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Now delete the comma after the fourth word to totally change the meaning of this sentence:
Example 2:
Example 3:
Example 4:
Example 5:
It’s not just the addition or lack of commas that can change meaning. This example shows how the
placement of punctuation, such as full stops/periods, commas, and question marks, can turn something
that seems loving and innocent into something more sinister:
Dear John:
People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior.
Gloria
Now let’s see how those same words read with the punctuation in different places:
Dear John:
All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who are not like you.
Yours,
Gloria
Example 6
That first period (full stop) changes everything.
Example 7
Commas. Use them. No need to say any more… though the ‘Forgetfulness headache’ might be a cause
for concern.
While these examples are humorous, they also apply to the words that you write. For example:
No commas:
This initial workshop identified the work scopes and phasing generated several different sourcing
strategies for those work scopes and proposed selection criteria to compare the sourcing strategies to
best benefit the [project].
This initial workshop identified the work scopes, and phasing generated several different sourcing
strategies for those work scopes and proposed selection criteria to compare the sourcing strategies to
best benefit the [project].
Commas added (option 2 – multiple commas to separate phrases related to the workshop’s outcomes):
This initial workshop identified the work scopes and phasing, generated several different sourcing
strategies for those work scopes, and proposed selection criteria to compare the sourcing strategies to
best benefit the [project].
It’s likely that the final example was what the author meant, but a reader who wasn’t at the workshop
can only guess as to what happened there. If the author had added commas, the meaning would be clear
and unambiguous to any reader who didn’t attend the workshop.