Writing an Introduction Paragraph
In an essay or similar written work, your paper will start with an introduction paragraph.
An introduction paragraph gives the reader an idea of what your essay will be about.
The introduction paragraph should include all of the 3 parts below:
1. Hook
2. Thesis
3. Line of development
Step 1 - Writing a Hook
A hook is a line that captures your reader’s attention on the topic you’re writing about. A few
ways you can capture his/her attention is by either writing: an interesting fact, a surprising
statistic, or a rhetorical question. Take a look at the examples below.
● Thinking critically can require breaking the rules and being creative.
● On an average day, a family spends almost an hour arguing.
● Is it important for us to learn how to think more critically?
You might agree or disagree with how attention-grabbing these lines are, but a hook is merely
trying to capture attention. It does not need to be perfect, but the best way you can phrase your
hook is by thinking about what you’ve noticed that really grabs your instructor’s attention. Does
he/she prefer avoiding rhetorical questions? Will mentioning a statistic mean you have to do
extra citation?
Step 2 - Writing a Thesis (see further below)
Step 3 - Writing a Line of Development
The last part of your introduction paragraph should be about what your body paragraph(s) will
be about. You’re going to show the subtopics under your main topics by listing them out in a
well-written sentence.
Example: In this essay, I will prove that thinking critically is an everyday necessity since
arguments happen often; conflict can be resolved through logic; and critical thinking can
help prove one’s logic.
by Maria Asuncion