Writing Task 2 Draft 1 Ozdemir

by KORAY NEDİM ÖZDEMİR

Submission date: 20-Nov-2020 09:01PM (UTC+0300)

Submission ID: 1452446354
File name: 46804_KORAY_NEDIM_OZDEMIR_Writing_Task_2_Draft_1_Ozdemir_280112_1782260645.docx
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Word count: 227
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He was adorable and

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him in the beginning.

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,though.

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about

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about
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nothing can

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.However,

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since

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.Therefore

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hobbies

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the

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is that

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at

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but

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is that

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is that

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is that

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usually

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when it comes to

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so
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