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Legal Grammar Modifiers Nominalizations
Legal Grammar Modifiers Nominalizations
BY GERALD LEBOVITS
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n the last issue of the Journal, the 3. The eyewitness provided an iden- 2. The aforementioned parties are
Legal Writer reviewed important tification of the defendant. currently in court.
concepts in legal writing, includ- 4. The judge gave a ruling in favor 3. Henceforth, no water bottles are
ing the passive voice, writing in the of the defense. allowed in the courtroom.
positive, metadiscourse, and gender 5. The attorney has a preference for 4. Enclosed herewith is my applica-
neutrality. This column in our mul- Criminal Court cases. tion for the position of Associate
tipart series will review additional 6. A police officer’s role is the Attorney.
important concepts in legal writing: enforcement of the law.
nominalizations, legalese, cowardly 7. Parents have an obligation to take
qualifiers, and modifiers. At the end care of their children. Writing in legalese
of each section, you’ll be tested on 8. The attorney committed a viola- is a poor form
the concepts you’ve learned, or which tion of ethical rules.
you already know. Edit the sentences: 9. The interns took into consider- of writing.
Change the words, rearrange them, ation that the less they talk to
add or delete them. After you’ve edit- each other, the faster they’ll finish 5. Pursuant to CPLR 3211(a), Mr.
ed the sentences, look at the answers their work. Erikson has no standing to sue.
at the end of the article to determine 10. The requirement for the Associate 6. As stated heretofore, the police
whether you’ve edited them correctly. position is a Juris Doctor degree. had insufficient evidence to arrest
the defendant.
Nominalizations Legalese 7. Both parties accept the agree-
A nominalization occurs when an Writing in legalese is a poor form of ment’s terms and conditions set
added suffix turns a verb into a noun. writing. Not only are legalisms confus- forth herein.
Your writing shouldn’t have any ing, but they also have meanings you 8. Subsequent to the Supreme
nominalizations. They’re wordy and don’t fully grasp. Write in plain Eng- Court’s decision in Obergefell v.
abstract. Use a strong verb rather than a lish using simple and common Anglo- Hodges, every state recognized
noun. You want your sentence to show Saxon words. Writing in plain Eng- same-sex marriage.
action. Example: “The court reached the lish is formal and proper; avoid con- 9. The court requires written affida-
decision that. . . .” becomes “The court versational English. Eliminate words vits of each of the parties hereto.
decided that . . . .” Avoid buried verbs like “aforementioned,” “henceforth,” 10. More documents are required to
that end with these suffixes: “-tion,” “hereinabove,” “whereby,” and “said.” prove a bona fide marriage.
“-sion,” “-ment,” “-ance,” and “-ity.” If you aren’t sure whether a word is
A “be”- verb attached to a clause that legalese, ask yourself whether you’d Cowardly Qualifiers
ends in a preposition should be elim- say it in a formal speech. Because writ- Eliminate doubtful, hedged, timid, and
inated. Example: “Be in attendance” ing is planned, formal speech, you misleading phrases and words: “appar-
becomes “attend.” shouldn’t write it if you wouldn’t say ently,” “as far as I’m concerned,” “basi-
it. Use legal terms only when necessary cally,” “practically,” “it might be said,”
Exercises: Nominalizations for terms of art or words that can’t be “it seems,” “more or less,” “nearly,”
Rewrite the following sentences. translated into plain English. and “somewhat.” Don’t combine let-
1. The intern provided assistance to ters and numbers. Example: “four (4).”
the attorney. Exercises: Legalese Eliminate cowardly expressions: “at
2. The committee members said Rewrite the following sentences. or near,” “on or about,” and “on or
they’ll take my application into 1. Interns may dress casually on Fri- before.” These expressions should
consideration. days, as per the Judge. Continued on Page 57