Blue Cards for VRA Project Paragraph 2

Main Idea Write a topic sentence that introduces the topic of the
paragraph. (Your own words). Include another element of the
evidence + the overall focus of the thesis.
Lynzy Lab’s performance on the Jimmy Kimmel show, shows many different elements
that add to the overall meaning of the song.

Insert examples that support the topic sentence. (Described,

Evidence quoted, summarized, or paraphrased from the primary source)

Throughout her performance, Lab’s has other women come onto stage to sing with
her. The women range from old to young, have different body shapes, and come from
different racial and cultural backgrounds.

Analyze each example. How does each prove the overall focus of
Analysis the topic sentence and the thesis? (Your own words)
This aspect of her performance shows that all women no matter their age, size, or
background experience modern sexism, but by standing up and working together, they
can fight it and help bring light to the hardships women go through due to modern
sexism.