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Writing a Quantitative Research Thesis


H. Johnson Nenty

Educational Foundations, P. Bag UB 0702, University of Botswana, Gaborone, Botswana


E-mail: hjnenty@yahoo.com or nentyhj@mopipi.ub.bw
KEYWORDS Research Problem and Topic. Review of Literature. Research Methodology and Design. Data Analysis.
Research Findings

ABSTRACT Research is an exciting adventure which if properly carried out adds richly to the student’s experience,
to the school academic prestige and to the society through the new knowledge it creates which could be applied in
solving related problems and in other services. Young researchers always encounter problems designing and carrying
out their first study which usually is their project, thesis or dissertation. Some who are not properly guided or
supervised get frustrated and drop out of their programmes because of these problems. The ideas in this paper which
metamorphosed over 25 years of teaching and supervising research, represents an attempt to contribute to the
solution of such problems especially for graduate students. It presents elaborately, in very simple language and in five
sections, the practical steps that should guide beginning researchers on how to carry out their study and report it.

1. RESEARCH PROBLEM AND TOPIC manipulation would have on the problem. Hence
the first step in tackling this problem is to carry
There are basically two types of problems: out a study to determine the amount of influence
that whose aim is to increase our knowledge and any of the independent variables has on the
that whose aim is to make our life better (Selamat problem variable, and based on the result of such
2008). Research topic emanates from a detailed study, we make recommendations or come out
and insightful analysis of a research problem as with a model through which contribution could
one of the possible ways through which a solution be made towards the solution of the problem.
could be contributed to the problem. Such Since we may not, in one study, handle all the
analysis might involve experiences gained from variables that could possible influence our
literature review. Generally, research topic should problem variable, we have to choose one or
reflect three components: the independent sometimes few of them to study, and the chosen
variable, the dependent variable and the popula- ones(s) become(s) the independent variable in
tion under study. The dependent variable is the our study. Let us say that in our own case, we
problem variable while the independent variable choose teacher motivation, hence our topic would
is that whose influence or relationship to the be “Teacher motivation and quality of
problem variable is to be established, and which performance in mathematics by senior
if effectively manipulated is highly likely to bring secondary students in Botswana” Here we have
about desirable changes in the problem variable. ‘the level of teacher motivation’ as our
For example the problem of deteriorating independent variable; ‘quality of performance in
quality of performance of mathematics by senior mathematics’ as our dependent variable; and
secondary students in Botswana, was analysed, ‘senior secondary school students in Botswana’
and several possible contributory factors were as our population under study. Each of these has
identified. These included: quality of textbook, to be defined or operationalized during the
teaching methods, teachers’ experience, teachers’ process of the study. Topics should be stated as
motivation, parental involvement, study time, etc. concisely as possible. Irrelevant phrases like “A
These are called the independent variables, while Study of . . .” “A Comparison Between . . . .”
the problem variable is called the dependent should be avoided. The maximum length, in
variable. A contribution to the solution of the number of words, of a typical topic should be 20
problem could be done by manipulating any of (Graduate Studies, College of Education,
these independent variables in a direction that University of Florida [GS/COE-UFL] 2005).
would enhance desirable changes in the problem
variable - quality of students’ performance in The Problem
mathematics. But first of all, we must determine
the amount of influence, if any, which such The first chapter in a thesis research report is
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often labelled as “The Problem” because 1.1 Introduction


everything that goes into it has to do with the
presentation, analysis and validation of the This section presents and analyses current
research problem. Some authors title it as observations, experiences, views, opinions, etc.
“Introduction” but each of the other chapters has that reflect or bear on the existence of the problem.
a section on introduction hence it is sometimes It argues with evidence for the existence of the
confusing when it is so titled. If the first chapter problem. It serves to present the existence of the
of the research report is titled “Introduction”, problem to potential readers in such a way as to
there will be no need for any section or sub- involve them as stakeholders and capture and
section to be titled “Introduction” keep their attention and whet their appetite to
Generally, the chapter presents, analyses, and read the work. (For large funded studies, rich
validates the problem for which a solution is materials for this section can be generated during
sought through the study. It validates the problem a stakeholders’ consultation or need assessment
through presenting and analysing: study.) The aim is to create the existence of the
(1) current observations, experiences, views, problem to which you are trying to contribute a
opinions that reflect or bear on the existence solution in their minds, their feelings and make it
of the problem; real to them and thus arouse their interest in the
(2) background (historical, cultural, economic, problem at hand. Try to make it their problem too,
social, etc.) information on the problem or on let them see the problem with you, and to feel
its development; that the solution to the problem is important to
(3) rationale or theoretical/conceptual back- them. What brought this as a problem to your
ground/foundation information that provides notice? Introduction is a ‘public relation’ section
the knowledge so far available to human on of the study. The questions you should try to
the area of the problem. This is the ‘major answer here are:
premise’ of the study. This provides the basis 1. What observations, experiences, etc., caught
or a foothold for speculating the possible your attention and raised interest and/or
solution to the problem at hand. Solution to questions in your mind and hence gave rise
problems emanates from putting what is to the study?
known or theoretical knowledge to work. One 2. In other words, what did you observe, hear,
who does not have the theoretical knowledge see, or experience that prompted you to think
cannot speculate and follow through possible that this is a problem worth spending your
solution to a practical problem. It is what is time and funds on trying to contribute a
known so far in the problem area that provides solution? or
the foundation for practice or for an attempt 3 What prompted your curiosity or interest
to solve any related problem. which you are trying to satisfy?
