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1. first, overseas workers usually receive 2.

The working conditions in many offshore


very low wages are uncomfortable and unsafe
1. People often work 14hours day and 1. Workers protection laws either don’t
earn less than 100 dollars a month exist or often are not followed
2. Textile workers earn less than 40% 2. In a clothing factory the noise was so
of the money needed to live loud that I had to cover my ears
3. In some cases, they earn only a few 3. In 2012 a fire broke out in factory that
cents for making a dress killed 117 people and injured 200
4. A research in Delhi says garment 4. Moreover, factory building are often
workers can’t afford to pay their unsafe
basics needs
5. Such low wages are wrong and
unfair

In my opinion they do not justify the low wages and dangerous conditions found In many
overseas factories today
I believe they should contribute a much larger share of their massive profits to correcting
these problems and improving social conditions in the countries where they are located

Page 159 exercise 1


Main argument: To make clothes at these low prices, companies have to keep costs down.
They use offshore production to do this.

Page 160 exercise 3

Facts statistics Expert opinion Quotations Examples


The unites states One study of 15 David Schneider, say “garment workers in For example, the
alone imported countries found that outsourcing benefits countries like India whole world was
almost 122 that textile workers local economies by and Bangladesh can’t shocked in 2012
billion dollars’ earned less than providing jobs at higher afford to pay their when a fire broke
worth of textiles 40% of the money wages than local worker basics needs like food out at a garment
in 2014 they needed to live can make by working in and healthcare, we factory in Dhaka,
agriculture need to establish a Bangladesh, that
fair wage for the work killed 117 people
they do” and injured 200

Personal experience
I saw this myself when I visited a clothing
factory in Bangladesh in 2015. The noise was
so loud that I had to cover my ears. Moreover,
factory buildings are often unsafe

Page 160 exercise 4


1. It uses facts, statistics, expert opinions, quotations, examples and personal
experience as evidence, but the more use are the examples.
2. In my opinion the more use in the expert’s opinions because in many academical
books there are many of them
3. The examples because I think that with examples is easier to understand the
information

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