Pre oral

Abstract Chapter 2

 Put details that is relevant Remove the second statement sa intro

 What is the study all about
RRL
 Inclusion
 Findings Brief and concise
 Recommendation
Overly bombard with so many literature and
 1page discussion
Research adviser- Maam Maya and separate the Findings, result, conclusion and
rest recommendation only (support the study)
Clinical Attire (picture) Synthesis
Intro Uniqueness of the study
Why conduct this study? Mahaba masyado
Get rid of the descriptor na dae man relevant
Smooth Transition dapat Chapter 3
Felt need Introductory statement every chapter
Don’t put “In conclusion” This study is anchored to the theories of betty
Last paragraph “intent and purpose of research” and roy
The theory of betty is that

Statement of the Problem Build connection between the two models-

establish connection sa variables
Long masyado ang statement and purpose
Remove black and white diagram
Technical writing
Last paragraph
Past tense please
Conceptual
Sought to and si comma
Dae clear garo concept map
Don’t start capital sa mga dimension na may
comma (and spiritual dimension) Kadakol arrow
Put in the box

Research hypothesis Rethink and revise

Null I, P, O much better with Feedback

Definition

Significance Ateneo de Naga

CHED/DePED Revisit the definition of terms

Operational and conceptual check Ibase sa definition

Chapter 4 Conclusion
Research design Coping sabihon si nag overlap
State what kind of quanti (descriptive Wag puro generic
quantitative design)
Remove however onwards
Recommendation
Why ateneo ilagay
Masyadong generic
Research Intrument
Indicate na self-made then discuss
Highlight na underwent validation
The first part is consist of survey questionnaires
which includes
Statistical
Very long
Formula can put in appendices
Likert chuchu and table can be

Chapter 5
Long introductory
Present first all quanti
Consistent with the sop
Bawasan si haralaba na excerpt

Table rather than a pie graph

Summary coping quanti (ayuson paka present
ning data tapos heading)
Table each

Intervention
More on dapat sa result daa