(4) The actual problem to which one intends to Present and analyse these in such a way as to
contribute a solution. whet other person’s appetite to read your work
(5) The purpose of the study and if possible, its by raising similar interest or curiosity in their
objectives based on which research minds. Your problem should intrigue and motivate
questions could be derived. not only you but also your audience. Others
(6) Research hypotheses which, informed by should find your problem interesting and worth
theory, speculate possible solution to the attention (Selamat, 2008). Explain your and other
problem. related observations, experiences, views and
(7) The significance of the study. related opinions in such a way as to make the
In a very elaborate form, the chapter as pre- problem obvious to everybody. Current views
sented has the following sections: introduction, and opinions such as those expressed in
background, rationale or theoretical/conceptual newspapers, magazine on issues related to the
background, statement of the problem, purpose existence of the problem at hand are good at this
of the study, research objectives, research point. Get and present, if possible, data and
questions, research hypotheses, significance of figures that highlight the existence of the problem.
the study, assumptions, limitations, delimitations Avoid theory or review of empirical literature here
(or scope) and definition of terms and sometimes but use current information and data that
a summary of the chapter. highlight your problem, curiosity or interest.
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1.2 Background to the Problem understanding; and from a consensus or


convergence or these observations back to
Sometimes it is necessary to present and theory. Generally therefore, from a body of
analyse the historical, cultural, social, etc. acceptable knowledge, a hypothesis is deduced
background to the problem of your study within and tested inductively based on the result of an
the population under study. Place the problem empirical observation of a large enough typical
under study in a historical, sociological, cases. Tested hypothesis are used inductively to
traditional or cultural etc perspective. Does the build, revise or validate a generalization or theory.
problem have any history, or does it have any Hence at this point the researcher should present
cultural or sociological root in the tradition or and analyse an existing knowledge or theories
culture of the population under study? Present that relate to or underlie his/her problem or
and analyse such historical, cultural or interest. What is the theoretical foundation, or
sociological roots here. what do humans know so far, which provides the
basis for speculating possible solution to the
1.3 Rationale, Theoretical or Conceptual problem at hand, or which provides the basis for
Background/Foundation any attempt to solve this or related problems?
Such theoretical or conceptual foundation should
Research, especially quantitative research is provide an explanation for the relationship among
basically a theory validation procedure hence the variables involved in your problem. What is the
research process is cyclic in nature. It starts from theory (major premise) that provides the
theory and ends in theory. It is a process through foundation to your study and to which your
which theories are validated, refined or findings will provide a contribution? Hitch your
invalidated. Though this may not always be wagon to theory (Aleman 1999), or fit your
obvious, especially to beginning researchers, observation or experience into the framework of
effective solution to any human problem is based what is already known in this area, and from it
on an application of one existing theory or the derive definitions, orientations, questions, and
other or an application of “what is known so far” directions to your thinking; and speculate, based
in the search of what could be known in the on relationships among variables as postulated
problem area. Hence, especially with applied by the theory, the possible solutions to your
research one needs a theory related to the problem problem (Kerlinger and Lee 2000; Mouly 1978).
to provide a foundation and a sort of guidance Your speculations (hypotheses) must stand
for the search of a solution to the problem. To theoretical test by being compatible and
Hair and his colleagues (2001), theory serves three consistent with existing knowledge. Theoretical
basic purposes in a research study. These are: background should precede the research
the provision of a conceptual framework for a questions or hypotheses which are speculated
research study; serving as a vehicle for based on it.
incorporating prior knowledge; and linking
research to the larger body of knowledge in the 1.4 Statement of the Problem
area of the problem (p. 2).
Any attempt at the solution of any problem is Here the researcher presents and analyses the
always founded on what is known so far in the problem to which he/she is trying to contribute a
area of the problem. What is known so far is often solution through his/her research. Or exactly what
enveloped in one theory or the other. Our is the curiosity or the interest which you are trying
reasoning toward a solution to the problem starts to satisfy? According to Selamat (2008), “the heart
deductively from here and ends inductively at of any research project is the problem” and
adding to the theory or increasing our confidence “researchers get off a strong start when they
or lack of confidence in the theory. It is based on begin with an unmistakably clear statement of
what is known that a possible solution to the the problem” (Slide 25). Unlike the public-relation
problem is speculated. For example, one cannot minded ‘Introduction” which presents and
speculate a valid solution to a faulty carburettor analyses current observations, experiences,
unless he/she knows the theory of the working views, opinions, etc. that reflect or bear on the
of a carburettor. So the logic is from theoretical existence of the problem or interest, here a
understanding to observations underlied by that statement of the actual problem or interest is
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presented and elaborated on. Ideas from the the intention which the study hopes to realize at
theoretical foundation are conscripted and used the end of the attempt to contribute a solution to
to ‘paint the problem red.’ The purpose of the the problem at hand. Some guiding questions are:
study is not its problem, the two are different. 1. What are the general goals/purposes or aims
Present and analyse, with a high level of clarity, of the study?
