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Ocean climate is an important part of global climate. As the ocean occupies more than
70% of the surface on the Earth, slight changes of the ocean can have a huge influence on the
global scale. There are various factors influencing the marine environment, one of the most
important of which is biodiversity. Among those living in the ocean, though corals only cover
less than 0.1% space in the ocean, there are more than 25% species that maintain their lives on
corals1. More than the influences corals have on ecosystems, they also support a huge part of
human economics and produce a variety of food and medicines. However, even though they play
such an important role in the ocean, or global ecology, their population is experiencing a
significant decline due to multiple factors, such as the rising sea temperature and acidity. It is
admitted that people are working to recover the diversity and population of coral reefs, but not
only for the professionals but also the common people, knowing the reason for the declining
coral cover is a vital step to a better conservation method. Since 1980, the number of essays
explaining the situation of declining coral population and worse living environment has been
increasing, but most of them are published in professional journals. This led to the problem that
most people did not realize the decreasing population of coral and why the population is
reducing until recent years2. However, only if more people are protecting the ocean, will the
situation of coral survival get better. This essay aims to combine both academic and
non-academic resources, including journals, documentary and Youtube videos and to explain
what are the main factors threatening the survival of corals and what are the methods we employ
1
National Geographic. (2017, November 7). Coral Reefs 101 | National Geographic. YouTube.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZiULxLLP32s&feature=youtu.be
2
Madin, J. S., & Madin, E. M. P. (2015). The full extent of the global coral reef crisis. Conservation
Biology, 29(6), 1724–1726. https://doi.org/10.1111/cobi.12564
O. Hoegh-Guldberg and his companions wrote the article Coral Reefs Under Rapid
Climate Change and Ocean Acidification 3 to summarize the influence of greenhouse effects on
the ocean environment , thus finally decreases coral survival rates. This essay separated the
information into two parts, including the increasing sea temperature and acidity. While the
former change makes the corals and their symbiotic algae more fragile, the later one slows down
the build up process of coral framework made of carbonate. The numbers and charts used about
the pH value and temperature of the ocean related to carbon dioxide concentration is accurate
and precise, which gives the researchers a clear impression of how they response to each other
and how human activities finally have negative effects not only to forest and climates, which we
have direct relationship with, but also to ecology systems and biodiversity we don't have direct
contact with. The article explained that the concentration of CO2 in the atmosphere is
experiencing a rapid increase, which leads to global warming and ocean acidification. The article
also listed detailed data that for the last 420,000 years, the concentration of CO2 has never gone
below 240 μmol and there is a 0.7 ˚C sea temperature increase and a 0.1 pH unit decrease for
now. These data make the essay more persuasive but also prevent non-professional people from
reading it. A logical reasoning is built up in the article by explaining how the frameworks of
corals are fragile and sensitive to temperature and acidity changes, and only a slight increase of
sea temperature may lead to a larger population of coral reefs being fragile and dying4. Even
though this article contains a great detail on how the concentration of CO2 influences corals, as it
is published in professional ecology journals, it is hard for common people to have the patience
and knowledge for understanding it and connect the situation stated in the article to our daily
3
Anthony, K. R. (2016). Coral Reefs Under Climate Change and Ocean Acidification: Challenges and
Opportunities for Management and Policy. Annual Review of Environment and Resources, 41(1), 59–81.
https://doi.org/10.1146/annurev-environ-110615-085610
4
Gagnon, A. C. (2013). Coral calcification feels the acid. Proceedings of the National Academy of
Sciences, 110(5), 1567–1568. https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.1221308110
lives. Moreover, greenhouse gas is not the only factor for the decreasing coral population.
Besides the direct impact the ocean environment has on corals themselves, the population of
their necessary symbiotic algae is also reduced, weakening coral survival abilities.
In the essay written by the scientist Rochanya A. Generous, the symbiotic relationship of
coral reefs and algae, especially quorum is explained. As the algae produce nutrients and energy
with photosynthesis, the corals provide the algae with growing support. However, when the sea
temperature increases, not only do the corals themselves become more fragile, the symbiotic
algae may also suffer from the changing environment. The symbiotic relationship is broken, and
both species experience a crisis. There are more than 500,000 symbiotic algae cells in each coral
tissue per cm2 coral tissue, and the various pigments contained enable the corals to be colorful.
