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SUMIYYA QAMAR

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ASSIGNMENT NO 2

To: Greta Targa (greta.targa@gamma.com)


From: Jim Morales (jim.morales@gamma.com)
Subject: REQ: Contact the Gamana Fall Training Conference’s speakers
Cc:
Bcc:

Greta,
We have been working hard to plan the Gamana Fall Training Conference in
Miami and its schedule needs to be finalized. We want to inform you the following
speakers lined up for training sessions.

Date Tuesday, November 12 Wednesday, November


13

Speaker Nicole Gold Anthony Mills

Topic Using E-Mail and IM Leading Groups and


Effectively Teams

Email address n.gold@etc.com


tony.mills@sunbelt.net.

Please send each of these people an e-mail and confirm the dates and topics by
September 1. Please call us if you have any questions.

Jim Morales

WEAKNESSES:
 Should not use slang words
 Do not use conjunctions in a business letter.
 Fix run on sentences.
 Bullet the questions for more clarity
SUMIYYA QAMAR
13574
ASSIGNMENT NO 2

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