the problem of the study and then specifically 2. What are the emanating objectives that the
focus it by narrowing it down to the aspect your study hopes to achieve?
study will contribute solution. Relevant questions 3. Following from these, when the research is
to be answered here are: completed, what are the research questions
1. What exactly is the problem to which you are to which reasonable answers can be
trying to contribute a solution? Present the expected?
problem explicitly and elaborately, clarify and
delineate it. Specify the nature of the problem 1.6 Research Questions
and, if necessary limit, the scope of the
investigation. You might delineate and define Research concerns are operationalized
sub-problems. Present and analyse problems through research questions to which valid
in education, for example, to which your study answers are sought for during and are expected
is going to contribute solutions. by the end of the study. Research questions
2. Specifically, what problem in education, or in should be clear, concise, and as simple as
any area, or in the society/community, or in possible, focused and empirically answerable.
your job, etc, are you intending to, or They should not be questions that require a yes
interested in, contributing a solution through or no answer (Selamat 2008). They should be
your research? ‘Paint the problem red.’ framed to provide the guide for the conduct of
3. How and why is this a problem? What are the the study. For descriptive empirical studies they
current adverse consequences of the prob- are answerable through descriptive analysis of
lem? What are the impacts of the problem? data, for inferential study, they are answerable
What are likely to be the consequences of through testing hypotheses that emanate from
this problem if a solution for it is not sort for them. A study can have some research questions
now? In other words, why is it important to that are not convertible into hypotheses, and then
address the problem? both research questions and hypotheses are
You should not be writing a thesis only for accommodated in such cases. This might call for
the sake of meeting graduation requirements but a mix-method approach involving both
you should make a significant contribution to quantitative and qualitative methods. The
knowledge or to the solution of a significant research question should be framed in such a
problem. Avoid trivial problems as such problems way that it will not provoke “yes” or “no” answer.
may not sufficiently “enlarge our wisdom” and For example, based on the sample topic selected
may not reach findings that are useful to a large earlier, the research question “to what extent does
audience (Selamat 2008). You should enlarge our teachers’ satisfaction influence students’
wisdom in the area of your problem or curiosity performance in mathematics?” is more appropriate
through your study. Information from literature than “does teachers’ satisfaction influence
should help you delineate, clarify and enrich your students’ performance in mathematics”
problem statement; it should rarely be the source
of your problem since you should aim at 1.7 Statement of the Hypotheses
contributing solution to a real life problem.
To Kerlinger (1968) “hypothesis is the most
1.5 Purpose of the study powerful tool man has invented to achieve
dependable knowledge” (p. 27). It is a powerful
The statement of the purpose of the study is tool for the advancement of knowledge because
often confused with the statement of the problem it serves as the working instrument or the
of the study. While the statement of the problem tentacles of theory and a means for seeking
of the study is a presentation and analysis of the solution to human problems. They are tentative,
problem to which a solution is being sought intelligent guesses posited for the purpose of
through the study, the purpose of the study is directing one’s thinking and action towards the
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solution of a problem (Selamat 2008). Hypotheses relationship is retained, but if it bigger, then the
are derivable from theory and they serve as null hypothesis is rejected and the research
means through which theories are validated, hypothesis retained. Retaining the null hypothesis
revised or invalidated through research (Glassman is like acquitting a defendant based on evidence
2007). Once stated, they guide the rest of the study before the judge. There may be other evidence
especially in terms of the literature to be reviewed, not before the judge which if available would alter
research design and methodology, data analysis the decision of the judge, hence an appeal is
procedure, arrangement of research sections, always allowed (Churchill and Iacobucci 2004).
discussions of research findings, etc. The Sometimes the level to which one is willing to
questions here are: reject a true null hypothesis, that is, significance
1. What are your intelligent or informed (by or alpha level is specified generally for all
analysis of related theory) guesses or hypotheses or indicated in each statement of the
speculations as to the solution to your null hypothesis. For example for our study on
problem? teachers’ motivation and quality of performance
2. What are the scientific research speculations in mathematics by senior secondary students in
through which you hope to find solutions to Botswana, one of the statistical null hypothesis
your problems? Be very concrete and clear with the alpha level indicated in the statement of
and state each hypothesis in terms of hypothesis might be: “there is no significant
observable behaviour allowing for empirical relationship, at the .05 alpha level, between
testing and evaluation of the implications? teachers’ level of intrinsic motivation to teach and
While research hypotheses are never express- the performance by his/her students” (GS/COE-
ed in the question form, research questions are UFL 2005).
convertible to research hypotheses. Hypothesis The logic of quantitative research does not
generally always indicates a possible influence encourage the idea of accepting, but of retaining
on the problem variable by another variable – the the null hypothesis, because failure to reject the
independent variable. Underlying the establish- null hypothesis still has some probability that it
ment of influence is the determination of the might be incorrect. So instead of being accepted,
relationship among variables. As a means of such a speculation is retained because further
contributing a solution to the problem, such evidence might come to show it false and hence
influence or relationship, if significant, points to rejected. This is especially so as we did not study
the fact that if the independent variable is the entire population but studied a sample from
manipulated, there could be desirable changes it. It is therefore not logical to accept that for
on the problem variable, leading to a solution of which there is some likelihood that it might be
the problem under consideration. incorrect as the truth but to retain it as the truth
A speculation is a scientific hypothesis if and so far pending further evidence.
