in the recipe”.
 Dhilan Palencia: 4,5
Good recipe, try to write clearly because some words are hard to read.
 Maria Isabel Luengo: 5
Good recipe, good to see the order and notes.
I think when you wrote “brown” you meant “
 Grade 802

 Melany Cespedes: 4.5

Good recipe, well done.
take care of the verb “are” you don’t need to add the s, also you must write “an
avocado”, in this case is very hard to pronounce “a avocado” that is why always
when we see a word that begins with vowel (a.e.i.o.u) we use “an” instead of “a”.
Also remember we put ”in” a boil something.
 Edward Beltran: 3.5
Is a nice recipe, good effort, you forgot to put the name and to mark the
words in the “soup”
Use “some salt” and take care when you write maybe you put “friend” instead of
“fried “.
 Eylin Diaz : 3.5
I like this recipe a lot, you need to use “per” instead of “por” , also take care
when you write there few similar small mistakes , you must write “fifteen”, “5
minutes and a half “.
We use “there are “ for more than 1 product or object, as there are no fruits in
the recipe. Well done .
 Milton Zambrano:4
You forgot to answer some question, very interesting recipe, also fish has good
elements to help our brain health.

 Dominick Loaiza: 4
It is a good exercise, you can also say “at to the mixture”,
“For this dish we use” is better in this context,
You can also simplify using , I put some salt in the spaghetti.
I like spaghetti a lot, good recipe.
 Valentina Molano:4
Interesting recipe.
 You can write “milk cream”, also in the question b)” there are different
ingredients “ may be more precise.
 Santiago Vargas: 3
The recipe is good, you had the same recipe than one of your friends, I hope
both have developed the exercise together and have learned new words.
 Michael Gonzalez:4
You had good presentation of your work, try to use “little bit” is more precise.
 Alejandra Anzola: 4
Good and simple recipe, you can use “ the first step is “ to make it a more
complete sentence, also you must answer saying “yes, there are x ingredients or
fruits” because the word “if” means “si” but in an imaginary or unknown
situation, for example, “si yo estuviera en el bus “ “if I were in the bus“.
Well done.

 Abraham Marcano : 3
Some of your classmates had exactly the same description of this recipe.

 Alisson Moreno Tellez: 4,5

Good job, good recipe and answers, you can replace “ brings” for “you can put
more ingredients”

 Engels Contreras: 4
Good recipe, there are few words that should have some misspelling so I can
understand them; you can use “butter dressing” instead of “due” some words
are not correctly translated by the apps.
“for this dish we use” is more appropriate to answer,
Also you can use “there are not fruits but there are vegetables”.
Good job , keep on working you are improving.
 Juan Manuel Angulo: 4,5
Very nice recipe, there are few words that are not clear, but it is a good job.

 Cleimar Adriana: 4,5

Good job, you must answer saying “yes, there are x ingredients or fruits”
because the word “if” means “si” but in an imaginary or unknown situation, for
example, “si yo estuviera en el bus “ “if I were in the bus“. But for affirmative
sentences yes is required.
Well done.
 Juan José Zuluaga: 4
Nice recipe and presentation, you can emphasize more the answers.
 Dayanna cubillos: 4
The recipe is very interesting, you can try to use other verbs instead of “made”
As for example we add milk, then we mix the ingredients , etc , because “made “
means “hecho” as in “made in china”.
In your answer you can use “ there is a fruit” because when is only 1 fruit you
use “is”, when you have more than 1 object you can put “are”.
Very well done.

 Luisa Gonzalez : 5
Very good structure to answer, I saw the recipe is very tasty, keep on working .
 Alisson Medina; 5
Great drawing, nice recipe.
In the sentence “while the chicken and the meal are cooking “cooking is an
action that the subject is doing (the meal and the chicken can’t cook), try
writing “while the chicken and meal are being coked “