Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Section: ______
BUSINESS COMMUNICATION
CONCISENESS:
ii. Cars that are sold after January will not have a six-month warranty.
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e. Avoid over using “It is”, “it was”, “there is”, “there are” at the beginning of
sentences.
f. Whenever possible, use a verb in the present tense and active voice.
i. The total balance due will be found on page 2 of this report.
b. Use a shorter name once you have used the longer one.
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3. Include only relevant statements.
a. Stick to the purpose of the message.
i. It was a very busy Sunday for us this time. Mr. Hakeem’s wife was
packing up her things, putting all the needful in her suitcase. She couldn’t
find her hair-dryer and intends to borrow yours. Mr. Hakeem called the
airline office to inquire about the time of the flight. He wanted to know if
PK 707 bound for London would leave at 11 pm or later. They said it
would leave at 11 o’clock sharp. When he had confirmed the time, he asked
me to tell you that she would be coming on Monday morning. I hope it will
be a bright sunny day and you will take your car, drive to the airport and
collect her from there. It will be very kind of you.