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Steps:

1. Brainstorming:
2. Outline
Pro: Ban filters because: 
1. You don’t know how a person really is: For example: They had to search a person,
they took her photo from Instagram, and it didn’t look as her real self so they
couldn’t find her. 
2. They make people feel bad and insecure. For example: The % of young people
that committed suicide or hurt themselves these days is very high (110%).
Against: Don’t ban the filters because: 
3. They are just for fun. For example: I use the Paw Patrol filter with my daughter and
it’s really fun to see her dressed in different puppies. 
3. They make people feel better. For example: Filters hide imperfections in the skin. I
have chinese eyes and filters make my eyes look bigger. 
3. They make photography better. For example: You can change the color of the sky
and make it more interesting. 

6. Write the paragraph:

This threat is often overlooked by organizations. Hackers are attracted to social networking
sites because they see the potential to commit fraud and launch spam and malware
attacks.
I think that filters should be banned because they don’t help us know how a person really
is and they make people feel bad and insecure. You don’t know how a person really is. For
instance: they had to search a person, they took her photo from Instagram, and it didn’t
look as her real self so they couldn’t find her. They make people feel bad and insecure.
Social networks can represent a problem when there us abuse of users, for the example
there have been cases of pedophilia and kidnapping just for “meeting” on the internet,
which almost always ends badly
As for adolescents, the problem that could occur with social networks is that they can have
poor school performance because they spend many hours on social networks.

For example: The percentage of young people that committed suicide or hurt themselves
these days is very high (110%). Filters should be banned because it affects how we see
people and it makes them want to hurt themselves.

I think that filters shouldn’t be banned because they are just for fun, they make people feel
better and they make photography better. They are just for fun. For instance: I use the
Paw Patrol filter with my daughter and it’s really fun to see her dressed in different
puppies. They make people feel better, as filters hide imperfections in the skin. I have
chinese eyes and filters make my eyes look bigger. They make photography better. For
example: You can change the color of the sky and make it more interesting. Filters are just
a fun way to make people feel better and improve photography so they should be allowed.

7. Read again, check mistakes.


7. Submit paragraph.

Parts of an argumentative paragraph:


1. Introduction
2. Supporting ideas with examples
3. Conclusion

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