Smartphone is one of the most important parts devices in my life.

My parents
gave it for me when I went to the high school. It gives me many benefits and
thanks to it I can work more efficiently and smoothly. I often use it for my study
and entertainment. It helps me take search for information quickly. I can look for
documents or images and I can learn other languages through apps in the phone .
When I feel tired I can watch films, gameshow or play games on smartphone to
relax. Sometimes I use it for taking photos with my friends or my family. Besides
that, it helps me keep in touch with my friends or make friends with the people
around the world. I think it is so hard to live without using smartphone. It’s very
terrible and I think I will do every things slowly.

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Vd ở ý: I can learn other languages .... + (phát triển thêm để cụ thể) for example, i
am taking an english course online now through zoom which is a popular online
learning and teaching application. It’s very convenient because i don’t have to
travel long distances to attend a class ....
Ý 2 I can work more efficiently and smoothly ... ví dụ cụ thể ra em hi