Absalud, James Andrei F.

RES101-2 B3
SW#5
Improving Sentence Style:
Gantt Chart, Research Budget Preparation and Macroeconomics of Research

063:
Indefinite: It is the investigation of totals and the general business yield and strength of
countries; incorporates the examination of components like joblessness, swelling,
financial development and loan costs.

Clear: Macroeconomics is the investigation of totals and the general business yield and
wellbeing of countries; incorporates the examination of components like joblessness,
expansion, financial development and loan costs.

064:
Ambiguous: The exploration spending should be all together and should be in exact
structure.
Clear: The spending plan for the exploration should be all together and exact to have
the option to be ready for the exercises.

068:
Flowery: Macroeconomics is viewed as a critical factor for it helps in seeing how the
cutting-edge monetary framework functions, how it capacities and how the degree of
public pay is resolved.
Concise: Macroeconomics fills in as a significant part on how the cutting-edge economy
functions and decides the degree of public pay.
069:
Wordy: I will complete 10 meetings in Batangas; 10 meetings in Laguna; 10 meetings in
Cavite by me.
Concise: I will complete 10 meetings all alone in Batangas, Laguna and Cavite
075:
Awkward: Nobody should belittle the abilities of utilizing the Gantt outline since it has
constraints.
Corrected: No one should belittle the abilities of utilizing the Gantt outline since it has
constraints.
078:
Awkward: Predictable with the proposition's framework and subtleties.
Smoother: Remember to be steady with the proposition's diagram and subtleties.
081:
Shift in voice: As you keep on detailing an exploration financial plan, numerous issues
and mistakes make certain to be experienced.
Corrected: As you keep on forming an examination spending plan, you make certain to
experience numerous issues and blunders.
082:
Inconsistent: Construct your strategy, transform it into a bit-by-bit plan, and toward the
end follow back on the off chance that it suits your targets, is an approach to legitimate
define a spending plan.
Consistent: Construct your strategy, transform it into a bit-by-bit plan, and dissect your
goals to finish up, is an approach to appropriate detail a spending plan.