only if it is testable. That is, it must be amenable Descriptive studies make do with research
to being confirmed or disconfirmed through the questions only, but inferential studies might
collection and analysing of empirical data. The involve both research questions and hypotheses.
convergence or consensus among several The problem variable, or some aspect of it, which
empirical evidence must be that which determines is the dependent variable for the study is often
the tenability of the statement. A research directly or indirectly implied in each research
hypothesis statement necessarily involves or question/hypothesis.
implies the fact that the observed difference or
relationship is over and above that which could 1.8 Significance of the Study
be accountable for by chance or random error;
hence the word ‘significant’ is always used. A What contributions do you think your study
difference or a relationship can be observed, but intend to make to the advancement of knowledge
if such difference or relationship is not above and/or to the solution of some practical or
and beyond that which random error could bring theoretical problem(s)? What are the intrinsic
about then it is not significant. If the observed and extrinsic benefits of the study? What is the
difference or relationship is not bigger than that potential usefulness of the findings of the study
which random error could account for, then the to all stakeholders? How will the findings assist
null hypothesis of no significant difference or or be of benefit to each stakeholder? How would
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the solution to the problem influence educational the constraint in, or lack of simple random sampling
theory and practice? What are the educational, places limitation on generalizability of the findings.
social, theoretical, cultural, etc. significance of What are those constraints that would be faced
the study? Convince the stakeholders of your by anybody who tries to conduct or replicate the
study of the potential impact of the study for study? To what extent is the study limited and
them. Formulate and present the anticipated why? Limitations become clearer or more obvious
implications or possible applications of the results at the conclusion of the study hence sometimes
of your study. Indicate significance to all related theses could not be fully specified until after the
stakeholders of the study including: (1) theory or study, and could be placed elsewhere possibly at
advancing accumulated knowledge; (2) current the interpretation or discussions stages of the
literature; (3) policy development and imple- report (GS/COE-UFL 2005). They serve as warning
mentation; (4) practices in the field; (5) the study’s or precaution to the readers or consumers of the
subjects or participants; (6) teachers and other research findings on the extent to which they can
practitioners; (7) researchers; (8) parents, apply or generalize the findings.
government and other stakeholders, etc.(GS/COE-
UFL 2005) 1.11 Delimitations

1.9 Assumptions What are your self-imposed limitations in the


study? How have you narrowed the scope of the
What assumptions have you made, or what study? Such scope includes geographical and
have you taken for granted about the nature of conceptual scope (often presented under
the behaviour you are investigating, about the definition of terms). State precisely what you did/
conditions under which the behaviour occurs and what you did not do, or what you intend to do /
about your methods and measurements (Isaac what you do not intend to do, or define the
and Michael 1990). Unlike hypotheses, boundary for your study with regard to the scope
assumptions are not testable but are statements of the study. Have you decided to focus only on
about observations and experiences related to selected aspects of the problem, certain areas of
the study that are taken for granted or are interest, a limited range of the subjects, etc.?
assumed to be true. They are statements that help (Isaac and Michael 1990). You might, through
to remove/reduce doubts on the validity of the sampling, narrowed the population as in the topic.
study and are accepted in faith, or taken to be This will jeopardize external validity of the study.
true without proof or verification (Assumption What are those constraints imposed by, and may
2007; GS/COE-UFL 2005; Hungler and Polit 1999). be unique to, you in carrying out this study?
For example, if your study involves scores from
or subjects’ performance in public examination, 1.12 Definition of Terms
then your study would assume that the
examination was reliable and valid. The question List and define conceptually unusual terms
is what are you taking for granted in the conduct or acronyms to avoid misinterpretations
of your study? particularly where they have different meanings
to different people. (If such definitions are based
1.10 Limitations on new instruments developed for the study, the
operational definitions should come after the
What are the unavoidable limitations development of such instrument in section/
conditions (not within your control) surrounding chapter three). Make sure you do not repeat
your study and within which conclusions to the definitions implied in your theoretical foundations
study must be confined? What limitations exist in here.
your method, design or approach, sampling
restrictions, uncontrollable variables, faulty 2. REVIEW OF LITERATURE
measurements, and other compromises to internal
validity? (Isaac and Michael 1990). For example 2.1 Introduction
constraining characteristics of methodology/
design that tend to limit the interpretation and What is the content of the chapter on review
application of the research findings. For example of literature, and how are you going to arrange
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the materials in it? Unlike the theoretical materials present your reviewed materials in sections
presented under the section for theoretical/ according to your research questions or hypo-
conceptual background/foundation in the first theses. For example, if your first research question
chapter, here the researcher should present and was: “To what extent does level of teachers’
critically analyse the empirical experiences of other extrinsic motivation influence students’ perfor-
researchers like him/her who had tried to mance in mathematics?” The first hypotheses
contribute solution to problems similar or related might be “level of teachers’ extrinsic motivation
to his/her problem. In quantitative research, has a significant influence on students’
literature reviewed under this chapter is seen as mathematics performance.” Then the first section
important data or input into the research process in the literature review following the introduction
as it provides the researcher a source of materials should be headed: “level of teachers’ extrinsic
with which to revise one’s problem, topic, and motivation and Mathematics Performance.”
hypotheses and an informed source for writing Under this heading, relevant and current empirical
one’s methodology. It also provides important experiences of other researchers like you on this
inputs into the discussion of the research area should be critically reviewed, analysed and
findings. arranged systematically to show a trend in the
development of empirical knowledge in the area.
