In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.

What problems will this cause for

individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing
populations.

It is true that in recent years, the average life expectancy in the developed countries is increasing
because of the technological advances as well as the advent of high-quality healthcare services. There
are a lot of personal and social influences. And below measures can be taken to reduce the impact of
the ageing population.

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 Although there are negative effects of this trend on people and society, some possible solutions can
be taken to reduce the impact of the ageing population.

Increasing life expectancy will have a huge impact on individuals and society.For individual effects,
young workers will receive less wages because the government needs a pension to pay retirees (ý này
rất lủng củng). The increase in life expectancy will affect the labor force of children in the family,
children will have to take care of their parents. In terms of influence on society, society will become lack
of an experienced and young workforce, making the national economy unstable. The demand for health
care will increase rapidly and this will put a heavy burden on healthcare system. This is because older
peoole are more likely to develop chronic diseases such as heart attacks or diabetes. Therefore, the
government needs to allocate more budget to provide sufficient healhcare facilitities and special
treaments for the elderly. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for
working adults.

Ý 1 chưa được:  IF MORE people of old age recieve pension benefits, the percentage of of people of
working age who pay income taxes will decrease. This will negatively affect the economy as a whole
since there will be the lack of young workforce

There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. The
government should make a decision to increase the retirement age. For example, the average age for
retirement is used to be 60, thennow it should be extended to 65 will retire so that the elderly could
continue a productive working life. Raising salaries for people preparing to retire so that they are
motivated to strive for better job.

Finally, it is important to educate people about the importance of money management and
saving for retirement. By doing this, when people reach their retirement age, they will have a
certain amount of money to take care of themselves without the need to depend on their
children or the government.

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the
populations of countries grow older.

CÁC TỪ VỰNG HAY TRONG BÀI:

put a heavy burden on: đặt gánh nặng lên

a productive working life: cuộc sống làm việc năng suất

chronic diseases: các bệnh mãn tính

allocate more budget: phân bổ ngân sách

sufficient (đủ) healhcare facilitities and special treaments (các điều trị đặc biệt for the elderly:

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because when people use public transport , fewer private vehicles (xe cá nhân) will be used -
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because they want to take care of their children more carefully.
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Cencorship: sự kiểm duyệt (các thông tin mạng)
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