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So, in Part 1 I talked about the narrator, narrative voice, and point of view.
In Part 2 I went over how the third person objective perspective in Shirley Jackson’s “The
In this video, the last video for this lecture, I’m going to show you how Mary Shelley uses first
is probably the most famous chapter or scene in that very famous novel.
Most of you probably have a good idea about the story of Frankenstein, even if you haven’t read
the book.
One thing that people get wrong is that the monster isn’t called Frankenstein; the monster is
nameless. Frankenstein is the name of the scientist who creates the monster, a guy called
Victor Frankenstein.
The story, in brief, is about Victor and his determination to infuse life into dead matter. That’s
his mission. He finally manages to bring it about, but then he freaks out, disowns his creation,
and the rest of the novel details the aftermath of that. The monster starts to become self aware,
but he’s shunned by his creator and wider society, so be becomes angry and vengeful. He starts
to murder all of Victor Frankenstein’s family, including his wife, so the novel ends with Victor
always taken it to be a novel about the dangers of experimental science. Victor spends his
whole life trying to design something, without really thinking about the consequences. Then,
when he finally creates it, he’s horrified, and it goes onto create horrendous trouble in the
world.
o For example, lots of people mention the invention of the atom bomb when they read
Frankenstein. Einstein and another scientist called Oppenheimer dedicated their time
and intelligence to creating the world’s most devastating weapon. But when
Oppenheimer watched the first tests of the weapon in the Nevada desert, he was
horrified. He’s quoted as saying that he has become the destroyer of worlds. He would
go on to see the bomb dropped on Japan and the absolute devastation that caused.
Anyway, I asked you guys to read Chapter 5 of the novel, which is when the monster wakes up
for the first time. Victor has been spending his entire time, whole days and nights, trying to
bring his creation to life. He’s burnt out and frustrated. But then the creature opens its eyes.
Victor suddenly freaks out and runs away. His creation has become suddenly ugly and
terrifying to him. He wishes it gone and regrets everything he’s done. He actually suffers a
But what makes this chapter—and other chapters—interesting is Shelley’s use of first person
narration, and unreliable narration. We’re told this scene of the monster waking up through
the perspective of Victor, not the monster, so we’re given Victor’s perspective, which might not
comes to how the narrative perspective of the chapter influences out reading experience.
Okay, so Victor has been very hard to bring his creation to life. This creation has been
constructed out of the various body parts of recently executed criminals. He says: “With an
anxiety that almost amounted to agony, I collected the instruments of life around me, that I
might infuse a spark of being into the lifeless thing that lay at my feet.”
Then, in one of the best sentences in literature, Victor describes the creature’s eye opening: “It
was already one in the morning; the rain pattered dismally against the [window]panes, and my
candle was nearly burnt out, when, by the glimmer of the half-extinguished light, I saw the dull
o Can we just take a moment to appreciate Shelley’s writing here? First of all, she
creatures such a great atmosphere for this scene: it’s midnight, the rain is pouring
outside and pattering “dismally against the panes.” It’s dark and moody and spooky.
o She also uses setting as a metaphor here. The setting is being compared to the state of
Victor’s psyche. Remember that Victor has been working flat out. He’s tired, he’s
exhausted, and mentally fatigued. He’s burnt out. The setting echoes this: the rain is
described as dismal, his candle—like him—is nearly burnt out and it’s light, like his
woke, he thought the creature would be beautiful. He had carefully selected his features as
beautiful: flowing black hair, pearly white teeth, a muscular build. But then when the monster
actually starts to wake up, and he sees it move, his attitude changes, and he calls it a
Freud, called the uncanny. The uncanny is something that looks familiar to us, like
another human, but at the same time our brains and our instincts noticed something
o Like when we see a wax statue of someone. It looks real but our brains know it’s not real,
and that conflict creates an sensation of unease within us. Same thing when we see
human-looking androids move and talk. We think: huh, it looks human. But then it will
move in a weird way, like a weird head movement, and all of a sudden our brain’s like:
HELL NO! That’s ain’t real. Kill it with fire. Anyway, that’s the uncanny: something that
o Victor experiences that when the monster wakes. He thought it’d be beautiful and
human, but it’s not. It’s monstrous. “His limbs were in proportion, and I had selected his
features as beautiful. Beautiful! Great god! His yellow skin scarcely covered the work of
muscles and arteries beneath; his hair was of a lustrous black, and flowing; his teeth of a
pearly whiteness; but these luxuriances only formed a more horrid contrast with his
watery eyes, that seemed almost of the same color as the dun-white sockets in which
they were set, his shriveled complexion, and straight black lips.”
o So that’s terrifying.
Victor makes the sudden change he feels emotionally very clear. He once only thought of his
So Victor runs away from his creation. He goes to his room and they falls asleep due to all the
chaos and turmoil and emotional exhaustion. While asleep, though, he has some terrible
dreams. He dreams, for example, that he meets his fiancé, Elizabeth, in the streets, but as he
goes to embrace and kiss her, she turns into the corpse of his dead mother.
o That’s a freaky ass dream. But it’s also an example of foreshadowing, as the creature that
he’s created will go on to murder many of Victor’s friends and loved ones.