2.2 Literature Review Have a specific reason for reviewing a particular
research study. This might be its importance given
Review other researchers’ empirical experience your problem; its unique methodology, data
(theoretical review belongs to the section on analysis procedure and findings (GS/COE-UFL
theoretical background) with your, related or 2005). While empirical literature from studies
similar problems? Critically and analytically undertaken within the last 10 years are generally
review the experiences, findings, and the design, accepted as current, literature from classic/
method, analysis used and such results. What important studies in the area should also be
are others’ views based on the results/findings reviewed
of these relevant studies? Organize and present
these reviews in a systematic way in related 2.3 Reviewing Literature
sections, in terms of relationships between
variables as implied by your hypotheses. This The most important skill for efficient review
should not be merely descriptive or narrative, but of literature is the ability to read fast, comprehend
critical and analytic. When you review others’ and summarize material quickly and put it in a
studies, pinpoint or indicate flaws, and other form that can easily be retrieved and used in the
technicalities that may seriously distract from future. During a review, a researcher’s activities
their validity (Mouly 1978, p. 92). The guiding are quoting, paraphrasing, summarizing and
questions here are: When other researchers like evaluating. Each of these should be done in a
you tried to contribute a solution to this, related manner as to protect the right of the author and
or similar problems: avoid plagiarism.
What did they do?
How did they do it? 2.4 Summary of Literature Reviewed and
What population, strategy, method, and Justification (Rationale) for the Study
measures did they use?
What did they do wrong? Provide a comprehensive summary of the
What did they find out? reviewed materials. How are you going to use
What have they or others said about what them in your study? In other words, what is the
they did and what they found out? place of the reviewed materials in your study?
What are the inherent weaknesses/strengths Present a brief appraisal of the need or justification
of the strategies, methods? measures? for your study in the light of the reviewed
How (if at all) did the researchers mitigate/ materials. Generally, what is known so far in the
address the weaknesses? (Did they acknowledge area of your problem, what still remains to be
the weaknesses?). Think of these questions when done? (Selamat 2008). These should be taken into
you are planning your literature review. consideration at the end of the report when
To maintain the systematic nature of research, writing your recommendations. What in the
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materials you have reviewed in terms of coverage problem, research question and/or hypotheses.
by the studies reviewed, methodology used, Anticipated method- or design-related problems
types of analysis done, findings, etc. justifies the should be highlighted and steps taken to prevent
need for your research study? Given other related them from occurring should be indicated and
studies reviewed, why is this study necessary? explained. Procedures should be vividly explained
What are the gaps, inconsistencies, inadequacies, to allow for valid replication. Fundamentally,
or deficiencies in existing literature which you quantitative research is an inferential endeavour
are trying to fill or correct through your study? which seeks to uncover universal truths and
principles in the form of relationship among
3. RESEARCH DESIGN AND variables or phenomena. Philosophically and
METHODOLOGY methodologically it is designed to enable
inference from a sample to a larger population
3.1 Introduction (The Validity and Reliability of Qualitative
Research, n.d.).
Introduce the chapter, and define your prob-
lem operationally, and on the basis of these, 3.2 Research Design
establish an appropriate and suitable design for
the study. You may restate your hypotheses in Besides indicating and justifying the type of
the statistical form and for each or for all indicate research – qualitative, quantitative or mixed model
the level of significance at which you want to – and the underlying philosophy or paradigm,
test the hypotheses. clearly describe the design of the study and defend
Note that problem for which we are seeking your choice of type and design for your study.
solution through research exists or occurs Accepting research as a search for the truth, how
because the relationship between or among will you ensure that your findings reflect the truth
interacting variables or phenomena involved in a as much as possible? What precautions will you
situation, an experience, an observation or event be taking under every aspect of the study to inhibit
results in an undesirable or intriguing conse- error from carrying the findings of the study away?
