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Derek Lopez
Ms. Acosta
English 12
3 December 2020
Alcoholic Youth
Why are too many young innocent lives stolen each year due to underage drinking? Teens
and tweens all around the world consume alcoholic beverages under the age of 21. Many kids as
young as 6 are legally able to ingest alcohol. This behavior is very common and has even been
legalized in some countries and unnecessarily causes countless issues around the world.
Although some may say the drinking age should be lowered to 18, the drinking age should never
be lowered because it has a high probability of causing lifelong damage in a matter of seconds.
To begin with, alcohol damages neurons and can cause neuron death. It can also cause
shrinkage in the brain “which is reduced volume of both gray matter (cell bodies) and white
matter (cell pathways) over time” according to hazeldenbettyford.org. It can also cause other
damages such as “neurotoxicity, which occurs when neurons over react to neurotransmitters for
too long” according to hazeldenbettyford.org. To make matters worse, these problems are even
worse when faced with a teen or tween drinker. The human brain isn’t even fully developed until
the age of 25. These neurological diseases can cause issues in the advancement of the youth
brain. They can essentially put a halt in the overall growth of the brain. Drinking not only affects
the brain, but also heavily affects the liver. Prolonged liver dysfunction can also cause added
damage to the brain known as hepatic encephalopathy which can be fatal. Alcohol is a very
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Additionally, it has been argued that alcohol is no worse for young people than other
legal drugs. According to youthrights.org “As a drug, alcohol is relatively safe for humans,
compared to many newer prescription drugs.” To explain, there are other far worse drugs in the
sense that they can be more damaging to the human body yet they are still legal over alcohol.
Critics have a valid point about legal substances which can be even more harmful than alcohol
itself . Even though this is true, this fact does not and will never validate underage drinking.
There are other legal substances which can affect the body in worse ways, this fact doesn’t make
alcohol any healthier or better for the body is any way shape or form. Just because it's legal to
harm your body in one way, why make it legal and easier to do it in another way? Alcohol will
always have its negative short and long term effects and shouldn't be legalized for underage
In brief, alcohol is a very additive and damaging liquid that inevitably tears away brain
matter permanently. The consequences of alcoholic beverage consumption are already harmful to
adults. The situation only gets worse when a minor or underage drinker is faced with these
consequences. Not only does alcohol have its long term ramifications but also short term as well.
Alcohol changes the way one acts and can lead one to a life long road of pain or even cut it short
all together.
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Works Cited
pubs.niaaa.nih.gov/publications/aa63/aa63.htm.
“Alcohol Effects on the Brain.” Alcohol Effects on the Brain | Hazelden Betty Ford Foundation,
www.hazeldenbettyford.org/education/bcr/addiction-research/alcohol-effects-brain-ru-515
Author:
Joe Giessler. “How Does Alcohol Affect the Brain?” Ohio State Medical
www.youthrights.org/issues/drinking-age/reasons-to-challenge-the-drinking-age/.