When the symbiotic algae die because of environmental change, the corals are bleached and may
die in months. This explains the other factor that may reduce coral population besides the direct
impact of rising ocean temperature and acidity. Similar to the first essay, though this article
provides a comprehensive explanation of how the symbiotic relationship affects corals, the
jargon and complex experimental methods prevent common people from understanding it.
However, different genres are designed to target different audiences as they use different words
explored the corlas in the deep ocean and tried to warn people about their reducing population5.
They recorded the process of coral bleaching because of the increasing sea temperature and gave
some comparison of the color difference between normal and bleached corals. They told people
even though people are taking greener actions, the corals will be endangered in 30 years without
5
Chasing Coral. 2021. Chasing Coral – A new Netflix Original documentary. [online] Available at:
<https://www.chasingcoral.com/#map> [Accessed 26 May 2021].
extra protections. Though there are no flourish sentences, those languages of real feeling and
scenes are the best to explain the current situation. Though the documentary is comprehensive, as
it lasts for about an hour, people may not be patient enough to watch all of it. Instead, some short
In the Youtube video posted by the coral conservation worker in the Great Barrier,
Johnny Gaskell, a marine biologist on the daydream island, the process of destruction and
recovery of the Great Barrier Reef and what are the methods used are introduced including
manufacturally cultivating the corals in the sea and in the pool6. To illustrate how external
damage may destroy the corals, he put the video of the gray ocean and lifeless after the cyclone
ground together with the video before it with vivid fish and coral activities, as well as the
colorful underwater city. Though the corals were destroyed by the cyclone but not human
activities, it is not hard to imagine what we have done to the croals: the area that we destroy is
far more than natural disasters. The strong contrast of both the color and the biodiversity between
the two videos gives people an impression of how the underwater world would be without the
liveliness of corals. Though this provokes people’s compassion and creates a sense of urgency to
take action to do something for the corals right away. The video also introduced two basic ways
of recovering corals after damage, which both require a great effort and take more than half a
year. This means that protecting the environment of the ocean is always easier than destroying it
first and recovering the corals artificially. As this video is designed for the public to know about
the corals, simple and cute animations and pictures are used during explanation to help
interpretation. Different from the academic essays or reviews, it does not contain the complex
jargon, statistical data and professional measurements;instead, the video employed a storytelling
6
Leisure, T. +. (2019, December 5). How Scientists Are Restoring The Great Barrier Reef | Travel +
Leisure. YouTube. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8hknaJQRh8s&feature=youtu.be
tone to attract the audience and introduce coral's basic information. The video also did not expect
the audience to have patience to have a deep understanding of what is the current situation of
coral reefs as the documentary. However, the shallow acknowledgement is enough to urge people
All of these resources are valid and able to attract their targeted audience by providing
enough information about the coral reefs separately. People can have some interpretation of the
current situation of coral reefs and how their population decreases. However, when their contexts
are combined, they are able to target a wider audience and enable them to be interested in and
willing to pay effort to know more about the corals. This essay not only provides detailed data on
how greenhouse gas is related to coral survival, but also gives some impressions on how the
corals are recovered and why it is difficult. Incorporating both academic and non-academic
resources, analyzing their limitations and advantages, a comprehensive recognition of how coral
population decreases is available to both professionals and common people. (Word count: 1357)
Reference
National Geographic. (2017, November 7). Coral Reefs 101 | National Geographic. YouTube.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZiULxLLP32s&feature=youtu.be
Madin, J. S., & Madin, E. M. P. (2015). The full extent of the global coral reef crisis.
Anthony, K. R. (2016). Coral Reefs Under Climate Change and Ocean Acidification: Challenges
and Opportunities for Management and Policy. Annual Review of Environment and
Gagnon, A. C. (2013). Coral calcification feels the acid. Proceedings of the National Academy of
Sciences, 110(5), 1567–1568. https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.1221308110
Chasing Coral. 2021. Chasing Coral – A new Netflix Original documentary. [online] Available
Leisure, T. +. (2019, December 5). How Scientists Are Restoring The Great Barrier Reef | Travel
+ Leisure. YouTube
.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8hknaJQRh8s&feature=youtu.be
Boyd, Janet. Murder! (Rhetorically Speaking)Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. ed. Vol.
Referenced for the method to analyze the tone of the video and journal cited, the
information are selected and organized according to the suggestions Murder! posted.