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Salma Cruz
Eng 5
17 Oct 2020
In today's society, it’s no question that social media has become a fundamental part of
our day to day lives. A great percentage of the population has opened up accounts or “profiles''
with different sites that allows us to share life events or even just thoughts amongst our loved
ones. Posts on social media can range from pregnancy announcements to a post about
somebody's current jobless situation. Of course some people have more time and are more
invested into keeping up with updates shown on these sites compared to others. Some people
also are completely against social media, not having any profiles on these sites. They often refer
to the negative effect that can come with spending time on these sites. The first article in
comparison is from NMEDIAC, by Lee Farquhar and Theresa Davidson. The second article
being from scienceblog.com. The first article is more formal: using a more professional
terminology, longer page wise, and a more specific use of statistics. The second article however,
is shorter, straight to the point, not as detailed, and doesn’t refer to research as much.
Overall, these articles both have a similar overall purpose, which is to reveal the negative
emotional effects that can come from social media use, as well as the happiness it can bring.
WIth the emotional sense, the use of pathos is seen. Within the more “blog” style article, the
purpose is more to communicate what others feel when it comes to their social media use. The
unknown author of this article states how “It is not simply the amount of social comparison one
does that matters, but the type of comparison that predicts happiness and life satisfaction”
(scienceblog.com). What I took from this part of the writing was that social media does not
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always bring negative and degrading thoughts about oneself. Rather so, some people let certain
content affect them and their self esteem. For example, there’s two social media users. One may
be a bachelor that feels stable in life, without any desire to settle down and get married, have
kids, buy a house, etc. Another person may be a man who is also single, but feels lost in regards
to their current path in their life journey. Let’s say they both see their mutual friend’s photo post
about their new house, with a ring on their finger while holding two children. The bachelor is
more likely to go on about their day after seeing the post than the other man. In fact, they might
even feel BETTER about themselves and their current life that does not include the same
responsibilities as others. This is because the bachelor currently feels at ease, happy, and
satisfied with their life. The other man may get upset after seeing the post, maybe have a self
conflicting moment, and begin to have dramatic thoughts in their head. He may begin to think
what is he doing wrong, and if he will be alone forever. The first article though is more research
based, including different cases. Regarding the percentage of Facebook use to one’s life
satisfaction and overall happiness. This writing piece is more centered around numbers, and
these statistics are to be used more in a professional conversation. In general, these both have the
same purpose to further state that social media does not only have cons and brings negative
emotions as assumed, but it also can bring happiness to others. The difference between the way
these two communicate this idea is that one goes more into depth than the other, and serves
different purposes. The blog post being more for entertainment value within normal citizens, and
the other article that is more likely used in a professional setting and shared amongst a higher
educated community. The blog post has more a sense of ethos due to its credibility and more
educational use.
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It is safe to say the biggest difference between the two articles is their genres. Without
even reading both pieces, the audience can automatically tell which one is more formal, and
which would be more appealing to a regular person. The blog post is obviously set up in a more
eye appealing way, it is spaced out well, not too overwhelming at first sight. The text is laid out
reasonably, while still containing interesting information. This is because people who write blogs
do so with the hope of having a bigger audience. They need to keep their posts at a reasonable
length that seems appealing to the eye. Layout is very important in a genre like a blog post.
However, the other article in comparison has a more crowded look at first sight. Apart from
being longer in page length, it automatically looks more formal. The layout is simple yet
contains an extensive amount of information. This is because it’s purpose is different, it is not for
entertainment. It is intended for a more professional use, and for exclusive educational purposes.
With each article and their different genre, comes a difference in their audience. After
analyzing both articles, it is clear who the authors were intending to communicate their message
with. Because of the second article’s informality, we can instantly tell it was written for an
average person to read. Someone such as a person who feels that their use of social media is
beginning to affect their mental health. “It is not the amount of Facebook use that matters, but
rather, how one feels they measure up in comparison with those around them”, is said by the
unknown blog author. By saying this, his/her intention may be to communicate to a social media
user that maybe they should think differently about how the emotional effects their social media
is having on them. The more formal article includes references to other research done and is
therefore intended for a professional audience to use perhaps in their workplace. “Using survey
data from a sample of college students and Amazon’s Mechanical Turk workers, findings
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In conclusion, both writings show similarities within their information about the
happiness and pros that can come from social media. Although the differences are evident,
within the intended audiences and the way each is transmitted in an informal, and professional
method. The importance about the differences within these two texts is that each difference
explains why it is important to be familiar with different genres. For each genre, the purpose is
clearly different from the other. This is because they are intended for different audiences. Yes,
they are about the same general concept but completely different characteristics within.
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Works cited
http://ibiblio.org/nmediac/2019/comparing_on_facebook/Facebook_comparing.html
ScienceBlog.com. (2019, February 04). Surprising Link Between Social Media and
https://scienceblog.com/505768/surprising-link-between-social-media-and-happiness/