quences. Seeking any solution to such problem How are you going to minimize error and manage
calls technically for disentangling such relation- the variation in the variables under the study in
ship or identifying the variables or phenomena order to avoid the results being significantly
involved and analyzing the relationship devoid influenced by extraneous sources? How do you
of extraneous influences. The more we can do control for probable sources of error? Research
this devoid of extraneous influences, the more design is fundamentally a variance management
valid will be our findings (Best and Kahn 1996). procedure. What is, in an analytic form, the
So research design involves procedures through fundamental objective of the study? Is it an attempt
which we can explore and analyze the relationship to reconstruct and describe the past objectively
among the variables involved in our problem with and accurately, that is to describe what was? In
minimum error while controlling for sources of that case it is historical, ethnographical, etc. Is it
extraneous variability. In all aspect of the research an attempt to discover relationships that exist
design, we want to know specifically the reason between non-manipulated variable that is to
why the particular procedure used was preferred describe, explain or infer some aspects of the
over the others. So all choices or preference of present - what is? In that case it is either a survey-
any particular procedure or method over others descriptive, or a survey-inferential, evaluation
must be justified preferably by referring to other study, etc. Is it an attempt to find out what will be
published studies which had used or when variables of interest are carefully manipulated
recommended the use of the method or procedure. under controlled condition, that is, to describe -
Each decision about any aspect of the design what could be? In that case it is quasi- or pure-
and methodology procedures used must be experimental study (Van Dalen 1979)
defended. Is the preferred procedure consistent
with the acceptable practice in the problem area 3.3 Population of the Study
or field? Each procedure under the research
design and methodology section/chapter must Describe your population explicitly in terms
be valid or appropriate given the research of geographical limits, demographic and
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sociological descriptors, time period covered, etc., which you are using as an operational definition
as dictated by the problem. Have you delimited of each of the variables. How was the instrument
the population as specified in the topic, if yes, validated? Describe the validation process, and
how and why? Describe the population so well indicate and evaluate the results. If the instrument
that you leave no doubt in the readers’ mind as to was adopted, why it had to be adopted? If the
who is qualified or not qualified to be members of items were adapted from existing instrument
the population of the study (Isaac and Michael summarize the procedure that was used in its
1990). If possible, what is the number of members construction and its measurement properties.
in the population? Note that there is the need to What method did you use in selecting or on what
first define or describe vividly the research basis did you select the items? How well is the
population in your study; for it is not in all cases validation population of the existing instrument
that the research population will be human beings. which you are using comparable with the
Research population could be certain products population of your study? What changes or
in the market or certain textbooks in the school adaptations did you make to the original
system, etc. instrument? If the validation population is
significantly different from your population for
3.4 Sampling Procedure the study, or if the adaptations or changes made
on the original instrument are significant, describe
We can only get from the population to the your revalidation process, indicate and evaluate
sample through sampling; therefore describe the the results. Validity is at the heart of both
sampling procedure that you used to select the measurement and research.
sample from the population described above. Be Here again, we are talking about represen-
explicit to allow for replicability. Do not just say tativeness that sustains generalization. The
“simple random sampling was done.’ What question here is to what extent will your instru-
exactly did you do? What are the possible mentation procedure or methods produce
constraints that may be encountered in an measures or scores that validly represent the
attempt to carry out a scientific selection, and behaviour or variable under measurement for every
how did you overcome these? The main concern subject or participant? To enhance external validity
here is, given the sampling method you are using, avoid under-representation of the subjects or
how well does the sample that results from it participants, of the research setting, of the
represent the population? This is one of the two variables or measures. This is the deficiency where
sources of random error which research design your instrument fails to include all items that are
must minimize. It is the cornerstone for ensuring representative of and from all aspects of the
generalizability or external validity of the study. construct or variable under measurement. On the
other hand avoid measure contamination in which
3.5 The Sample items that are irrelevant to the construct or variable
are included in the instrument. Items must
Describe the resulting sample in details in succinctly represent the behaviour under
terms of each level of the independent variables measurement. Here the question is, how well do
implied in the study. Present this in a tabular the set of items you have designed, selected or
form if possible. Describe, if possible, the sample- used to measure your research constructs or
to-population ratio? Evaluate this ratio in terms variables represent all possible indicants or
of the anticipated or desirable precision of your universe of all indicators of the behaviour
study. represented by your research variable or construct?
In all cases, the reliability of the instrument
3.6 Instrumentation designed to measure each of the variables should
be presented at the proposal stage. Besides
What instrument(s) are you going to use to sampling, instrumentation and data collection
collect data for the study? If the instrument to be procedures are the other sources of random error
used is constructed by you, describe clearly, with which research must be designed to minimize. We
accurate details, how the set of items designed to can limit this by using instruments that have high
illicit responses for each variable were reliability. While validity represents the accuracy
constructed, or how you came by the set of items of your measure, reliability indicates the precision
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of your measure. Here we are talking about how 3.10 Operational Definition of Research
well the items of the instrument combine to Variables
measure precisely whatever it is measuring. It can
be measuring precisely whatever it is measuring How did you measure or manipulate each
but not accurate at measuring what it was of the variables or constructs in your study? How
supposed to measure. Reliability has to do with did you get, for each subject, the data that
stability, repeatability and consistency of the replaced or took the place of each variable for
results of our measurement or observation. every subject or participant in your study? How
did you turn the participants’ behaviour into a
3.7 Data Collection score that validly represents the behaviour? Be
explicit to allow for replicability. Give meaning to
Under what condition(s) were the data your variables by spelling out what you did (and
collected? Be explicit to allow for replication. how you did it?) to measure or manipulate it. This
What did you do to limit the error that might have can be through experimentation or through
been as a result of data gathering procedure? measurement.
