Review Essay Rough Draft

by Ella Kerlin

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Remember the
criteria you
decided on and
spell out
include them in the
numbers under
thesis. This essay
10
reads like a report
on the Astros.

air conditioning - spell

out
has
 severe

These need to be in alpha order

Review Essay Rough Draft
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

70
Instructor

/100
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Text Comment. Remember the criteria you decided on and include them in the thesis. This
essay reads like a report on the Astros.

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QM POQ
Punctuation outside quotation:
Student writers often hesitate to add or subtract material within quotations taken from other sources.
While the accuracy of your quotation is extremely important, not making changes within quotations
can sometimes cause your writing to become awkward or incorrect. In American usage, all of your
periods and commas that occur immediately after a quotation from another source should be placed
within your quotation marks. Other punctuation marks (such as question marks, exclamation points,
semicolons and colons) do not obey this rule and stand outside the quotation marks.

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