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Research Essay Final
Research Essay Final
Stephen Gerstner
Professor Reynolds
English 1201-519
1 November 2020
November is a stressful month for high school seniors. Besides the normal hustle of
school life, sports, and other extracurricular activities, the largest thing on many seniors’
minds are college applications. Where should they apply to? What should they write their
essay on? When is the application due? Many high schools pressure students to continue their
education by going to colleges and universities. Fast forward a few months, and many of these
students will be rejected from the colleges that they applied to. If the student is accepted,
greater challenges lie ahead with student loan debt and difficult classes. For some of these
students, the stress becomes too great and they decide to drop out of college entirely. Is all
that stress worth it? Today more than forty percent of undergraduate college students decide
to drop out (Bustamante). Colleges across the nation are struggling to find out what they are
doing wrong and why so many college students are dropping out. However, it is not the
college’s fault, but rather it is the fault of all the high schools. High schools are contributing to
the alarming college drop out rate because they leave students unprepared for the academic
challenges of college. High school students are also unprepared for the money management skills
Early in the twentieth century, many high schools were having the same problems that
colleges are now having today. In the 1940s, there were as many high school dropouts as there
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are now college dropouts (Bustamante). High schools continue to pressure students more and
more to go to a college, despite some not being prepared to do so. Although there might be a
staggering number of college dropouts, the number of college graduates has significantly
increased over the past century and the college retention rates of students has gone up slowly
over the past decade (Henderson). Many college officials are still concerned about these high
numbers of dropouts and are looking for various solutions to solve this problem. As these
One of the primary reasons that students decide to dropout of college is the staggering
cost of college. However, this is not the fault of the colleges. Most colleges are upfront about
their costs of tuition and clearly show their fees. While the high schools ignore this and
choose not to tell students about this information. Some students may not anticipate having so
much student loan debt and by their second or third year of college decide to dropout due to
the exponential growth of the costs. If high schools were to warn students about the financial
challenges of college, then the number of students going to college would drop and therefore
the number of students dropping out would also reduce. Also, high schools do not present the
many alternative options to college and often pressure student into going to straight into
college. “In my own case, I was a very poor student in high school (both in terms of grades
and in terms of economic status). Yet my high school counselor and multiple teachers urged
me to attend community college” (Henderson). If high schools would present more post-
graduation options to students, then the college dropout rates would decrease.
To add to this problem, many of these students lack the understanding of basic money
management skills. This leads to students spending for pleasure rather than saving for
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education. Most high schools do not teach these critical money management classes because
Fig. 1. This shows the states in the United States of America that require
high school students to take a personal finance course in order to graduate
(Next Gen Personal Finance).
There are only 5 states in the U.S that require high school students to take a personal finance
course in order to graduate. Students that take these classes have a much better chance of success
in college due to their understanding of how to spend and save their money. If high schools
taught these basic money management classes, more students would start saving for college
Another correlation that researchers found was if students received scholarships, they
were more likely to stay in college. In a research study at East Carolina University, researchers
discovered that scholarships play a major role in whether a student dropped out of college.
These students did not feel as much economic pressure when it came to the cost of tuition
because they were receiving scholarships. Also, many students want to get their “money’s
worth” and will stick it out because they received these scholarships. The problem once again
lands on the high schools who do not show their students the scholarships that are available to
them. There are hundreds of scholarships that are awarded from institutions or companies that
are not the colleges themselves. However, high schools do not tell their students about these
scholarships and the opportunity is wasted. Poorer students are unprepared for the tuition cost of
Another major reason that students decide to dropout of college is that they are
unsuccessful in the classroom. While some students may succeed in high school, the academic
demands of college present a whole new challenge. Many students find that they are
underprepared for college courses, “studies have shown that a whopping 60% of American
students are actually not ready for college courses” (CollegeStats.org). When theses students
start to fail in their classes, they lack the motivation to keep up or study harder and they end
up dropping out. As a result, “the overall retention rate for first-time, full-time degree-seeking
undergraduate students who enrolled in fall 2017 was 62%” (National Center for Education
Statistics). Many high school students are simply not challenged in their classes and do not
experience any adversity during their time in high school. These students then experience a
rude awakening when they take their first college class and struggle to perform well. These
students are much more likely to dropout during their first year of college due to poor
The figure below demonstrates that the lower the student’s GPA is, the more likely
they are to drop out of college. Many high school students experience inflated GPAs because
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of having weighted classes. However, in college there are no weighted classes and students do
not have the same inflated GPA that they had previously.
Fig. 2. This bar graph shows the graduation rate of students based on their
first-year GPA in college (Tyson).