What special precautions, instructions, etc., did Quantitative research is conceptually made
you take or give during the administration of the up of three sections: (1) a section based comple-
instrument or interview or during the observation tely on verbal discourse; followed by (2) a section
to minimize the data-collector effect on the result based on numerical or quantitative discourse; and
of the data collection procedure? This is another finally concludes with another (3) section based
source of measurement error which if systematic again on verbal discourse. In the first section the
comes in to adulterate the results of our research research problem is presented, analysed and
study and reduce the internal validity of such validated; literature is reviewed and reported; and
findings. Hence we want to know specifically how the procedure for carrying out the study is
the research data were collected. presented and justified, all verbally. Towards the
end of this section, research variables, concepts
and constructs are replaced with numbers. It is
3.8 Ethical Considerations
through the operationalization process that this is
done in such a way that the resulting quantification
What type of and how is each ethical issue with a score or normative qualification represents
likely to manifest during the study? What is likely the variables, concepts or construct validly. A
to be consequences of each of these to the construct is an imaginative or abstract entity,
subject? What procedures have you put in place purposely created to provide a guide, a foothold,
to address each of these issues and their probable for further study and understanding of the concept
consequences? For example, what precautions it represents (Kerlinger and Lee 2000).
and safeguards have you incorporated in the During the next quarter of the process the
study design to protect the rights of human discourse is purely numerical and technical logic,
subjects? (see American Educational Research involving hypothesis testing and the attainment
Association [AERA] 2005) of results. Owing to lack of understanding of
numerical logic by many readers, the report often
3.9 Data Preparation loses some audience within this section. It is
through the interpretation process that this logic
Describe how you will score, in respect of is again converted from numerical to verbal. It is
each variable, the responses by the subjects to at this point that results, which are expressed in
each item of your data collection instrument. Note technical terms, are translated into findings. The
that in your instrument some of the items may be last section which includes summary of the study,
negatively worded while some are positively discussion of the results, presentation of the
worded and to add these up you need to transform implications of the findings, conclusion and
all of them to the same polarity. How did you presentation of the recommendations is purely
code, roster, or transform the emanating data in verbal and non-technical (Nenty 1999b) and you
preparation for analysis? There may be need for should avoid bothering the readers with technical
you to transform the data into a numerical form jargons and numerical expressions in these
more suitable for appropriate statistical analysis. sections.
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3.11 Procedure for Testing Hypotheses: or 4.4 Hypothesis-by-Hypothesis Presentation and
Answering Research Questions Analysis of Data, and the Interpretation of
Results
Restate each of the hypotheses in the null
form and for each identify the variables Taking each hypothesis in turn, state in the
(independent and dependent variables) involved. null form and indicate, and if necessary, explain,
And given the nature and type of variables the variables involved. Analyse the data using
involved, indicate and defend your choice of the appropriate quantitative (statistical) techniques,
type of statistical analysis you will be doing to and indicate and present the tables and figures if
test the hypothesis. This may be presented in a necessary. Prepare and present the tables and
tabular form. figures neatly in such a way that they can stand
alone in describing the outcomes of the study.
4. ANALYSIS OF DATA AND Tables and figures must always be referred to in
INTERPRETATION OF RESULTS the text at least once before they are inserted.
Interpret the results, that is, read appropriate
4.1 Introduction meanings into the results and present this in non-
technical language. Interpretation transforms the
What intends to be the focus of this chapter? results of data analysis into the findings of the
How will you arrange the contents of the chapter? study, in other words, interpreted data analysis
Data analysis is a means of determining and results become the findings of the research study.
testing for the extent of convergence, commona- Selamat (2008) calls interpretation an “analytic
lity or divergence among data collected during thinking that squeezes meaning out of the mere
the study, and hence the relationship among accumulation of facts”. The question here is
variables which these data represent. The ques- “What do the results of the data analysis mean in
tion here is, for example, to what extent do the a ‘lay person’s’ language? (Slide 9) Specifically
data collected from several subjects and through the reporting steps in this section should include:
different sources converge to support the existent (a) State the statistical version of the hypothesis
of a significant influence or relationship between in the null form;
or among the research variables? Present and (b) Present and describe exactly what you did, in
interpret the results without discussion or terms of data analysis procedures, to test the
comments here (Morley 2006). hypothesis. How did you do these? What
was the result? End this up by referring to
4.2 General Description of Data the table on which you present the results.
(c) present the table that has been referred to in
Give a general descriptive analysis including (b) above. Avoid using words like above” or
the number of cases, mean and standard deviation “below” to refer to the table or to a figure or
for each dependent variable given each level of any diagram in your paper
each of the independent variables in your study. (d) what does what you found out imply for the
This is a descriptive summary of the data and research question or hypothesis under test?
should be presented in tabular and figural forms. For each research question or hypothesis,
what does the finding mean, in a layman or non-
4.3 Answering Research Questions technical language? (Nenty 1999b).
To ensure validity in the interpretations of
For those research questions that were not the results of data analysis, it is pertinent to ask
convertible to hypothesis answers to them must yourself “to what extent ‘does your data say what
be sought through descriptive analyses of you say it is saying?’” (MacLean and Mohr 1999,
relevant data. These might involve frequencies p.117).
and/or percentages; graphs; and other descriptive
analyses including determining the relationship 4.4 Summary of Findings
among relevant variables. The results of descrip-
tive data analysis should be presented in appro- Summarize all the findings in a paragraph or
priate tables and figures. Tables must be numbered two, and with it, prepare the reader’s mind for the
and given titles (Morley 2006) ensuring discussion of the findings that follows.