To make things even worse, he wakes up from that dream, only to find the creature standing
over his bed, which freaks Victor out, and he escapes out into the streets, and that’s how the
But it’s how Victor describes his encounter with his creation as it’s standing over his bed that I
want to concentrate on. We read this scene through the first person perspective of Victor. That
means we read and understand what’s going on only through his eyes. We’re not given an
insight into the monster’s thoughts and feelings at all, so everything is explained to us through
Okay, so let me read this section out, and then I’ll go over it a little.
remember: Victor is feeling some very powerful feelings about his creation. He once thought it
would be beautiful, but then the creature woke up and moved, and Victor now thinks of it as
ugly and monstrous. And it’s those prejudices of Victor’s that influence how he describes the
creature to us. He characterizes the creature in a certain way that influences how we, too, read
and understand the monster. But we must also keep in mind that what Victor is saying is
biased and possibly flawed. He hates the creature, so he will describe him in a hateful way,
which may or may not be accurate. Victor, then, is an unreliable narrator, because how he
describes the creatures is not accurate; it’s influenced by his own fears and prejudices.
For example, he describes his creation as a “wretch,” a “miserable monster,” and a “demoniacal
corpse.” The creature he’s created is made out of human parts, and it moves, and it can think,
and it can talk. But Victor instantly dehumanizes and shuns his creation by calling it a monster.
And we, the readers, start seeing the creature as monstrous, too, because we’re being told how
This dehumanization also occurs when he describes the creature’s features. He says, for
example, that the creature has eyes, “if eyes they may be called.” What the hell does that mean?
If eyes they may be called? Well, if they’re not eyes, what are they? They are the eyes of a dead
human, so they ARE eyes. But Victor is projecting his terror onto the creature’s features and
making it seem monstrous, thus influencing how we see the creature, too.
He also refers to the creature’s mouth as his jaws. The word mouth has a human connotation;
we refer to each other’s mouths. We don’t refer to each other’s jaws. We do, however, describe
the mouths of animal predators as jaws. A whole movie franchise was made out of the
monstrous connotation of that word. So, again, Victor is trying to paint the creature in a
monstrous way.
Same thing when Victor says the creature grins at him. His jaws opened and he grins at Victor
menacingly. At least that’s how we see things through Victor’s perspective. What if the creature
is standing over his bed because he wants to meet his creator? What if this supposedly evil grin
is an attempt at a smile? Victor doesn’t think of that; he just assumes the creature’s movements
Victor also freaks out when the creature reaches out to him. He says: “one hand was stretched
out, seemingly to detain me, but I escaped and rushed downstairs.” It’s the phrase “seemingly
to detain me” that you should concentrate on. That is a VERY telling statement. Seemingly to
detain me. So, in other words, Victor doesn’t know the truth of the creature’s motives; he just
instantly projects his fears and prejudices onto the creature’s motivations. Maybe the creature
is smiling and reaching out to embrace his creator, his father? In other words, the creature,
who can’t speak yet, like a baby, is holding out his arms to embrace Victor. He’s saying:
“Daddy! I love you!” But Victor, seeing how horrible the creature looks, just sees it as
monstrous and its movements and motivations as monstrous and threatening. So he denies his
In other words, then, we are told this encounter through the perspective of Victor, not the
creature, so we only get Victor’s perspective, and that perspective is unreliable, because it’s
dressed in a way that people associated with being a thug or gangbanger. Anyway, he put a
camera up in a lift or elevator and recorded the reaction of people as they got on with him. 9
times out of 10 the person—usually a white person—would instantly go to the other side of the
elevator and look terrified, as if they think this guy is going to rob or attack him. The point of
the experiment is to prove that we judge each other—as well as other things in the world—by
how they appear on the outside. This guy looks like a thug, and the media has done a very good
job painting associations of thugs and violence in our heads, so people will look at them and
react to them with fear and skepticism. It’s the same thing with victor and his creation: the
creature looks a certain way, so Victor thinks the creature is as evil or monstrous as it looks. We
I think, then, that Shelley uses first person perspective in this chapter—and other chapters in
the novel—for two reasons: 1) it creates great suspense, because we think it’s an encounter
between man and monster, but 2) she also does it to show how our own personal prejudices
and perspectives can influence how we see and understand things. Victor’s description of the
So here’s a challenge for you guys. It’s a voluntary challenge. If you do it, and you do a good job
of it, then you can get an extra 5% added to your final grade. If you want to, then, you can
rewrite the scene of the Victor’s encounter with the creature in his bed from the creature’s first-
person perspective. So tell the scene from the creature’s perspective, not Victor’s.
Okay, that’s it for this lecture. Remember that you have a quiz at 1oam on Friday. The next
lecture, on symbolism, will be uploaded on Monday, and remember, too, that you have a
midterm next week, Friday, May 29, which will be on the content of the lectures so far.