In Korea, popular cartoon character is Dooly.

Since it is background of 1979,1980s

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because adult and old people can recall memories and children like it an account
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of its fun also its character looks funny.
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Such as my cousin, he likes dinosaurs. Dooly is a dinosaur, either. Dinosaur-like
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people like it, adult and old people like it.
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It is look like green dinosaur, but it is green-baby-brachiasaurus.And it is cute. It
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likes cool or chilly weather, as well it want to go to his hometown, South Pole. Why
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it is popular, the reason is the story is fun and character is cute, also dooly’s accent
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is very funny. I like dooly because it is cute and its accent and friends, also
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personality.Gil-dong-go’s accent and personality. I like many cartoons.
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In Korea, a popular cartoon character is Dooly. Since the background is in 1970s

and 1980s, adults and elderly can recall their memories. In addition, children like it
as it is fun as well as its character looks funny. For instance ,my cousin likes
dinosaurs. Dooly is a dinosaur as well. People of different ages like it.It looks like a
green dinosaur, but it is a green baby brachiosaurus. Moreover, it is cute. It likes
cool or chilly weather. Also, it wants to go to its hometown, South Pole. Why is it
popular? The reason is that the story is funny and the character is adorable.Also
,Dooly’s accent is very amusing. I like dooly because it is cute and I like its accent
and friends as well as its personality. Gil-dong-go’s accent and personality causes
laughter. I like many cartoons.