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5. DISCUSSIONS, SUMMARY, data analysis methods, etc.? Is it as a result of a


CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS flaw in yours or other’s design, methodology, data
analysis methods, etc? Do your results tend to
5.1 Introduction support others in arguing for the related theory?
If so, how? If not, why? Argue towards the related
What is going to be the content of this theory presented in chapter one. Discussion ties
chapter, and what is its thrust? How are you everything up? Do not re-report, the findings but
going to present or arrange materials in the discuss based on them. Answers to the following
chapter? concerns should guide and be integrated into the
discussions of the research findings:
5.2 Discussions (1) What are the findings of other empirical
studies that support or fail to support your
Discuss each of the findings exhaustively per findings in arguing for the theories on which
research question or hypothesis. All discussions your study is based and what are the probable
should be done in the light of the limitations to reasons for this?
the study. Discussion is a means of presenting (2) How has your findings altered, strengthened
and analysing the convergence or divergence of or weaken the theory on which your study is
ideas from the findings of your study, the findings based?
from the literature reviewed, and from the theories (3) What theoretical assertions has your findings
that underlie the problem under consideration. It been able to account for, or what theoretical
is an integrative analysis of information from these claims has your findings reinforced? (Aleman
sources. It is mainly an attempt to answer the 1999)
question “why?” and “how come?” Why do Explain unanticipated and statistical insigni-
boys do significantly better than girls in mathe- ficant findings. Bring out and discuss in the light
matics in the population under study, for example? of the shortcomings, limitations, delimitations and
Advance reasons to support and/or explain your assumptions of this study. Integrate and theorize
findings. Discussion is never within one person by trying to make your findings part of a
but between or among persons, ideas, etc. In comprehensive body of the knowledge/theory
research, especially in quantitative research, either by working within an existing theory or by
discussion is among four ‘persons,’ these are: generating pointers to an original theory
the findings from your study; theories related to (Tuckman 1978). Discuss in the light of the
the problem at hand (these were reviewed and limitations of your research methodology and
analysed in the first chapter); empirical highlight the possibility of generalizing your
experiences and findings of other researchers findings.
when they were trying to contribute solution to Discussion is the most complex (Morley 2006)
the problem at hand or to related or similar and important section of a research report as it is
problems (these were reviewed and analysed in integrative, synthesizing the theory, and all
the second chapter), and the researcher with all findings reviewed and reached given several
his/her expertise and experiences as an impartial methodological procedures, etc. It is the most
and insightful moderator and recorder of the intellectually demanding section, and the only
results of the discussions (Nenty 1999a, 2001). one that calls on the researcher’s creativity,
Discussions should be analytic, logical and synthesis and evaluation skills. Inputs to all other
comprehensive and should bring together your sections have been borrowed from literature and
professional knowledge, the findings of your from available physical resources and facilities,
study, the findings of related studies reviewed here the thinking is original and contribution to
earlier and you should argue in the light of related knowledge, if any, is made at this point.
theories presented in the first chapter (See
Kerlinger 1968, pp. 135-136). To what extent do 5.3 Implications
your findings support the findings of most related
studies? How? If not, what are the possible It is important to remember that the study set
reasons for the discrepancy in the findings? Does out or was designed to contribute a solution to a
the discrepancy or similarity result from given specific problem, or to satisfy a specific
differences or similarities in design, methodology, interest or curiosity, so, to complete the logical
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loop of the research process, such problem this solution? Be very clear, specific and practical
should be restated here, and the implications of in your recommendations. Specifically, to whom
the findings of the study to the solution of this are you directing each recommendation? Here
problem highlighted. again the recommendation should target each of
What is the implication of the findings of the the stakeholders of the study.
study to the various stakeholders? What do the
findings of the study suggest or what do 5.6 Suggestions for Further Studies
evidences from the study suggest to each
stakeholder? These include theory, policy and What other related studies should be carried
people involved in education, for the classroom, out in order to add to the contribution to the
administration, other researchers in the area, etc? solution to this problem?
What implications have these results or findings
to existing related theories? What are theoretical, Writing an Abstract or Summary of the Work
practical and policy implications of the findings
of your study? Given now the findings of the An abstract, a short, concise and compre-
study how well is each of the significance hensive summary of ones work is that which
realized? What and how have the findings of the represents ones study in many on-line and
study assisted each stakeholder to given the abstract publications. Package your entire study
problem of the study? What are possible practical in an envelop that can carry only at most 250
fallouts from the study? What possible words. It should be written in such a way as to
intervention towards solving the research provide a motivation and whet potential readers’
problem do the findings of your study imply? appetite to want to read the entire work. It normally
consists of four parts: (1) the motivation part
5.4 Conclusion which should reflect briefly the problem of the
study, the purpose and possibly the theoretical/
Present, in a comprehensive form the conclu- empirical gap the study is addressing. (2) The
sion based on the findings of the study. Summarize design, method and procedures part should
your thought and present your last words on the indicate briefly and precisely what was actually
problem and the significance of the findings. done to arrive at the findings of the study. (3)
According to Morley (2006), conclusions serve The result and findings section should briefly
two purposes: to summarize and bring together present a summary of the findings arrived at
the main area covered in the report, and the through the implementation of the procedures
second is to give a final comment or judgment of indicated. (4) The last part should provide
the report. Just like the introduction in the first summarizing materials on the discussion,
chapter which in trying to make every reader a conclusion, implications, and recommendations.
stakeholder in the study gave them the ‘breathe
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