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Actually, no. Done well, it makes the argument stronger. This is because it
gives you the chance to respond to your reader’s objections before they have
finished reading. It also shows that you are a reasonable person who has
considered both sides of the debate. Both of these make an essay more
persuasive. (It is kind of like what you would do to convince a parent to let you
do something you know they do not want to let you do. You tell them why they
should let you do whatever it is. Then you go through all the reasons they
would give you for why you cannot do whatever it is and then you would
counter those reasons with logical responses on why you should be allowed
to do whatever it is they do not want you to do.)
Make sure you express the counter-argument fairly and objectively. Ask
yourself if the person who actually holds this position would accept your way
of stating it. Put yourself in their shoes and give them the benefit of the doubt.
Don’t use biased language or stack the deck when presenting their position.
Readers see through that sort of thing pretty quickly.
Obviously, if you really believe the position expressed in your thesis, you will
not be able to be completely objective in how you express the counter-
argument—but you should try. One of the most common purposes of counter-
argument is to address positions that many people hold but that you think are
mistaken. Therefore you want to be respectful and give them the benefit of the
doubt even if you think their views are incorrect. They’ll be much more likely to
be persuaded then.
Racism is a thing of the past; therefore, students don’t need to bother with it.
The factual assumption in this example is that racism is a thing of the past.
One response would be to muster facts to show that racism continues to be a
problem. (There’s a second assumption, which is that students don’t need to
bother with what’s in the past. Another response would be to show that
students must understand the past as well as the present “to function
adequately in civic life.”)
Students are already familiar with racism; they don’t need to study it in school.
Many students are, in fact, already familiar with racism. But Loewen is not
saying they need to learn about racism, he’s saying they need to learn
what causes it. You might be very familiar with racism but still not know what
causes it. This is a very common form of counter-argument, one that actually
rebuts a different argument. (Note that here, too, there’s a faulty assumption:
being familiar with something is not the same as knowing what causes it.)
The response here would be to show that previous generations did not
“function adequately in civic life,” because they had a lot of problems with
racism (segregation and more hidden forms of discrimination). Therefore, the
fact that they didn’t learn about the causes of racism, together with this other
information, actually supports the claim that students do need to learn what
causes racism. (Here again there’s a faulty assumption, implied but not
stated: Previous generations supposedly did function adequately in civic life.
The response shows that that assumption is incorrect.)
What makes a good counter-argument?
Some counter-arguments are better than others. You want to use ones that
are actually somewhat persuasive. There’s nothing to be gained by rebutting a
counter-argument that nobody believes. Two things to look for
are reasonableness and popularity.
If you yourself are somewhat unsure of the position you’ve chosen as your
thesis, it will be easier for you to identify good counter-arguments. You
already recognize that there are reasonable arguments on the other side—
that’s why you’re a little unsure. Look for those arguments that make sense to
you or that seem reasonable, even if you don’t agree with them.
On the other hand, you may be quite sure of your position, which makes it
harder to see other views as reasonable. They all look flawed to you because
you can point out their errors and show why your view is better. In that case,
look for ones that are popular, even if they are flawed. Remember, you’re
trying to persuade your readers to agree with you. So you want to speak their
language. That means answering their objections even if you don’t think the
objections are reasonable.
If you look at the examples above, you’ll probably find some more convincing
than others. Most people will probably not find the “Who cares if students are
racist” argument very convincing. On the other hand, you might find the
“students already understand” argument pretty persuasive.
Pick the arguments that you feel are reasonable. The more you can answer
those objections, the stronger you’ll make your case.
Organization
Where does the counter-argument go?
In practice (there are exceptions), the rebuttal is usually not the concluding
paragraph, which means that generally the counter-argument is anywhere but
the last two paragraphs.
Here are two outlines showing the most common placement of the counter-
argument. The first is probably the most common.
I. Introduction
II. Supporting point #1
III. Supporting point #2
IV. Supporting point #3
V. Supporting point #4
VI. Rebuttal
VII. Conclusion
OR
VII. Conclusion
It’s important to use clear signals to alert the reader that the paper is about to
express a view different from (typically, the opposite of) the thesis. Since the
purpose of the whole paper, including the counter-argument, is to support the
thesis, these signals are crucial. Without them the paper appears incoherent
and contradictory.
Notice, however, that even this sentence is careful to attribute these views to
other people, and to call them “views”—in other words, to subtly hint that they
are not facts or truths.
In general, the strategy is to make it clear quickly that this is someone else’s
view. Typical introductory strategies include the following:
Many people [believe/argue/feel/think/suppose/etc.] that [state the
counter-argument here]
It is often [thought/imagined/supposed/etc.] that [state the counter-
argument here]
[It would be easy to/One could easily]
[think/believe/imagine/suppose/etc.] that [state the counter-argument
here]
It might [seem/appear/look/etc.] as if [state the counter-argument here]
You can also cite specific writers or thinkers who have expressed a view
opposite to your own:
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The common strategies for introducing the rebuttal are the mirror image of
those for introducing the counter-argument, and they all boil down to the same
basic concept: “Yes, but....” They can be as simple as that, or as complex as
this example sentence: