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Argument Essay #3
Argument Essay #3
ENG 111
8 December 2020
My paper seeks to change the emphasis of the ongoing reform of education to the benefit
of low-income students in the school systems of the United States. My classmates from my
English 111 course at Ivy Tech, as well as my instructor, will be my intended audience for this
article. This paper concerns my audience because it includes restructuring of education that will
influence several different facets of their education. Many members of certain family and
friends, if not ourselves, come from low-income households and districts of public schools. I
found that most of the students in this course agreed after telling classmates that teaching has
changed dramatically over the years and in a negative way. This was a significant revision of my
paper because it allowed me to far better understand my audience. The emphasis on rigorous
standardized testing has taken away the opportunity of the instructor to construct lessons that
What if we have been teaching the right skills in U.S. schools all along and the solution
to poverty is answering the most important issue? The big challenge of our century has been this.
Earlier, with the belief that those at the bottom of the economy will never graduate, we only
taught children in and above the working class. Times have changed, and the poorest or
otherwise vulnerable are educated today. The move to emphasis on standardized testing has
made it more and more difficult for teachers to build lessons and adapt to the classroom students.
This improvement in teaching does not take into account the challenges that low-income students
have to contend with outside of school that hinder their academic ability and cause teachers to
pay attention.
More improvements to school policy have been made over the years than many people
might imagine. When a new politician takes office, it tends that they promote reform in
education to enhance services, what they think. Much has been said regarding this century's
talents, norms, and learning standards, but its primary focus has been to prepare for college and
career. The new demand for higher level learning and various early starting skills has increased
the pressure for further assessments and generated a learning style of "teaching to the test." New
reports of rapid growth in student poverty are brought to the attention of policymakers and prove
that they have done little but misidentify the issues. The aim of this paper is to persuade this
country's policymakers and citizens that education policy needs to be shifted to assist poor low-
income students.
Reporter Lindsey Layton tells us in a Washington Post news report that the majority of
public-school students come from low-income families" according to new research from the
2013 federal data (Layton). "Similarly, Southern Education Foundation reports show that "fifty-
one percent of pre-kindergarten through twelfth grade students were eligible for the federal
program that offers free or reduced lunches for students (Layton). Reports such as the one
presented by the Southern Education Foundation clearly show that poverty has become, and is
more critical than ever, the greatest barrier to educational advancement. Not only that, Janie
Boschma and Ronald Brownstein, prominent writers for The Atlantic, show that Most African
American and Hispanic students attend public schools in almost all major American cities, where
most of their classmates qualify as poor or low-income" (Boschma and Brownstein). If most of
their classmates identify as disadvantaged or low-income (Boschma and Brownstein). That poses
the issue of whether policymakers are implementing a purposeful structural economic and racial
isolation strategy. To support that, Sean Slade, author of the Huffington Post, makes a great point
by saying, "Coincidentally, it has been 51 years since we declared poverty unacceptable as a
nation." In his 1964 State of the Union Speech, it has been 51 years since President Lyndon B.
Johnson initiated the war on poverty (Slade). The pressure to attain high test scores has removed
choices that foster a love of learning and appreciate the special potential of a child. Particularly
in high poverty schools where these luxuries can't be afforded. States with high-poverty students
prefer to spend less per student... all but five states] spent less than the national average of
"In a Heather Long article about lunch shaming, she tells us This is mainly a question of
irresponsible parents (Long). This also goes to show that for them to excel, low-income students
do not receive the opportunities and get the support they need outside of school. These students
are slipping behind their peers and struggling to pursue an education more than ever. "College
graduation rates among students from low SES backgrounds are 14% compared to 60% of
students from high SES backgrounds in the study provided by Alanna Bjorklund-Young"
(Bjorklund-Young). "Also, most particularly from her studies, "When students were questioned
students from low-SES backgrounds expected to graduate from college. However, only a fifth of
low-SES students eventually graduated from college when researchers later revisited the same
students (Bjorklund-Young). In support of this, Kim Mihyeon's article tells us that "Renzuli and
Park (2000) showed that most of the talented students who dropped out of school were from low-
Knowing the numbers of students with low incomes and how they are disadvantaged
helps to assess the value of services and funding to support this demographic. Researchers used
longitudinal mixed effect modeling in the Jaret Hodges article to evaluate the development of
elementary students from low-income families on a state achievement test. "Camp attendance
had a positive effect on the test scores in both math and English/language arts," the findings of
this study revealed (Hodges 1). "Students from higher-income families had an average gain in
reading performance over summer enrichment programs to support them" (Mihyeon 88). For
most students with low incomes, fee-based options for enrichment programs are out of control.
This leads to a greater gap between low-income and high-income students' educational
the use of these camps. Studies have shown that they assist these students in standardized tests
and enhancing the curriculum as a whole. These camps are excellent opportunities for students.
The truth of the matter is easy to see and have all along been concealed in plain sight. It is
time to show people these problems that are negatively impacting our children's progress and
ultimately failing our future. Most educational systems are moved to the evaluation style of
teaching and make it more challenging for not only the students, but also the teachers. Teaching
the style of the exam and making it more challenging for not only the students but also the
teachers. The emphasis on stringent standardized testing has taken away the opportunity of the
instructor to construct lessons that relate to the learning abilities of various students. This makes
it difficult for students to be academically successful and it is expensive to place them at a huge
disadvantage with all the tools to help them progress. This country's leaders need to be made
aware of the negative effect that their hand has had on youth education. Teachers have been
trained for a cause and specialize in this area. Now that we've all been told, it's time to take a
stand against these corrupt politicians and begin to make Congress hear our voice. It is enough to
see reform introduced by a quick call from every last one of us all to our representatives that
prohibits these criminal behaviors of negligence. With the people, the strength of this nation
resides and is enacted by the people's voice. When our children and the future of our children are
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Boschma, Janie, and Ronald Brownstein. “The Concentration of Poverty in American Schools.”
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Hodges, Jaret, et al. “The Effect of an Out-Of-School Enrichment Program on the Academic of
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Ladd, Helen. “Student Poverty Isn’t an Excuse; It’s a Barrier.” Education Week, 10 May 2016.
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Layton, Lyndsey. “Majority of US Public School Students Are in Poverty.” The Washington
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Mihyeon, Kim, et al. "Program Development for Disadvantaged High-Ability Students." Gifted
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