Many of these students who decide to dropout due to academic failure, may have no
experiences of any academic challenges in high school. Many high schools have begun to
over-inflate student’s GPAs in order to attract colleges but, leave students are unprepared for
the academic rigor of college. Jaleesa Bustamante pointed out that “As many as 25% of
students who take standardized tests for college readiness end up being directed to remedial
college courses.” These remedial courses are designed to help students who are struggling in
subject areas like math and English. If these high school students who are going to college
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struggle with basic English skills, how are they going to be successful in college? College is
more than just reciting from prior learning and students are asked to think outside of the box.
Many high school students do not understand this. For some students, college is a harsh
reality check after their high school held their hand for so long, which is why so many decide
to dropout.
Another major problem of high schools is the lack of substance abuse prevention,
either drug or alcohol. Whether it is education about substance abuse or the simple prevention
of it in the schools themselves, high schools’ ignorance contributes to problems for college
students who struggle with substance abuse. Many of these high school students continue their
bad habits with drugs and alcohol in college. “Substance use during high school predicted a
greater likelihood of never attending (for cigarettes, illegal drugs), of graduating from a 2-
year rather than a 4-year school (for cigarettes), and of dropping out versus graduating from a
4-year school (for cigarettes, marijuana, and other illegal drugs).” (Patrick, Megan E., et al, 1)
This leads to less time in class, getting into trouble with the law, possible expulsion, or the
student drops out. These students dropping out not only hurts those students, but the academic
institution and society. “Students who leave school without a degree suffer negative effects of
slimmer career prospects and lost time and money, institutions suffer from lower graduation
rates and lost tuition dollars, and society also bears the burdens of unemployed or
unemployable young people and a less educated workforce.” (Patrick, Megan E., et al, 2).
Once again, high schools are the ones to blame. High schools simply are not doing enough
when it comes to substance abuse prevention and this leads to students struggling in college.
In addition to the problems mentioned above, high schools forget to help students to
find the correct college major to choose. Often, college students will change their majors
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several times and may even dropout when they realize the major that they choose is not for
them.
Fig. 3. This image shows some statistics about students with undecided majors
High schools do not utilize programs to help students find what interests them. Sometimes
students have career days, but many of these happen in elementary school when students have
little to no understanding of what they truly want to do when they grow up. If high schools
would have career days, then students would be better suited to know which subjects they like
Some might argue that the colleges are to blame for their high tuition prices and that
they are not providing enough money for the students through scholarships. The cost of
college tuition has been a major issue for several decades. Since 1978 the cost of college
tuition has increased by 1375% (Bustamante). This is not due to simple inflation. The rate of
inflation over this time frame has been at around 300%. For most students, this cost is out of
reach without any financial aid. In addition to the skyrocketing cost of college, many colleges
have no programs in place to prevent the enormous dropout rates. “An alarming number of
schools have no specific plan or goals in place to improve student retention and degree
completion. Colleges tend to put the blame on students, rather than on themselves”
(stateuniversity.com, 9). If colleges would own up to their mistakes and listen to the students,
Also, many people argue that colleges provide little support for students. They argue
that college counselors are not nearly as effective as high school counselors and have little to
no impact on a student’s life. Small changes in a student’s mood or behavior may not be
noticed and this could lead to feelings of loneliness or depression. Once again, causing the
Although these are some good points, the faults made by high schools are far worse
than the faults made by colleges. As mentioned earlier, high schools do little to prepare
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students for the financial challenge of college and do not warn students about the high cost of
tuition. Also, colleges should not need programs to prevent students from dropping out. The
high schools should make sure that only the students who are prepared are going to college in
the first place. If high schools better prepared their students and did not pressure the students
that were not ready for college, then the number of students dropping out of college would be
so low, that there would be no need for dropout prevention programs. Finally, there are many
activities for college students to become involved in. Usually, there are more activities in
colleges than there are in high schools. Although high school counselors are better than their
counterparts in college, college is supposed to help prepare students for the real world where
they will not have the same level of guidance in their lives.
During November, one of the most critical months in a high school senior’s life, they
are not considering what the cost of college might be and how to manage their money. They
are not thinking about the challenge that college course work presents. They are not imagining
themselves lacking motivation or not completing their degree. They are too worried about
getting accepted and not what they will do when they are at college. Therefore, many students
drop out of college. The lack of preparation whether it is economic, academic, or simply
mental preparation is why so many students are shocked when they attend college. The only
solution for some of these students is to simply dropout. Unfortunately for many of these high
school seniors, they will fall to the same fate of those before them. Until high schools change
to better prepare their students for college, colleges will struggle to figure out how to lower
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